The Real Life Fight for Survival.

[$now4Ever]

This is a story i want to write and i thought i would take a shot at it, so here go's

The Real Life Fight For Survival


10:00 PM Richy walks into the house door, as he see's his father waiting on the chair with a smug
look on his face.
Dad: Where have you been! You are supposed to be home
when the street lights come on!
Richy:I was out, whats it to you!
Dad: Dont you raise your voice to me i make the rules and you will follow them!
Richy:Like thats gonna happen.
He comes running and slams Richy into wall causing him to fall to the floor.
Maybe that will teach you a lesson little TWIRP!
Richy get's up still having the breath knocked out of him.
Richy's mom stands at the door to scared to say anything, with a tear in her eye.
Dad: Let's go to bed honey.
They walk off to go to sleep.
Richy sits in his bed thinking, why am i taking this crap.
He thinks about all the bloody noses,broken bones and swelled up lips.
Richy:I dont have to stick around for this, i dont deserve this.
He then thinks about running away and finding somthing new for himself.
He quickly packs his things and is out by mid-night.
Richy darts down the road and finds some cover justin case he is mistaked for a gang member
and accused of breaking gang curphew.
A cop then walks by noticing Richy moving around by the dumpster.
HEY WHO IS BACK THERE!
Richy finds a bottle and saves it for the right moment.
The cop runs by not seeing Richy.
He heres footsteps behind him and turns around.
WHAM!!!!
Richy took a bottle to the cops face.
He than drags the body into the dumpster and walks away thinking to himself,
it's time for a new beginning.
I can be who ever i want to be and i have no limit!
He walks down the road thinking of the pssibilitys.

I know this is short but it is the beginning. Feedback pls.

[Cowboy Is Cool]

That's really good so far! I dig it! Please, continue.

[GramercyRiff99]

Wow, this one has some potential right here. Keep on writing this!

[$now4Ever]

Hey guys thanks i know it is short but it's the beginning it will be longer. But thnx for the feedback.

[Warriorsnest]

nice man. Cant wait for the rest

[YoungWarrior]

ROFL he hits the cop witha bottle and  hides his body for no reason

btw great story

[Colombian Warrior]

Great story. Richy must have had a real tough life.

I wonder what will happen next to Richy, so keep writing! 

[$now4Ever]

The Real Fight For Survival Capter 2.

Just to let you guys know Richy is 15


3 AM Richy is sleeping under a park bench when he heres loud sirens.
He knows his mom and dad found out he was gone and were looking for him, he thinks to himself
I am not going back there i will just get beat harder.
Knowing that he takes off into and alleyway and lays behind some trash cans.
He quickly falls asleep and dreams about life away from home.
Richy very startled wakes up to the sounds of a beating, he looks ahead to see 3 Alley Stalkers (a gang)
beating up on a Brown Towner (different gang).
He had heard about the Brown Towners and new they were a heavy set but the Brown Towner did not
look to be doing so well.
Richy thinks maybe he could help out, if he is gonna do anything in this city why not
beat up a few people first.
Richy grabs a brick and sneaks up on an Alley Stalker and BAM! smacks a brick on his head.
the 2 other Alley Stalkers look over to him and charge.
Luckily when Richy was 14 he took up Karate just in case.
He waited for the right moment and WHOOSH! he kicks one in the stomach knees him in the stomach and finaly elbowed him in the face.
The last Alley Stalker tryed to run but Richy caught up with him and triped him, making him land on his face and be knocked unconcios.
He walks over to the Brown Towner and helps him up.
Richy: You o.k. man?
Kenny:Yeah i think i will be alright.
Kenny: Whats your name man?
Richy: Richy and yours?
Kenny: Kenny
Kenny: That was some very nice fighting and they are a heavy set.
Richy: Thanks i took karate when i was 14
Kenny: Well  i want you to come with me to the Brown Towns hangout maybe our leader can help you into some colors.
Richy: Really? I never thought i was good enough for a gang.
Kenny: The way you saved me and the way you fought is good enough for me and probaly our leader.
Richy: I just ran away from home so i am looking for somthing new in my life.
Kenny:Well i'm sure that thin you are looking for has just been found.
Kenny: Come on man lets get to the hangout befor more of those Alley Stalkers get back.
They both walk a few blocks and enter a junkyard.
Richy:So wheres your hangout Kenny?
Kenny: Just relax it is hidden quite well.
Richy follows Kenny into a car and they sit.
Richy: Why are we sitting in a car?
Kenny: You'll see
The bottom of the car where there feet were at suddenly opens, they both jump in it.
Richy: Wow it's an underground hangout?
Kenny: I told you it was well hidden.
Kenny: Let's get over to the real part of the hangout.
They walk a couple of yards and see groups of BrownTowners.
Kenny: You see that guy over there by the table, he is our leader, Carlos.
Richy looks at Carlos and see's he is black and has large mucles.
Both walk over.
Carlos: What happened to you Kenny and who is the kid?
Kenny: I was attacked by three Alley Stalkers and this kid saved me and beat the hell out of them,
kung foo style.
Kenny: He said he would like to join the Brown Towners.
Carlos: If this is true then we will administer 1 more test for him.
Richy: I'll do anything.
Carlos: I want you to bring me back a fresh cops belt off a cop.
Richy got nervous but acting tuff sets out to do the duty.
Richy gets on the street and starts to look around. He see's 2 cops walking on the street.
He hides behnd the bushes as the cops are about to walk by.
He then throws a bottle int anothe part of the block and it breaks.
Cop 1: What was that!
Cop 1: Stay here i'll check it out.
Cop 2: Ok
The first cop leaves and when he is out of site Richy get's a chunky stick.
He slams the stick into the cops gut.
He gives the cops a few punches and kicks and takes the belt off of him.
Noticing the other cop walking back Richy drags the unconcious body behind another et of bushes.
He walks away scott free.
Walking back into the hangout Richy hands the belt to Carlos.
Carlos: Ok,Kenny show this kid his new colors.
Kenny: You got it man.
Richy puts his new colors on. It was a brown jacket that said BrownTownerRichy
I love it said Richy.
He thinks to him self, This is where i belong.

FeedBack please guys.

[swan_jax]

nice story man. i should try some fan fiction.

[KingOfTheWarlords]

Like your story man keep it up

[$now4Ever]

Part 3
This ending has somthing shocking to it.


Carlos: So Richy how does it feel to be a part
of the BrownTown gang?
Richy: Feels great and  thank you for theopritunity!
Carlos: No problem you proved you can handle your self out there.
Carlos: Hey Jimmy come here a minute i want you to meet someone
Jimmy: Who is the kid?
Carlos: The newsest edition to our family thats who, listen i want you to take Richy and break in his new colors with some good old stealin.
Jimmy: Cool Brown Cheif i been waitin for someone new to help me steal.
Richy: I'm ready!
They both walk out into the night and start talkin about how Richy ended up here.
Richy: So what first man?
Jimmy: First we hit up a store and then a house, it's my little way of breakin new Browns in.
Richy: Alright let's do this man!
Both walk up to a Diamond store tht was closed for the night.
Jimmy: You have to be very careful when you pick a lock because if you do it wrong the
alarm goes off and we get busted by the pigs.
Richy: Cool i'll keep that in mind.
Jimmy slowly picks the lock making sure every turn is on contact.
CLICK!!
Jimmy: And there it is the sweet smell of lock picking success.
Richy: Wow you got everything figured out man.
Jimmy: Yeah, now lets steal before someone see's us.
The two walk in  and see a frsh pile of Diamonds.
Richy: Jackpot we'll be swimmin in dough
in no time.
Jimmy put's his hand out and stops Richy from taking anything.
Richy: Whats up man let's get theese puppys.
Jimmy: You are so young and so nieve man, listen to me, the cops know about the BrownTown Gang right?
Well if we take to many the shopper will notice and call the police, then the pigs will be all over us.
Richy: Very slick thinking Jimmy i never thought of that.
Jimmy: It's all about street smarts Richy you have to know your enemys
and there weakneses.
Jimmy: Alright grab a few and let's get out of here.
Richy: Right
Jimmy: Alright now next thing is house robbing, you get this down and your set.
Richy: This will be cake i broke nto my dad's liqor cabniet
millions of times.
Jimmy: Wow those are hard to get into.
Jimmy: This is the street
Richy had noticed something about this street it seemed, famillar.
He saw a tree that had R carved in it
Thinking to himself THIS IS MY NEIGHBORHOOD!
Jimmy: And that is the house we gotta hit tonight.
Richy was shocked at what was in front of him, it was his own house!
Jimmy: Well let's get to work.
Richy followed Jimmy still shaking
Jimmy: You alright man?
Richy: mmmm........... Yeah

What do you think short but i was in a hurry.

[Cowboy Is Cool]

Man, this story keeps getting better and better!

[Colombian Warrior]

Yea The story is great. gets better and better. keep up the good work man!

[$now4Ever]

Part 4

Jimmy: Hey Richy you look a little pale there buddy whats wrong?
Richy: n..n..n..nothin man let's....... do this.
Jimmy: Alright man this is the funnest part of stealin and it's cool that theese people arent home.
Richy: What? There not home. Thats great.. i mean ok let's get to this.
Richy felt a sigh of releif knowing no one was home.
Jimmy: Alright let's do this now the best way to get in a house is through the
back door just incase someone is in the living room.
Richy: Smart.
Jimmy: Alright let's check it.
Of course the backdoor was open and both walked right in.
Jimmy: Ok same thing man we cant take to much ill check upstairs and you check down.
Richy: Alright man.
Jimmy runs up the stairs.
Richy starts to look down at a family portrait of him and his family.
Richy's thoughts: Man those were good times but i dare not go back to this old life.
He here's rumbling up stairs and starts to take a few things from the drawers,
he get's 23 dollars and a nice looking watch.
Jimmy runs down stairs. You ready Richie?
Richy: Yeah.. im ready.
As soon as they turn the knob on the back door they here tumblers unlock.
It was Richy's parents and his little sister.
Dad: Richy, where the hell have you been and what the heel are you doing with my watch.
and whos that dummy?
Jimmy: RUN!!!
They take off sprinting and here Richys dad say Richy i am gonna give you a beating!
He starts to pursue them and finaly catches up to the two.
He tackles Richy and starts puching him, breaking his nose.
Right as Jimmy notices Richy already puched and kicked him off.
Jimmy: Come one Richy kick his ass.
Richy: I hate you you stupid hoe.
Dad: What the hell is that jacket. You joined a gang?!!,
Now your going down you little shit.
Richy uppercuts his dad in the nose and blood comes pooring out.
The dad swings but misses followed by Richy kicking him in the stomache.
Richy runs to Jimmy.
Richy: Let's get out of here.
Jimmy: You got it.
As they approach the hangout Jimmy askes him how that guy knew his name.
Richy: Well....... He's my father.
Jimmy: WHAT! He is the biggest dude i ever seen and you took him on now i beleive
the hangout rumors about you Richy.
Richy: Well he use to pumble me thats why i ran away and
joined the BrownTown gang.

Sorry for the long wait got school lol.
Anyway hope you like part 4.

[Cowboy Is Cool]

Man, that guy what what was coming to him! I hate bad parents...

Great story, man! Please, keep it up!