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I've been sent this from Joey Tuero:

name of story:REMEMBERANCE OF FOX &CLEON


(Cowboy,Vermin,and Rembrant run off under the boardwalk,laughing and jumping.)
Mercy-"So uhh....Swan, when you gonna show me that "real action"?"
(Swan walks away toward the subway with Mercy following behind him)
(Swan stops in front of the subway and then pops out his knife)
Mercy-What are you doing?...Swan.
Swan-He was the best,I wish those Riffs didnt show up on the sand,I'll get the Rogues back.


(Cowboy,Vermin and Rembrant walk towards Swan and Mercy)
Vermin-Warchief,whats wrong?
(Ajax comes walking from the police station obviously)
Rembrant-Ajax, what the hell you doin here?
Ajax-Ehh..I beat the shit out of the dipshit who kept me locked up.
Cowboy-You mean the warden?
Ajax- Shut up wise ass!Heya, I'll be right back
(Ajax walks toward a girl whose most likely his girlfriend which he is breaking up with)

Swan-Hold up.
(Swan walks toward the spot where he threw a knife at luther with the Warriors behind him)
Rembrant-I wish Fox and Cleon were here.
(Swan kneels down and buries the knife)
Swan-This knife is a monument to remember those two.
Vermin-God,man,me and Cleon went way back if it wasnt for him we wouldnt be here.
Mercy-Yeah and also if it werent for him,you guys wouldnt have walked through the Orphans
turf,and I wouldnt have met Swan and you guys.
Ajax-So what are we gonna do?
Swan- I'm probaly gonna take off.If I do Cowboy,you take over.
(shoots to Ajax who seems displeased)
Rembrant-Hey guys I'll be back in about an hour.
(Rembrant runs of to the dome where the big meeting was held)
Rembrant-Oh shit Cleon!
(Cleons body was there so Rembrant carries his dead body back to the beach where everyone looks in sadness as they look at his body)
Vermin-Oh,god!I cant do this !
(Vermin gets teary eyes and runs by the subway and sit down holding his legs)
Mercy-I feel so bad for Vermin.
(Mercy runs over to Vermin to comfort him)
(Everyone looks at Swan as he takes off Cleons headpiece)
Ajax-Are we gonna bury him ?
(Swan nods.Minutes later Cleons body is covered in sand)



(The Warriors head off from the beach)

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thats pretty good but next time make it longer
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its pretty good but how could rembrandt get cleons body if everyone is on the beach in coney and cleon is killed on the other side of the city? overall though pretty good
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That was good, make another one though, telling what happened next.
I told you they were wimps..............

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Joey continues his story ...

Part 2 to Rememberance of Fox & Cleon :One More Loss



(after Swan buries Cleons body they walk toward the pier until a Rogue interupts)

Cropsey-You Warriors are dead meat!

(Cropsey flashes a knife until Ajax tackles him)

Cochise-What the hell makes you think one little faggot of a Rogue can take us on??

(Cowboy and Vermin bring Cropsey to Swan)

Swan-Any Rogues left on the sand?

(Before Cropsey could answer three rogues and Luther come flipping over the subway)

Luther - Oh my g-g-god if thats the W-warriors th-th-then who are the dudes who r-
r-recked us ?!

Cropsey- Those are the Riffs you-

(Luther shoots Cropsey in the arm)

Cropsey-You f-f-fucking fa-

(Luther shoots Cropsey in the thigh)

Vermin-You.You ruined everything,you ruined yourself, you ruined the whole takin
over New York and most of all you ruined the Warriors.

(luther wimpers and tries to shoot Vermin but finds he has no bullets in his gun)

Luther- uwhaaaat!!!!no one insults th-the Rogues like that!And besides..

(Cropsey gets up and gives Swan his knife meaning hes leaving the Rogues with Luther gettin
all emotional)

Swan-Go take Cropsey and get him a vest.

(all the Warriors exept Mercy leave)

Swan-You man your finished you and those other junkie fucks are done.


(Swan walks up to Luther ,kicks his face in the sand and puts the knife in his back)

Swan-Now your finished.

some other Rogue on the ground-Im gonna tear you in half.

(those Rogues on the ground get up to wreck Swan but he takes them out)

Swan-Lets go.

(Swan and Mercy head back to the hangout)

Rembrant-Hey Swan,Mercy what happened with the what-you-ma-call-its?

Mercy-Swan took 'em out.

(Swan and Mercy kiss and then move to the couch...still kissing)

Cropsey-Hey Cochise,show me around Coney.

(Cochise and Cropsey leave but seconds later come back telling every one to come outside)

Swan-Whats up???

Cropsey-Dude the furies are, here the furies are HERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

(The Warriors go outside and wreck the furies)

Rembrant-Snowwwww!!!

(Rembrant runs to Snowball which was wasted by the lead furies)

Cropsey-I never even knew the kid.

(shoot back to hangout where Swan torches a cot and Rembrant lays Snows body on it)
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this is turning out like the warriors/hamlet or something everyone is dying
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Joey sends the next part:

part 3:And Then There Were Seven


(shoots to hang out were Rembrandt is walking around the wonder wheel where
a few druggees with spray cans are snuffing out a Warriors burner)

Rembrant-Hey you fags what the hell are you doing?

druggee-oh nothin man,just tagging the fuckin Warriors burner.

Rembrant-Oh you snuffing MY gangs burner?

(Rembrant picks up a wrench and knocks them all to the ground)

Rembrant-Thats for Snow.

(While respraying the burner.Rembrant sees Vermin,Cropsey, and Ajax
running from some cops)

Police Officer-Your going down.

(the cops arrested them but did see Rembrant because he was behind the
trash cans,seconds later Mercy comes running and sees Rembrant and then
stays with him.)

Mercy-Oh my god oh Swan-

(Rembrant covers her mouth to shut her up)

Rembrant-Im gonna let go of your and your going to tell me what the hell
is going on.

(Mercy elbows his chest making him let go of her)

Mercy-Swan and Cowboy(inhaling)they were running from the cops,
they got busted.Oh hold me.

(Mercy sort of likes grabs on to Rembrant)

Rembrant-What happened to Cochise?

Mercy-I dont know I was with him then he told me to take off.I saw
running...toward the...pier.Oh my god,he probaly jumped off,
'cause there was like 2 cops and 1 car chasing him so..

Rembrant-Holy shit,okay,uhhh stay here im gonna free the rest.

Mercy-No Im going with you,If any thing happened to Swan and if you got
wasted I wouldnt know what happened.

Rembrant-Ok fine lets go Mercy.

(the two walk off near the boardwalk and find two cops,Swan and
Cowboy fighting until Rembrant head smashes the cops' into a wall)

Cowboy-Holy shit thanks man.

Rembrant-hey come here lets look for Cochise.

(they walk toward the surf(where the sand meets the ocean)and
see Cochises body)

Swan-Cochise c'mon wake up.

(Cowboy splashes cold water on Cochise and wakes him up)

Cochise-What the hell!!!

Mercy-alright guys,stop the pussycat fight

(Mercy walks up to Rembrant and kisses him on the cheek)

Mercy-Swan this guy is a true soldier.

Swan-Why,what Rembrant do?

Mercy-He protected me.

(Swan gives Rembrant and Mercy a wierd look)

Swan-You two go ahead,Rembrant come here lets talk.

(Swan and Rembrant walked behind everyone and Rem told
Swan about what happened)

Cowboy-Vermin,Cropsey,Ajax?What the you doing on the ground
heeheehee!!!!!!!

Ajax-When newby lets me out Im gonna wreck you,and then rip
that hat into little bite-sized pieces!!

(Cowboy gets really pissed off and as soon as Ajax got up they
were at it)

Vermin-Come on guys stop it!!!!

(the fight stopped when they were both holding each others
necks)

Cropsey-All right we should be getting back home...

(the Warriors head home to the hideout)



THE END
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This is a good story I hope he keeps on writing more for the story.

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Joey sends in part 4:

part 4:Here We Go Again


Cochise-Hey man I promised Cropsey that me and Ajax would
show him around.

Swan-Ok.so like where you going,Gunhill?The Bronx?Cause if
your going that far then take some back up.

Ajax-Back up?!Tss all you need is me Cropsey,Ill be a one man army.

(the 3 Warriors leave the base.)

Mercy-Hey Swan come out on the roof,I wanna talk to you .

(3 minutes later Swan goes out to talk to Mercy)

Swan-What'd you want?

Mercy-oh nothing really I wanted you and me to be alone.

(Mercy grabs the collar of Swans vest and kisses him)

Cowboy-Hey guys look at Swan and Mercy at it.I mean like
last night they like hated each other.

Rembrant-(to himself)You lucky bastard Swan.

(Vermin opens the door to the roof silently and the Warriors watch
thier warchief and girl kiss)

Cowboy (in a babyish voice)-Aww.. How cute!Swany Wanny and Mercy
Percy smooching.(normal voice)What bullshit!

Swan-Hey Cowboy...come here..

Cowboy-Yes?

(Swan gives Cowboy a noogie and then throws his his hat off the roof)

Cowboy-Aww man...

(Cowboy climbs down the fire escape to get his hat)

Vermin- hey Cowboy get your ass up here your on TV!

Cowboy-I am?

(Cowboy races up the fire escape)

Cowboy-Move out the way i wanna see!

(Cowbow turns and looks at the Warriors as everyone even Swan is laughing)

Vermin-Sorry man I just wanted to see your reaction.

Mercy-Hey Swan.. you got a bed room in here?(she winks at Swan)

(Rembrant walks up to Swan and Mercy)

Rembrant- of course we do Mercy its right over there.

(as the two walk through the doors the Warriors root for Swan quietly)

Vermin-Oh man Swan must be in a good mood now!

Rembrant-Yeah.

(2 hours later Cochise,Cropsey and Ajax come back sort of like cut up)

Cropsey-Guys....uhhnn..the ACs took us uhhhnnn...

(all three of them fall to the ground)

Rembrant-Guys! Swan,Mercy get out here!!

(The 2 rush out from thier love making)

Swan-Get 'em on the couch.

(Swan,Vermin and Rembrant put fumes by the three Warriors to wake them up)

Rembrant-Crop Crop,wake up,alright who did this ?

(Cropsey points at the doors)

Cropsey-Them.

Cowboy-Holy shit.

Turnbulls Leader-Hey Warriors,we aint finished yet!

Ajax-Im gonna uhhhnnnnn..tear you (tries getting up) in half Turnbulls!

Turnbull-Na thanks whitey,we already wrecked you.

(the 3 Beaten up Warriors overpower thier pains and get up willing to fight)

Rembrant-Lets go..Pussies

(everyone starts wrecking everyone Cowboy crowbars an AC in the back
while another AC throws a knife in Cochises arm)

Swan-Rembrant!Protect Mercy!(Throwing a bat at a Turnbulls stomach)

Cropsey-Kill em ALL!!!!!!!

Ajax got seriously wrecked but still didnt give up.The lead AC got stabbed,hammered
and thrown out of a window and didnt get messed up as in dead.Cowboy fought so god
damn good his hat didnt fall off.Cochise showed off some good gangland stlye kung-fu.
Swan grabs a black AC and says,"sorry 'bout the great depression!"The fight took about
an hour but of course the Warriors won.

Mercy-oh my GOD!

Vermin- that was a tough one.

Cropsey-oh man.Im fuckin numb everywhere.

Swan-Its allright.

(Mercy goes up to Swan and hugs him)

Ajax-What are we gonna do with these dead wimps?

(Next thing you see is all the Turnbulls in the truck being driven off the pier)

Swan-Let move.


The Warriors go back to the base



the end....until part five
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great story warchief, hope to see some more soon :D
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That was really good, just one thing though, you spelled Rembrandt wrong. Cant wait to see another.
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Joey has emailed part 5 of his story.

part #5:Just Gimme One Minute

(All the Warriors are relaxing,Vermin tellin jokes,Ajax is lifting wieghts)

Cropsey-Hey Swan,is it all right if I go out on patrol later on?

Swan-Maybe(takes sip of beer)if you bring some soldiers and gear.

(Cropsey nods and walks away)

Ajax-101,102,103,104,(crash!)

Cochise-What the shit what that?

(Rembrandt walks to the window and find to see the Orphans)

Rembandt-Hey,Swan,Mercy your old school friend and his buds are here.

Sully the Orphans Leader-(srceamin)Hey MERCYYYY!!Babe WE ARE STILL
TOGETHER!!!

Ajax-Just gimme one minute to waste these wimps.

Cowboy-Ok.

(Ajax walks outside and like fifty seconds later comes in with Sullys body)

Cochise-Yeah man,a new record!Now what are we gonna do with them sacks 'o
shit?

Jesse:2nd in command-Warriors,come here wanna make a-

Vermin-Grease em All!!

Pow,Crash,Bang!Rembrandt spray painted Jesses face in red,giving Ajax an advantage to
nail him in the kisser.Swan played kongos on a soldiers kidneys.Cropsey plants down some
good moves like drop-kicking an Orphan in the shins.Mercy knocked a guy out with a box
that would carry something like moonshine.Cowboy got some cuts and bruises but still
managed to kick ass.An Orphan broke a chair by smashing it on Cochises head.Some Orphans
got thrown out the window two stories down into the concrete.But yet again,the
Warriors won the fight.

Jesse(weakly)-You Warriors are so uhhn wasted.

Cropsey-Oh boyyy!!!!

Ajax-What you so happy about?

Cropsey-That was my first fight without getting knocked unconcious or down
on the ground!

Mercy-Can I do the honours for Sully?

(Swan dumps Sullys body in a dumpster and Mercy throws a molotov at him)

Vermin-Mmm mmm mmm mmm mmm!(roasting marshmallows over the burning
body)these marshmallows are damn GOOD!!

Vermin-Marshmallow?Marshmallow?(handing out burning marshmallows on sticks)

Cochise-Those guys were E-A-S-Y easy!

(the next morning everone is sleeping except Rembrandt who is cleaning up
from the Orphan fight)

Vermin-(mumbling in sleep)oh baby oh no come here...lizzies,Cyrus oh man!

(Vermin wakes and walks to the fridge and take out a case of beer)

Rembrandt-Hey Vermin..

Vermin-Hey kid,hey how long you been cleaning up?

Rembrandt-Till uhhh basicly the whole time.

Vermin-The whole time?Dude you need a break,come here there's six beers
and two guys,c'mon lets talk.

(the two talk for an hour or 2 until a noise a block away wakes up the entire gang)

Ajax-What the hell was that?

Swan-Lets go.

(the walk down the block in the freezing cold at 3 in the morning)


Vermin-Whos that?

Mercy-Oh,thats just the lead orphan lieutenant malcom.

(the Warriors go back to base)

Cropsey-Dude that was a waste of time(yawns)huh wake me up when the pizza gets
here mmk?

(45 min later Tonys Stuffed pizza comes and Vermin wakes Cropsey up by throwing
a large-ass phone book at Cropseys nuts)

Cropsey-Ohh you som biiyyiitch!!!In the ballsack!

(Cropsey run to the pizza and gets like seven pieces and puts some pepper on it
and starts eating)

Cowboy-Shit man look at Cropsey!



(the Warriors have a good time and relax)


THE END TILL PART 6
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I like it 8)
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Joey has once again knocked out the next part in quick time:

Part 6:One Far Jump


(that same morning when the pizza came Cropsey ate like 10
pieces and then put down his plate)

Cowboy-Hey Vermin,toss me a beer!

Vermin-Oh sorry,me and Rembrandt drank it all while you were
snoozing.

Cowboy-Dont we have another case in the fridge?

(Vermin opens the fridge,picks a beer out and throws it to Cowboy
who barely misses it)

Cowboy-Thanks.

Ajax-Hey,there any more pizza left?

Rembrandt-Yeah.

(Ajax serves himself to five pieces)

Mail dude-Heya i got a note for an Ajax?

Ajax-Yeah what is it?

(Ajax looks at the note and looks up to find the police)

Police Officer-Hi pal

Cochise-Leave us alone.

(Ajax pushes a cop to the ground making an entrance for him to run away)

Swan-Cowboy,go with Ajax!

(the cops chase after him but see that there is "one far jump"that they
couldnt make except for Ajax and Cowboy)

Cowboy-Ya'll think you could catch me now?

(the cops look in frustation as the other Warriors push the cops off the
building)

Ajax-I was sick of running from those wimps!

(more cops come from the building that Ajax and Cowboy are on)

Ajax-Cowboy,go jump across I gotta settle this alone!

Cowboy-No c'mon lets go!

(Cowboy jumps across but find to see that Ajax is on the ground in cuffs)

Cowboy-I gotta go back!

(Cowboy and a cop both jump and Cowboy makes it across but the cop falls
just like the other cops)

Swan-Cowboy!

(Swan jumps across and takes out the cops and uncuffs Ajax and Cowboy)

Cowboy-Thanks Swan.

Swan-Lets jump.

(the 3 jump across)

Cropsey-You guys ok?

Ajax-Yeah,is my pizza still there or did Cropsey eat it?

Vermin-Cropsey ate it

Cropsey-Ajax I swear I didnt!

(Ajax punches Cropsey in the upper arm)

Cochise-Dude my head hurts because of that damn Orphan.

Rembrandt-Why what happened?

Cochise-That dumbass smashed a chair over my head.

Vermin-Oh yeah,what did ya do with them Rembrandt?

Rembrandt-Oh I uhhh Oh yeah,I carried each one by one and dumped them
off the pier.

Ajax-Tssss...Wimps!



(the warriors enjoy thier day)

till part 7
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Post by Matt S.F. »

A great story cant wait for the next part
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