Rememberance of Fox & Cleon
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Re: Rememberance of Fox & Cleon
Goshhh this getss me happy everytime i read this. I hope he inlcudes all the gangs from the film. lol
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Re: Rememberance of Fox & Cleon
Just started reading this chief, and its awsome, i hope it goes in for ever (which it wont(sigh))
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EVERYONE SING:
Goodbye My Coney Island, Baby ect.
EVERYONE SING:
Goodbye My Coney Island, Baby ect.
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Re: Rememberance of Fox & Cleon
Great story but can some1 please tell me why they were after just ajax and why they didnt go after any of the other warriors?
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Re: Rememberance of Fox & Cleon
hilarious,bro!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Part 7:They're Panzy's
(the next morning)
Rembrandt-(yawns)Oh hell Im tired.
(everyone but Rembrandt was asleep)
Rembrandt-Ohhh boy...
Ajax-(mumbling)Hey kid is that you?
Rembrandt-Yup.
Ajax-What you doin?
Rembrandt-Making a sandwhich.
Ajax-Tssss.
Cowboy-Hell Im tired.
Ajax-(whispering)Hey kid gimme a spoon and that tub of mayonaise!
(Ajax spreads some mayo on Cowboys hand and gets a feather and wipes it on his face
making Cowboy touche his face with the mayo hand)
Cowboy-Ohhh what the hell,is thiis...AJAX!!!!!!!!!!
(He wakes everyone up)
Cropsey-What the!
Swan-Ohh great.
Vermin-Whats goin on warchief?
Swan-Sit down and shut up Vermin.
Mercy-Swan,come outside with me.
Swan-What for?
Mercy-Just c'mon.
(Swan and Mercy walk out on the roof)
Swan-What you want?
Mercy-To be alone.
Swan-Well we're alone now.
Mercy-Come here.l
(Mercy pulls Swan towards her and they kiss)
Some dude on the streets-Aww how cute!Little warriors and his slut are kissing!
Carl-Who the he are those guys?
Vermin-The Panzers.Real weirdos.
Panzers Leader-C'mon Warriors!Les go!
Swan-Guys,go in the shed and get the stuff.Now.
(the Warriors get the hammers and the crowbars and bats)
Ajax-Get the fuck outta Coney.
Panzer-Die Warrior!(Pops out shotgun and shoots Ajax in the chest to the ground)
Rembrandt-Ajax!Ohh you faggots killed my friend!Now ya gonna DIE!!!!!
The fight started.Rembrandt went crazy on the dude who shot Ajax down.
Carl whacked someone in the head with a bat.Cowboy hit a guy with a bat the same way
the Fury did with him.Swan broke a dudes rib cage with a sledge hammer.Cropsey kept
kicking everyone in the croch.Vermin got kicked so bad thats at least a half gallon of bood
spilled from him.The Panzer who shot Ajax got the crap beat outta him by Rembrandt.
Cropsey got knocked up against the hangout wall and like 5 guys just ganged up on him.A
Panzer got a crowbar to the skull.Swan got beat up quite a whole lot,everyone kept
punching him and he was out of the fight.Cropsey kept getting hit in the face and stomach,
also making him out of the fight.Cowboy was basically the only survivor of the fight do he
took everyone out.Because of him the fight was over.
Mercy-Swan!(runs to Swan)
Ajax-Ohhh my chest...
Rembrandt-Ajax?Y-Y-Your alive!
Ajax-Yep.That was just a sleepy gun.
Vermin-Ohh shit..
Carl-Vermin...you ok man?
Vermin-Yeah im ok..
Rembrandt-Cropsey!
(Cropsey was on the ground breathing very little and trying to reach for some thing)
Cowboy-Lets go,move they guys in.Mercy,you help Swan.Vermin,Rembrandt,get Crop to
a doctor.Quickly.
Ajax-Why are you taking charge?
Cowboy-Swans choice.He said if he was ever dwn,I'd take charge.
(everyone does what Cowboy ordered.)
TILL PART 8!!!
(the next morning)
Rembrandt-(yawns)Oh hell Im tired.
(everyone but Rembrandt was asleep)
Rembrandt-Ohhh boy...
Ajax-(mumbling)Hey kid is that you?
Rembrandt-Yup.
Ajax-What you doin?
Rembrandt-Making a sandwhich.
Ajax-Tssss.
Cowboy-Hell Im tired.
Ajax-(whispering)Hey kid gimme a spoon and that tub of mayonaise!
(Ajax spreads some mayo on Cowboys hand and gets a feather and wipes it on his face
making Cowboy touche his face with the mayo hand)
Cowboy-Ohhh what the hell,is thiis...AJAX!!!!!!!!!!
(He wakes everyone up)
Cropsey-What the!
Swan-Ohh great.
Vermin-Whats goin on warchief?
Swan-Sit down and shut up Vermin.
Mercy-Swan,come outside with me.
Swan-What for?
Mercy-Just c'mon.
(Swan and Mercy walk out on the roof)
Swan-What you want?
Mercy-To be alone.
Swan-Well we're alone now.
Mercy-Come here.l
(Mercy pulls Swan towards her and they kiss)
Some dude on the streets-Aww how cute!Little warriors and his slut are kissing!
Carl-Who the he are those guys?
Vermin-The Panzers.Real weirdos.
Panzers Leader-C'mon Warriors!Les go!
Swan-Guys,go in the shed and get the stuff.Now.
(the Warriors get the hammers and the crowbars and bats)
Ajax-Get the fuck outta Coney.
Panzer-Die Warrior!(Pops out shotgun and shoots Ajax in the chest to the ground)
Rembrandt-Ajax!Ohh you faggots killed my friend!Now ya gonna DIE!!!!!
The fight started.Rembrandt went crazy on the dude who shot Ajax down.
Carl whacked someone in the head with a bat.Cowboy hit a guy with a bat the same way
the Fury did with him.Swan broke a dudes rib cage with a sledge hammer.Cropsey kept
kicking everyone in the croch.Vermin got kicked so bad thats at least a half gallon of bood
spilled from him.The Panzer who shot Ajax got the crap beat outta him by Rembrandt.
Cropsey got knocked up against the hangout wall and like 5 guys just ganged up on him.A
Panzer got a crowbar to the skull.Swan got beat up quite a whole lot,everyone kept
punching him and he was out of the fight.Cropsey kept getting hit in the face and stomach,
also making him out of the fight.Cowboy was basically the only survivor of the fight do he
took everyone out.Because of him the fight was over.
Mercy-Swan!(runs to Swan)
Ajax-Ohhh my chest...
Rembrandt-Ajax?Y-Y-Your alive!
Ajax-Yep.That was just a sleepy gun.
Vermin-Ohh shit..
Carl-Vermin...you ok man?
Vermin-Yeah im ok..
Rembrandt-Cropsey!
(Cropsey was on the ground breathing very little and trying to reach for some thing)
Cowboy-Lets go,move they guys in.Mercy,you help Swan.Vermin,Rembrandt,get Crop to
a doctor.Quickly.
Ajax-Why are you taking charge?
Cowboy-Swans choice.He said if he was ever dwn,I'd take charge.
(everyone does what Cowboy ordered.)
TILL PART 8!!!
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Re: Rememberance of Fox & Cleon
WOW for a second there i thought Ajax was dead with a shotgun shot. Also Cowboy Swans Choice? WOW wat a surprise.
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Re: Rememberance of Fox & Cleon
these are sweet.. what else can i say?
i have copied them all down and saved them on a word document maybe i could read them to my little brother he's 7 but has seen the movie and is addicted to the warriors
i have copied them all down and saved them on a word document maybe i could read them to my little brother he's 7 but has seen the movie and is addicted to the warriors

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Re: Rememberance of Fox & Cleon
nice new one,bro!!
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Part 8:Todays Weather:Hurricanes
(They next morning Cropsey came back from the dr. and Swan was all good)
Cropsey-My stomach feels loopy...
Swan-Cowboy come here.
Cowboy-Whats up Warchief?
Swan-Nice move tellin everyone what to do.And ya did good.
Cowboy-Thanks man.
Rembrandt-(to Ajax)Hey Ajax hows you stomach?
Ajax-Yeah Im good..
Rembrandt-I dont mean to brag but I seriously laid some on the dude who shot you!
Cropsey-Im gonna go outside...
Rembrandt-Oh no your not!Your gonna sit your fat ass right on the couch!
Cowboy-Hey Vermin,Rembrandt,come outside with me.
(The 3 Warriors walk outside to get the newspaper)
Vermin-Yanky Doodle went to town,ridin on a pony,stuck a feather in his hat and
Called it macaroni!Dodododododododododododo!!!
(when they are walkin back to the hangout,Cowboy spots an enemy tag over a wall)
Vermin-Holy shit!Its those dudes from Spanish harlem!
Cowboy-Yep,the Hurricanes.
(camera shoots to the tag)
Rembrandt-Lets go tell the guys.
(on they way there,their friend John,comes out all beat up and hands them an apron
with the name Al on it)
John-Dudes I dont know whats going on but your dude in the hardware store...
Vermin-No not Al!
Cowboy-Alright first they tag our turf and now they kill Al!Alright guys lets go tell the
others!
(they 3 Warriors run off to the hangout)
Vermin-Guys guys guys!The th-th-th...
Cowboy-Its the Hurricanes,they bombed our turf and look at this.(tosses Al's apron to
Swan)
Swan-Alright,this time its gonna be a change.Rembrandt,get alot of paint,Cropsey,Ajax,
you guys trash everything in sight,I'll help.Others,you cover Rembrandt and dont get
wrecked.Lets go,Mercy,c'mon.(grabs Mercy's hand and they walk out of there)
(all the Warriors leave to the subway going to Spanish Harlem)
Rembrandt-By the looks of this,thank God I brought 10 cans of paint!
Cropsey-Ajax,Swan, Les do it bitches!
Cowboy-C'mon guys,lets go.
(Swan,Cropsey,Mercy and Ajax start trashing everything while the others start tagging
walls)
Cropsey-Man I love trashin stuff!
Ajax-Well I love trashin peoples faces!
Cowboy-Wow!Nice tag Rembrandt!
Carl-(talking to a pizza vendor guy on the street)Yeah that'll be on pepperoni.Thank you
Vermin-Dang man your always hungry!
Cropsey-So-rree!
(Just then,some Hurricanes come walkin down the area Rembrandt was taggin a wall)
Hurricane-Well well look at these no-cojones bastardos!
Rembrandt-(in Spanish)You filthy pigs!Once we're done with you-
Hurricane-(in Spanish)Ohh shut up you dipshit Warrior main!My Hurricanes are gonna-
Rembrandt-(in english)Eat spray paint!(sprays a mist of paint making the 6 Hurricanes lose
it)
Carl-Kick ass!!
The 4 Warriors all knee the Hurricanes in the face.Then they kicked them in the balls
while they were down.Then they ran away.
Vermin-Guys!Guys!The Hurricanes!
Cowboy-Hey wait!Wheres Rembrandt?
Carl-REMBRANDT!!
(when the Warriors got there,the other Hurricanes were gone,and Rembrandt was lying
on the ground,minutes away from death)
Swan-Rembrandt,Rembrandt...
Rembrandt-(lying on the ground with his lips trembling as he speaks)Guys,g-g-go w-w-itout
m-m-me...
Swan-Guys c'mon pick him up.
(the guys carry him to the subway)
Swan-Mercy get him to a doctor.Its near the hangout.We'll be back.
(then Mercy puts Rembrandts arm around her shoulder and they get on the subway)
Swan-Lets move.
(everyone runs off in a pack)
Till part 2 to part 8!
(They next morning Cropsey came back from the dr. and Swan was all good)
Cropsey-My stomach feels loopy...
Swan-Cowboy come here.
Cowboy-Whats up Warchief?
Swan-Nice move tellin everyone what to do.And ya did good.
Cowboy-Thanks man.
Rembrandt-(to Ajax)Hey Ajax hows you stomach?
Ajax-Yeah Im good..
Rembrandt-I dont mean to brag but I seriously laid some on the dude who shot you!
Cropsey-Im gonna go outside...
Rembrandt-Oh no your not!Your gonna sit your fat ass right on the couch!
Cowboy-Hey Vermin,Rembrandt,come outside with me.
(The 3 Warriors walk outside to get the newspaper)
Vermin-Yanky Doodle went to town,ridin on a pony,stuck a feather in his hat and
Called it macaroni!Dodododododododododododo!!!
(when they are walkin back to the hangout,Cowboy spots an enemy tag over a wall)
Vermin-Holy shit!Its those dudes from Spanish harlem!
Cowboy-Yep,the Hurricanes.
(camera shoots to the tag)
Rembrandt-Lets go tell the guys.
(on they way there,their friend John,comes out all beat up and hands them an apron
with the name Al on it)
John-Dudes I dont know whats going on but your dude in the hardware store...
Vermin-No not Al!
Cowboy-Alright first they tag our turf and now they kill Al!Alright guys lets go tell the
others!
(they 3 Warriors run off to the hangout)
Vermin-Guys guys guys!The th-th-th...
Cowboy-Its the Hurricanes,they bombed our turf and look at this.(tosses Al's apron to
Swan)
Swan-Alright,this time its gonna be a change.Rembrandt,get alot of paint,Cropsey,Ajax,
you guys trash everything in sight,I'll help.Others,you cover Rembrandt and dont get
wrecked.Lets go,Mercy,c'mon.(grabs Mercy's hand and they walk out of there)
(all the Warriors leave to the subway going to Spanish Harlem)
Rembrandt-By the looks of this,thank God I brought 10 cans of paint!
Cropsey-Ajax,Swan, Les do it bitches!
Cowboy-C'mon guys,lets go.
(Swan,Cropsey,Mercy and Ajax start trashing everything while the others start tagging
walls)
Cropsey-Man I love trashin stuff!
Ajax-Well I love trashin peoples faces!
Cowboy-Wow!Nice tag Rembrandt!
Carl-(talking to a pizza vendor guy on the street)Yeah that'll be on pepperoni.Thank you
Vermin-Dang man your always hungry!
Cropsey-So-rree!
(Just then,some Hurricanes come walkin down the area Rembrandt was taggin a wall)
Hurricane-Well well look at these no-cojones bastardos!
Rembrandt-(in Spanish)You filthy pigs!Once we're done with you-
Hurricane-(in Spanish)Ohh shut up you dipshit Warrior main!My Hurricanes are gonna-
Rembrandt-(in english)Eat spray paint!(sprays a mist of paint making the 6 Hurricanes lose
it)
Carl-Kick ass!!
The 4 Warriors all knee the Hurricanes in the face.Then they kicked them in the balls
while they were down.Then they ran away.
Vermin-Guys!Guys!The Hurricanes!
Cowboy-Hey wait!Wheres Rembrandt?
Carl-REMBRANDT!!
(when the Warriors got there,the other Hurricanes were gone,and Rembrandt was lying
on the ground,minutes away from death)
Swan-Rembrandt,Rembrandt...
Rembrandt-(lying on the ground with his lips trembling as he speaks)Guys,g-g-go w-w-itout
m-m-me...
Swan-Guys c'mon pick him up.
(the guys carry him to the subway)
Swan-Mercy get him to a doctor.Its near the hangout.We'll be back.
(then Mercy puts Rembrandts arm around her shoulder and they get on the subway)
Swan-Lets move.
(everyone runs off in a pack)
Till part 2 to part 8!
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Re: Rememberance of Fox & Cleon
Awsome Story which i said in my prevouis post. Love the title- Todays weather: HURRICANES
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Re: Rememberance of Fox & Cleon
Joey's sent in the next long installment.
Todays Weather:Hurricanes part 2:A Brothers Death
(As the Warriors were walkin through Span. Harlem the thoughts of
endin up like Rembrandt swam through their minds)
Vermin-Hey guys,did you ever notice how its always Rembrandt?
Ajax-What do ya mean?
Vermin-What I mean is do you not notice how Rembrandt always warns us
us before we do somethin,its Rembrandt who always gets wrecked,but never
gives up!I mean like you could shoot him in the chest and he'd still live!
Cropsey-Yeah I guess your right.
(just then,a unknown person sneaks behind Vermin,throws him in a car,and his buds
flip over the car thrice)
Carl-Vermin!!!!!
Gunshot-BAM BAM!!(P.S thats a real gunshot,not a tranquilizer like in the past story!)
Hurricane with gun-Warriors,you think you could just come down 'ere and make fun
of us!We the Hurricanes ma'n!!!!
Carl-You sons of bitches!
(sadly,Carl runs to the car but gets shot to DEATH!,yeah thats right,death!)
Cowboy-NO WAY NO WAY NO WAY!!!!!!!!
Hurricane-Anyone want some o' this?
Swan-Lets move Warriors,lets go home...
Hurricane-Yeah you pussies!
Todays Weather:Hurricanes part 2:A Brothers Death
(As the Warriors were walkin through Span. Harlem the thoughts of
endin up like Rembrandt swam through their minds)
Vermin-Hey guys,did you ever notice how its always Rembrandt?
Ajax-What do ya mean?
Vermin-What I mean is do you not notice how Rembrandt always warns us
us before we do somethin,its Rembrandt who always gets wrecked,but never
gives up!I mean like you could shoot him in the chest and he'd still live!
Cropsey-Yeah I guess your right.
(just then,a unknown person sneaks behind Vermin,throws him in a car,and his buds
flip over the car thrice)
Carl-Vermin!!!!!
Gunshot-BAM BAM!!(P.S thats a real gunshot,not a tranquilizer like in the past story!)
Hurricane with gun-Warriors,you think you could just come down 'ere and make fun
of us!We the Hurricanes ma'n!!!!
Carl-You sons of bitches!
(sadly,Carl runs to the car but gets shot to DEATH!,yeah thats right,death!)
Cowboy-NO WAY NO WAY NO WAY!!!!!!!!
Hurricane-Anyone want some o' this?
Swan-Lets move Warriors,lets go home...
Hurricane-Yeah you pussies!
Todays Weather:Hurricanes part 2:A Brothers Death
(As the Warriors were walkin through Span. Harlem the thoughts of
endin up like Rembrandt swam through their minds)
Vermin-Hey guys,did you ever notice how its always Rembrandt?
Ajax-What do ya mean?
Vermin-What I mean is do you not notice how Rembrandt always warns us
us before we do somethin,its Rembrandt who always gets wrecked,but never
gives up!I mean like you could shoot him in the chest and he'd still live!
Cropsey-Yeah I guess your right.
(just then,a unknown person sneaks behind Vermin,throws him in a car,and his buds
flip over the car thrice)
Carl-Vermin!!!!!
Gunshot-BAM BAM!!(P.S thats a real gunshot,not a tranquilizer like in the past story!)
Hurricane with gun-Warriors,you think you could just come down 'ere and make fun
of us!We the Hurricanes ma'n!!!!
Carl-You sons of bitches!
(sadly,Carl runs to the car but gets shot to DEATH!,yeah thats right,death!)
Cowboy-NO WAY NO WAY NO WAY!!!!!!!!
Hurricane-Anyone want some o' this?
Swan-Lets move Warriors,lets go home...
Hurricane-Yeah you pussies!
Cowboy-How come we're leaving?
Swan-We'll come back,they wont chase us.
(or so they thought...)
Cropsey-Hey guys,do feel that?Do you think...(looks behind to see 50
Hurricanes running towards them)AHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!
(the Warriors start running until they end up above the Hurricanes)
(Back to the car scene,so the car is flipped over,Vermin dead.Or so you thought!
He was slowly crawling out the opened window)
Vermin-G-g-guys?Anyone?(looks at Carls dead body)Carl!N-no way!N-n-no!
(now back to the subway where the other dudes were)
Swan-Guys,light your molotovs.
(They each lit 2 molotovs and threw them at the Hurricanes,making them cry and
"accidentally" run into the passing train...one things for sure,they're gonna be alot
thinner now!)
Swan-lets go guys.
(they leave Span.Halrem without thinking about Vermin)
Till part 9!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Todays Weather:Hurricanes part 2:A Brothers Death
(As the Warriors were walkin through Span. Harlem the thoughts of
endin up like Rembrandt swam through their minds)
Vermin-Hey guys,did you ever notice how its always Rembrandt?
Ajax-What do ya mean?
Vermin-What I mean is do you not notice how Rembrandt always warns us
us before we do somethin,its Rembrandt who always gets wrecked,but never
gives up!I mean like you could shoot him in the chest and he'd still live!
Cropsey-Yeah I guess your right.
(just then,a unknown person sneaks behind Vermin,throws him in a car,and his buds
flip over the car thrice)
Carl-Vermin!!!!!
Gunshot-BAM BAM!!(P.S thats a real gunshot,not a tranquilizer like in the past story!)
Hurricane with gun-Warriors,you think you could just come down 'ere and make fun
of us!We the Hurricanes ma'n!!!!
Carl-You sons of bitches!
(sadly,Carl runs to the car but gets shot to DEATH!,yeah thats right,death!)
Cowboy-NO WAY NO WAY NO WAY!!!!!!!!
Hurricane-Anyone want some o' this?
Swan-Lets move Warriors,lets go home...
Hurricane-Yeah you pussies!
Todays Weather:Hurricanes part 2:A Brothers Death
(As the Warriors were walkin through Span. Harlem the thoughts of
endin up like Rembrandt swam through their minds)
Vermin-Hey guys,did you ever notice how its always Rembrandt?
Ajax-What do ya mean?
Vermin-What I mean is do you not notice how Rembrandt always warns us
us before we do somethin,its Rembrandt who always gets wrecked,but never
gives up!I mean like you could shoot him in the chest and he'd still live!
Cropsey-Yeah I guess your right.
(just then,a unknown person sneaks behind Vermin,throws him in a car,and his buds
flip over the car thrice)
Carl-Vermin!!!!!
Gunshot-BAM BAM!!(P.S thats a real gunshot,not a tranquilizer like in the past story!)
Hurricane with gun-Warriors,you think you could just come down 'ere and make fun
of us!We the Hurricanes ma'n!!!!
Carl-You sons of bitches!
(sadly,Carl runs to the car but gets shot to DEATH!,yeah thats right,death!)
Cowboy-NO WAY NO WAY NO WAY!!!!!!!!
Hurricane-Anyone want some o' this?
Swan-Lets move Warriors,lets go home...
Hurricane-Yeah you pussies!
Todays Weather:Hurricanes part 2:A Brothers Death
(As the Warriors were walkin through Span. Harlem the thoughts of
endin up like Rembrandt swam through their minds)
Vermin-Hey guys,did you ever notice how its always Rembrandt?
Ajax-What do ya mean?
Vermin-What I mean is do you not notice how Rembrandt always warns us
us before we do somethin,its Rembrandt who always gets wrecked,but never
gives up!I mean like you could shoot him in the chest and he'd still live!
Cropsey-Yeah I guess your right.
(just then,a unknown person sneaks behind Vermin,throws him in a car,and his buds
flip over the car thrice)
Carl-Vermin!!!!!
Gunshot-BAM BAM!!(P.S thats a real gunshot,not a tranquilizer like in the past story!)
Hurricane with gun-Warriors,you think you could just come down 'ere and make fun
of us!We the Hurricanes ma'n!!!!
Carl-You sons of bitches!
(sadly,Carl runs to the car but gets shot to DEATH!,yeah thats right,death!)
Cowboy-NO WAY NO WAY NO WAY!!!!!!!!
Hurricane-Anyone want some o' this?
Swan-Lets move Warriors,lets go home...
Hurricane-Yeah you pussies!
Cowboy-How come we're leaving?
Swan-We'll come back,they wont chase us.
(or so they thought...)
Cropsey-Hey guys,do feel that?Do you think...(looks behind to see 50
Hurricanes running towards them)AHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!
(the Warriors start running until they end up above the Hurricanes)
(Back to the car scene,so the car is flipped over,Vermin dead.Or so you thought!
He was slowly crawling out the opened window)
Vermin-G-g-guys?Anyone?(looks at Carls dead body)Carl!N-no way!N-n-no!
(now back to the subway where the other dudes were)
Swan-Guys,light your molotovs.
(They each lit 2 molotovs and threw them at the Hurricanes,making them cry and
"accidentally" run into the passing train...one things for sure,they're gonna be alot
thinner now!)
Swan-lets go guys.
(they leave Span.Halrem without thinking about Vermin)
Till part 9!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The one and only!
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Re: Rememberance of Fox & Cleon
reding this makes me smile!!



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Re: Rememberance of Fox & Cleon
Love it except for one thing he gives it away to qucik saying yes he dead and for real. Should have said blood was poring out of his muth and no breath coming out. However i ant the writer so keep going Joey. RIGHT ON 

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Re: Rememberance of Fox & Cleon
i cant get enough of this!!!!!!!!! Hurry up and write more!!!!