Nazzac: The Living Legend

[nazzac]

Another part of the first chapter.
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The train set of, it was a boring journey, nobody spoke. The train pulled over at 22nd station on the east side of Little Italy, where the Killers hangout is.
When they walked through the door, everyone was chatting and having fun. The radio was on, but not on the gang station, so Tiger turned it over.
" What the Fuck" Shouted a vioce
" I was listning to that" Shouted another
" Shut up" Tiger shouted
" Alright boppers, i have word about a gang. A small time outfit from little Italy. We have hard they wasted a few Electric Elimanators last night. Good job, but the bad news is that they are after you Killers, armed with wepons the Elimanators are coming to get you. How many? alot. Be prepared, Be prepared." The DJ said.
" Man, they are coming in numbers" A voice shouted in the crowd of 50
" we won't stand a chance" Another voice said
" But we will meet them none the less" Dave said while walking out of the crowd
" This is the chance for us to get on the map" Nazzac said
" Yeh, your right. This is our chance to prove we are a forced to be wreckened with" Dave said smiling while he said it.
The room suddenly went silent
" what, and risk our lives" TY shouted " Proves how much of a clueless fuck u are dave"
" Fuck you" Dave shouted, while grabbing TY. Nazzac and Tiger broke them up, the hatred was clear.
" The last thing we need is to fight. We can beat these fuckers. We proved that"
" And how" Canaan asked
" Don't worry i have a plan" Nazzac said....

[nazzac]

Everyone went to their positions. On 3rd street Canaan and TY were on oppersite roofs with cocktails. Nazzac and Tiger parked themselves oppersite corners futher ahead. Rayo would provide the bottle distraction while hiding above the restraunt, just 2 places down from the two Cocktail men.
" Set" Nazzac shouted
" we are set" Everyone replied.
On the oppersite side of Little Italy were the rest just waiting. 10 were left guarding the hangout with flares in case they are raided.
at 9:30pm a train pulled up and 50 Electric Elimanators came out.
" Ok split up, we go east and you go west" Said one of the Elimanators
They splitted upm 25 east and 25 west. Made it easier for the Killers.
Once the 25 who went west came close to Canaan and TY, they threw the cocktails at the 25. The screams we heard by the other 25 who turned around. Dave and Adam then threw their cocktails and all 50 were burning.

But suddenly a red flare went up. The guards were in trouble.

[Dud]

So I figured I better catch up. Once again, some good chapters and I didn't think that the feud between the Killers and Eliminators was finished. Pretty smart plan by the Killers, but with the whole flare thing going on, I guess the Eliminators brought more than 50, or something. Whatever it is, I'm lookin' forward to seeing what's going down; I'm sure it'll be good.

All going well so far mate, keep it up! 8)

[nazzac]

The Killers on the roff quickly climed down, and ran back to the hangout. But when they got there the hangout was on fire, and there was no sign of any Electric Elimanators.
" Fuck this" Tiger shouted angrily
" Where is everyone" TY asked
" Up in flames i guess" Adam said sadly.
" I don't think so" Dave said while walking to a nearby wall.
Dave picked a note up of the wall.
It read:
We have taken one of your men. He is fine, but the rest are dead. We want to settle the feud once and for all. We want you to give us a ransom of $100,000.
" Fuck man" Scott said
" Scott" Shouted Dave
" Yes sir" Scott said while walking up to Dave
" Scan the area, see if they are close" Dave ordered
Scott set of on his search
" Where we go now?" Asked Nazzac
" I got a appartment" TY said
" We will go there then" Dave said
" What about Scott" Asked Canaan
" Fuck him" TY said before laughing, and smacking Canaan on the shoulder

[Dud]

Rawr, that's pretty crazy. I doubt the Killers have got the money, so I guess they're going to try and bop their way past the Eliminators to get their boy back. After wasting so many of them, I'm sure the Killers will want revenge too, so I'm lookin' forward to seeing where this goes. Good job so far! 8)

[nazzac]

The next part won't be up till after the fan fic competition

[Inopotamo]

I have read some of your work in the past. Your a good writer. Wonder why you don't come on anymore?

[4nik8]

I have read some of your work in the past. Your a good writer. Wonder why you don't come on anymore?

Despite that he hasn't posted in some months, he was last on just today!