My first Story (Mainly Practise!!)

Ash-Mckean · Post by **Ash-Mckean** » Tue Jan 03, 2006 9:21 pm

PLOT: The Turnball A.C'S are getting bigger and have decided to go into East Coney to annoy The Warriors all for fun and to become legends therself. PART ONE!

STORY:

Swan and Cochise stepped outside into the cold air of Coney Island,There home, They viewed the horizon of the sea and the iconic Wonder Wheel which has been on there doorstep for years. They walked down the clanging metal steps and onto the rough surface below

Cochise: Yo Warchief,what the f**k are we actually doing i mean its freezing cold.
Swan: We got news from the Riffs
Cochise:Yer, and whats that?
Swan: The A.C'S are having a trip into Coney
[Cochise's facial expressions says it all]
Cochise: What do those wimps want, they actually think they can move into the BIG Coney!.
Swan: Relax and shut up, We just looking around to see what we can find.
Cochise: Ok Warchief

[They start walking around climbing fences into the next street]

Cochise: Look over there!
Swan: What?
[Swan has a look at the Liquor Store]
Swan: Jesus!, Come on.
[The store has been trashed and glass has gone everywhere,The owner runs up to them]
Owner: These skinheaded f**k's came into the store and trashed the place! [He starts to cry] It was my life that store
Swan:Dont worry you will get it fixed.
Owner: I f**kin hope so
[Owner walks off]

Cochise: Yo warchief..
[Swan turns around to see three A.C'S walking there way]
A.C: Hey hey hey look at what we have here.[Laughs]
2nd A.C: HEY WARRIORS YOU GOT ENOUGH ROOM TO LET US COME IN

Swan: Cochise?
Cochise: Yer?
Swan: We aint runnin this time
[They run over to the 3 A.CS]

Swan: Get outta Coney you little s**ts!
{Swans grabs a turnball by the hair and throws him head first into the wall, Cochise gets kicked in the face and falls over, The A.C takes out a switchblade and is about to slash him in the face. Swan runs up and Slidetackles him]
A.C: Ahhh! you stupid jerk!
Cochise takes the other one and throws him into a bin and keeps stomping on it]

Swan[Sweating]: Come on we gotta warn the others that they are coming!
[They run down the streets jumping bins and fences and run into the Hangout]

Cochise: Yo guys, you wont beleave what is about to happen..

THE END OF PART ONE
(i gtg so i couldnt finish it cya guys)

Tell me what you think it was like.

ZombiePunk · Post by **ZombiePunk** » Tue Jan 03, 2006 9:41 pm

Its good! i like it!
but about grabbing the Turnbull by the hair...i dont think they have hair...

Continue please!

cowboy rules · Post by **cowboy rules** » Tue Jan 03, 2006 10:05 pm

that is good but what zombie punk said is true.they are skinheaded f-....well lets leave it at that lol

Ash-Mckean · Post by **Ash-Mckean** » Wed Jan 04, 2006 4:40 pm

Yeah damn just saw that

i think about the plot to continue

Manson-Cryptorchild · Post by **Manson-Cryptorchild** » Thu Jan 05, 2006 3:55 am

ZombiePunk wrote:Its good! i like it!
but about grabbing the Turnbull by the hair...i dont think they have hair...
Continue please!

Yeah, true; lol; I was thinking the same thing. But otherwise it was great! =D> I'll now be reading the Part 2; hope it makes a great continue to this one!! [[Which I'm sure it will!

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