The End Of The Warriors
The End Of The Warriors
June 22, 1980: Coney Island Home of the Warriors
The Warriors were called for a big meeting by Swan their new Warlord, they had fought their rivals the Mongrels a night before and Finally ended their lives. The Warriors offically had Coney Island.
Swan: "Warriors Gather Round" they all stopped what they were doing and looked at their Warlord
Swan: "Warriors this is a tough decision for me to make but...... I resign as Warlord". Commotion and talk went through the Hangout questions Why? and How Come? Swan finally got them to calm down.
Swan: "Warriors, this life is not for me, I can't be living on the streets my whole life, I'm sorry but this is good bye".
That was the last time anyone saw Swan.
How do you like it? It just came to me right now
The Warriors were called for a big meeting by Swan their new Warlord, they had fought their rivals the Mongrels a night before and Finally ended their lives. The Warriors offically had Coney Island.
Swan: "Warriors Gather Round" they all stopped what they were doing and looked at their Warlord
Swan: "Warriors this is a tough decision for me to make but...... I resign as Warlord". Commotion and talk went through the Hangout questions Why? and How Come? Swan finally got them to calm down.
Swan: "Warriors, this life is not for me, I can't be living on the streets my whole life, I'm sorry but this is good bye".
That was the last time anyone saw Swan.
How do you like it? It just came to me right now
The End Of The Warriors
Coney Island, New York June 23, 1980
Swan had offically left the Warriors the day before, with everyone still confused, Snow 2nd in Command took the role as Warlord.
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Everyone in the hangouts conversation was about Swan leaving and Snow becoming Warlord. Now everyone respected Snow but he was no Swan.
Snow: Warriors!
No one listened, everyone was talking still until Cowboy Whistled and everyones attention was finally on Snow.
Snow: Okay Warriors we've got ourselves a problem those dumb ass Turnbull A.C.'s thought it was a funny idea to mark on our turf and beat up half of our Newbloods on parol. So now were gonna get our revenge
Snow: Cowboy, Vermin, and Rembrandt will lead a group of 20 into Pelham and take out their stores and Tags. While the rest of us Me, Cochise, and Ash will lead the newbloods onto the Turnbull's Hangout and take them out while gaining half of Pelham.
The Warriors Were Cheering 'Cause tonight their was going to be a Blood Bath in Pelham.
Swan had offically left the Warriors the day before, with everyone still confused, Snow 2nd in Command took the role as Warlord.
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Everyone in the hangouts conversation was about Swan leaving and Snow becoming Warlord. Now everyone respected Snow but he was no Swan.
Snow: Warriors!
No one listened, everyone was talking still until Cowboy Whistled and everyones attention was finally on Snow.
Snow: Okay Warriors we've got ourselves a problem those dumb ass Turnbull A.C.'s thought it was a funny idea to mark on our turf and beat up half of our Newbloods on parol. So now were gonna get our revenge
Snow: Cowboy, Vermin, and Rembrandt will lead a group of 20 into Pelham and take out their stores and Tags. While the rest of us Me, Cochise, and Ash will lead the newbloods onto the Turnbull's Hangout and take them out while gaining half of Pelham.
The Warriors Were Cheering 'Cause tonight their was going to be a Blood Bath in Pelham.
The End Of The Warriors
I want to know your opinion of the story honestly so i can decide whether to keep on writing the story.
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i like it! keep writing buddy 

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Great Cowboy79 this is your first story isn't it?
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This is great dude, one of the best cause its nice and simple and not long winded, keep it up 

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EVERYONE SING:
Goodbye My Coney Island, Baby ect.
EVERYONE SING:
Goodbye My Coney Island, Baby ect.
The End Of The Warriors
Thanks for the Great Comments!
Chapter 3: Blood Bath in Pelham
Coney Island, New York June 23, 1980 2:00
Cowboy, Vermin, and Rembrandt took their troops into Pelham a hour ago and were supposed to call when they took out their tags and protection out to lure the Turnbull's away from the hangout and make them vulnerable.
Cochise: When are the guys going to give us the call!? I want some action!
Ash: Calm Down Cochise!!!
Snow: Both of you settle down!
*Ring* Snow answered the phone
Snow: Cowboy?
Cowboy: Yeah, Warlord we took out their protection and tags. We took out their LT.'s
Snow: Okay
Snow hanged up the phone
Snow: Send the Word we're going to Pelham and taking out these Turnbull's
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The Train ride to Pelham was quiet, no one talked. They could die the Turnbull's were a really heavy set.
When The Warriors got off the Train Snow told Cochise and Ash to get the troops to the Turnbull hangout while Snow was going to meet up with Cowboy, Vermin and Rembrandt.
When Snow got out of the station he heard some commotion and yells. He ran over and saw Cowboy getting beat up by 2 Turnbull's, Vermin was taking on three at a time and Rembrandt was getting beat by 3 other Turnbull's. Snow trying to make it easier took out the Turnbull beating Cowboy and Smashed his head right in to the wall blood splattered everywhere, he then proceed to help Vermin by Take out his Switchblade that he got from Swan and Slitting one of the Turnbulls Throats. When they were done with them blood was all over them.
Cowboy: Thanks Warlord.
Vermin: Yeah, man I almost got killed
Snow: Let's go meet up with the rest.
Rembrandt, Snow, Vermin and Cowboy finally got there they saw that The Warriors and Turnbulls were Scrapping they had lost a lot of men so did The Warriors.
Rembrandt took out his spray can and spray painted one guy in the eyes and broke his neck, while Cowboy used a pipe and started smashing Turnbull's like he was playing Whack a Mole. Vermin was smash heads like crazy by the end of the Fight he had Blood all over his hands.
Snow took Cowboy and Vermin inside the hangout to take out the Turnbull Leader Spike
Snow busted down the Door
Snow: YOUR GONNA WISH YOU NEVER MESSED WITH THE WARRIORS!!
Spike: What you gonna do about it Warrior!?
Snow tackled the Turnbull to the ground and punched him, but Spike kneed him in the balls and made him get off.
Spike then proceeded to take out a Switchblade and tired to stab Snow but ended up getting his hand stuck in a wall so Snow took out his Switchblade and stabbed Spike in the Throat.
Snow: Let's get back to Coney, Rem Mark the spot
When They left the Hangout Pelham was dripping in Warrior Red.
Chapter 3: Blood Bath in Pelham
Coney Island, New York June 23, 1980 2:00
Cowboy, Vermin, and Rembrandt took their troops into Pelham a hour ago and were supposed to call when they took out their tags and protection out to lure the Turnbull's away from the hangout and make them vulnerable.
Cochise: When are the guys going to give us the call!? I want some action!
Ash: Calm Down Cochise!!!
Snow: Both of you settle down!
*Ring* Snow answered the phone
Snow: Cowboy?
Cowboy: Yeah, Warlord we took out their protection and tags. We took out their LT.'s
Snow: Okay
Snow hanged up the phone
Snow: Send the Word we're going to Pelham and taking out these Turnbull's
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The Train ride to Pelham was quiet, no one talked. They could die the Turnbull's were a really heavy set.
When The Warriors got off the Train Snow told Cochise and Ash to get the troops to the Turnbull hangout while Snow was going to meet up with Cowboy, Vermin and Rembrandt.
When Snow got out of the station he heard some commotion and yells. He ran over and saw Cowboy getting beat up by 2 Turnbull's, Vermin was taking on three at a time and Rembrandt was getting beat by 3 other Turnbull's. Snow trying to make it easier took out the Turnbull beating Cowboy and Smashed his head right in to the wall blood splattered everywhere, he then proceed to help Vermin by Take out his Switchblade that he got from Swan and Slitting one of the Turnbulls Throats. When they were done with them blood was all over them.
Cowboy: Thanks Warlord.
Vermin: Yeah, man I almost got killed
Snow: Let's go meet up with the rest.
Rembrandt, Snow, Vermin and Cowboy finally got there they saw that The Warriors and Turnbulls were Scrapping they had lost a lot of men so did The Warriors.
Rembrandt took out his spray can and spray painted one guy in the eyes and broke his neck, while Cowboy used a pipe and started smashing Turnbull's like he was playing Whack a Mole. Vermin was smash heads like crazy by the end of the Fight he had Blood all over his hands.
Snow took Cowboy and Vermin inside the hangout to take out the Turnbull Leader Spike
Snow busted down the Door
Snow: YOUR GONNA WISH YOU NEVER MESSED WITH THE WARRIORS!!
Spike: What you gonna do about it Warrior!?
Snow tackled the Turnbull to the ground and punched him, but Spike kneed him in the balls and made him get off.
Spike then proceeded to take out a Switchblade and tired to stab Snow but ended up getting his hand stuck in a wall so Snow took out his Switchblade and stabbed Spike in the Throat.
Snow: Let's get back to Coney, Rem Mark the spot
When They left the Hangout Pelham was dripping in Warrior Red.
Re: The End Of The Warriors
So do you guys want me to continue with the story or not? I want to know your opinon before i continue.
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Re: The End Of The Warriors
Good story, but you're story ties in with the video game, right?
Well, if so. Ash died before the meeting FYI. Other than that good story.
Well, if so. Ash died before the meeting FYI. Other than that good story.

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Re: The End Of The Warriors
Yeah,I can understand Snow as Warlord.
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