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The Pack
Deep in Washington lies a small town named Forks. Next to that is an even smaller town known by the locals as 'La Push'c its a small sea-side town that was given to the Native Americans after the Civil War to live as a reservation camp. Originally held by the Quiluet Tribe who have stayed there through almost 97 years. Forks, La Push and their neighbouring town of Port Angeles are supposed to be the wettest and most rainyest place in the Continental U.S.

According to Legend the For-Fathers of the Quiluetes were Spirit Warriors whose Cheif managed to turn his soul into a body of a wolf. This created a different legend that certain members of the Tribe could tranform themselves into large wolves at anytime that felt necessary. Of course this wasnt a legend otherwise this fan fiction would not be worth it.

For Decades the Werewolves have been in an on-going war against the well known Cold Blooded Vampires who also stand in secrecy from the real world. Sam Uley leads the only pack of Wolves in La Push with his right hand man Jacob Black and his warriors. Embry,Quil,Paul,Lared,Collin & Eric. They all can turn into Giant Wolves whenever pleased.
La Push Forest. 3:20AM. November 2nd 2009.

Jacob exits his small house. He shuts thw wooden door with such force the windows shake. His father Billy Black watches out the window from his Wheelchair as Jacob storms out his drive and quickly into the edge of the dark forrest. He loud ripping sound can be heard and a low-rumble growl. Jacob now in his Wolf form bounds across the forest dodging tree's and Bushes as he runs. Being a Wolf gives the boys immense Speed and Strength that could that of a Juggernaut Lorry or a Ferrari Enzo. He Heads into a clearing jumping down from a Mound. He stops at the beginning of the Clearing. His breath can he heard a mile off as the Wolf Lowers its ears.

From the other side of the Clearing 4 more Giant-Like Wolves stand in formation. The leader probably Sam Uley is the biggest, Black Furr and Muscle that looks like its ripping through his skin. He turns his horse-like head back to the Wolf at his side. He shows his teeth and growls, he moves his head gesturing acorss the field. Suddenly the Wolf next to him that has Rustic Brown skin breaks into a run. Occasionally looking back as the rest of the pack fades.

The Rustic Brown coloured Wolf comes bounding up to Jacob, his Teeth raised as he leaps into the air. Jacob Smiles and dodges the attack, he turns and just like that the Wolf turns back into Human Form.
"Embry...What you playing at man?" Jacob asks also in Human form himself
"Just wanted to see if you still have it" The Man now named Embry answers
"Look i been away for 2 weeks, ive hardly lost my touch right..."
"Dont Matter, althought ive taken your place behind Sam while you been away"
"Yeah cool, but now im back i guess you'l have to take your postion as scout again" Jacob replies playfully nudging Embry as the walk back across the field taking long strides.

Both boys no older than 17 both stand within the 6 ft 5 region. Both heavily musculer and tonned skin, both with short black and hair and that distinctive Native American look. As they talk about Jacobs short holiday they enter the view of the rest of the wolves who are all now in Human Form. The Alpha Wolf, Sam Uley is the tallest and more Physically Tonned, Standing beside him is Jared and Paul, behind them is Quil and behind Quil is Collin and Eric. All men look similar apart from Sam who is the older one looking around 25.

"Jacob!" Sam called waving over. Jacob and Embry quit their conversation and start quickily pace up to Sam, Embry falls back in line beside Quil as Jacob exchanges a Comfortable Modified Hand-Shake with Sam.
"Hey man!" Quil said leaning forward
"Yeah what he said" that came from Paul AND Jared who to any strangers would seem like twins. Collin simply nods whereas Eric still being the newest and Youngest of the Pack stays quiet.

"Whats been going on since i was away?" Jacob asks taking a serious tone on his voice
"Weve had some sightings of some BloodSucks running the borderlines of Forks and Port-A." Sam replies sighing alittle.
"Anything Solid?" Jacob responds frowning
"Only a lil somthing Jake" Embry says speaking up "I picked up on a fresh trail this morning that wasnt half-hour old. Jacob raises an eyebrow and takes his place next to Sam.
"Well it seems then we better get to work...any new positions?" Jacob says readying himself and smirking.

Noone talks for about a Minute. Sam finally speaks up.
"Now your back Embry will be taking Scout. Quil will be Scout Guard. Jared & Paul will be Flankers as Collin & Eric taken Rear Guard. Your by my side still though Jake." Sam explains.

Suddenly all 6 men suddenly start to shake. Their bodies start to shake and one by one Giant Wolves appear on the field standing in a V formation like Geese that Migrate South for the winter. Sam leading them jolts forward sprinting across the field with the others still keeping formation follow.
[url=http://imageshack.us][img]http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/6373/20255849yq4.jpg[/img][/url]AND THATS THE BOTTOM LINE BECAUSE PAPA ARNOLD SAYS SO!!!!!

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Sam Uley and the rest of his pack sprint their way through the forrest. Not even a decent car could keep up with them going at 50MPH. Embry who was in the kead scouting out the root suddenly stops. The Dark-Blueish colour of his fur suddenly sways with the motion of his body as he starts to sniff the ground. He turns his giant head to Sam and motions for him to come over.

Without seconds all the boys take their positions. Sam Examines the scent with Embry while Jacob guards Sam & Quil guards Embry from either side. Jared & Paul dart left and right covering the flanks whereas Collin & Eric guard the rear. See, Werewolves have a special talent. Once in Wolf form they can hear what the others are thinking. This works wonders during a battle as a way of stratedy, and its really their only form of communication as Wolves dont talk.

"The scents less than a day old" Embry thinks sniffing some more.
"Your right Em' Not sure which was its going though as another scent crosses itself here." Sam replies in his head motioning with the other scent begins. With all the Wolves listening in incase Sam & Embry form a strategy they all keep their eyes fixed on the distant forrest. Jacob raises an ear asa rustle in the bush occurs.
"Somthing over there" Jacob says in his mind.

Sam looks at Jacob and then at where the noise came from. Embry doesnt look he stays with his eyes shut focussed on the smell. The other Wolves stand guard. Sam trotts his way carefully over to a shrub bush. Out of nowhere a Raccoon hops out. Sam gives a sigh of relief and lets off a small Laugh-Type-Growl as the Raccoon see's the Giant Wolf and scrams.

"Just a Raccoon Jake" Sam says turning back to where Embry is.
" Fall in boys" Sam says. Immidietly after the boys get back into the V formation. Embry takes to a fast run irst as he scouts the area. Sam lets off a small growl to signal the run as they move out. The dead of the night beams of the forrest as the moon shines down from the canopy. The sun can be seen creeping up like a hand up a ladies skirt. The Wolves run throughout the night.
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See, now I look at all my other comments in this section and feel guilty that i haven't left a comment in here yet. Am sorry, it's just, Twilight isn't really my thing.  :oops:

However, I shall say that although I don't really like Twilight, your writing skills are very good. You don't seem to make many mistakes, and when you do, they are only small typos and such. You also have very good descriptive skills.

Anyway, keep going with this, hopefully we have a few Twilight fans around that can give a better comment than I, but the writing is very good thus far.  :D

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The Pack head into a clearing. Jared stops them and starts to sniff the ground. They all turn their giant heads to him as he looks up.
"A Bloodsuckers been here" He says through his mind
"You sure Jared?" Sam replies
"Real sure..."

Sam raises his Wolf eyebrow and motions with his head for them all to follow Jared as he picks up the scent. Like some Vampires Certain Werewolves have special Talents. Jared is a tracker. His senses are hightened more so than normal allowing him to track things easy. He starts to jog and finally picks up running speed as the others follow weaving in and out of tree's.

They reach the edge of another clearing next to a river. Along the stream a man dressed in rags is bent down over somting feasting. Sam silently creeps forward through the Brush. He coems up behind the man who is feasting on the neck of a women. Its a NewlyBorn Vampire little than a week old. Sam growls slightly and looks along the stream as the Pack takes position like he has. The Vampire raises its head.

"Who's there?" It asks pushing the man down. It looks around but gives up and goes back to feast. Sam suddenly springs into the air making a huge Roar. He lands infront of the Vampire.
"Jeez, what the hell?" it says Scurrying baclward sweating like mad at the sight of the Giatn Wolf. The Other Wolves dont move, they know what their doing.

Out of nowhere the Vampire takes off into a Super Sonic run. He swiftly brushes through the tree's. Sam follows it motioning for the Others to follow from different directions and telling them not to get themselves seen. The Vampires darts into a Gourge. He stops and looks over his shoulder as Sam follows giving chase. out of nowhere the Vampire gives a huge balled Fist to the snout of Sam's Wolf figure who goes flying into the side of the cliff face. It laughs.

" Stupid Mutt!" It says laughing as it starts to run at normal Human speed. Out of Nowhere Jacob comes bounding off the cliff face. It lands infront of the NewBlood in the same manner as Sam.
" What more of them?"
Jacob gives a smirk and lashes out swinging his huge paw against the Vampire who gets knocked against the side of the Cliff. One by one the Pack take position opposite the Vampire. Each with their teeth showing and Eyes raging red.

The Vampire looks up to see tem all standing there. It gulps and suddenly jumps in the air Bounding from both sides off the cliff face. It reaches the top and disappears.
"Eric, Collin Guard the rear. Jared, Paul at the Flank. Embry scout it out and Quil... Guard him." Sam says individualy looking at them. Eric & Collin move backwards towards the edge of the Gourge where they enterd. Jared and Paul bound up the sides of the Gourge. Embry scouts the rest of the Gourge out sniffing and perking his ears up at the slightest sign. Quil follows up closley ready to Guard him. Sam stands next to Jacob as they Guard eachother.

" You know i heard Seth Clearwater is turning." Sam says not taking his off of the Gourge Side.
"Cool, i dont think this is the right time Sam" Jacob replies making a small Laughing type Growl.
"Maybe Not, but im bored of waiting"
"Fair Enough... When?" Jacob Asks
"Should be the end of the week. Sue said that his Anger Spurts are becoming more frequent and she can see the Wolf in his eyes." Sam Explains.
"We'l have to explain to him" Jacob says.

At that moment the Vampire reappears behind Sam & Jacob.
"Where did your friends go?" It asks. Sam Motions over the cliff face as the NewBlood smirks feeling Victorious.
"Lets get this over with Wolf" The Vampire says lunging forward Taking Jacob off guard in the ribs.

Sam crashes into the Vampire squishing it against the Side. Suddenly Embry comes darting back scratching it across its face creating 4 huge deep wounds. The Vampires screams in pain as Jared,Paul,Quil,Collin & Eric come back. Eric lunges into it using his Weight Advantage by throwing it into a tree. Paul scratches its shoulder and with one clean slate its arm comes flying off.

Collin & Jared litrally headbutt it at the same time making it do a Backflip. Embry starts to laugh in his head as he catches the Dazed Vampire on its back he litrally runs with it on its back like a Jocky & Horse before suddenly stopping throwing it off his back. This time Quil jumps in the air catching its torso in his Giatn Razor Like mouth. He throws it around before Jacob snatches its head taking it clean off. The fight is over.
[url=http://imageshack.us][img]http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/6373/20255849yq4.jpg[/img][/url]AND THATS THE BOTTOM LINE BECAUSE PAPA ARNOLD SAYS SO!!!!!

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The Pack arrive at the edge of the forest where Sams House is. The lights are on inside and Sam's Wife Emily can be seen cooking food. She looks out the window to see the Giant Wolves standing there. He smiles and waves over for them. At roughly the same time the Wolves turn back into the Human figures. Jared and Paul start mucking around trying to shove eachother into the mud. They dart in the front door of the Wooden house and chase each other around. Collin & Eric enter and sit at the long dining table and start to eat some Chicken. Sam & Jacob enter both being the biggest men taking up the doorway just squeezing in. Embry & Quil start to muck around on Motorbikes on the road.

After about half an hour a Women dressed in a short plaid pink skirt enters the house followed by a middle aged women and a teenage boy. They dont knock, but Emily & Sam greet them happily.
" Ahh Sue, please come sit." Sam says with a warm voice kissing her on the cheek. The other Women who is also Teenage sits beside her with her Ipod in her ears listening to music. The Teenage boy takes an Edgy seat at the edge opf the table.

Sam leans out the door, he looks around for Embry & Quil who notice him immidietly and like 2 loyal Dogs come running over. Sam whispers somthing into their ears and they hope through the Window instead of the door and take their seat. uddenly there is a loud crash. Some of them jump, but others like Jacob & Eric sit their laughing their ass off as Collin tumbles off his stool backwards. Eventually the group start to laugh apart from the silent Teenage boy who keeps his head down.

"Anyway...Lets get down to business shall we people?" Emily says mocking a Business-Women tone.
"Yes of course dear. Seth your mother tells me that you have been getting uncontrolable anger spurts?" Sam asks and explains.
"Urm. Y-Y-Yeah." The boy replies.
"And that sometimes during the evening you disappear into the forrest for hours?" Sam continues. Seth doesnt reply he just nods lowering his head.

Jacob smiles as does Eric & Jared knowing whats coming next. The others dont pay much attention to Sams explanation. Only Seths reactions.

As the ight wheres on Sam (with help from the others) explains the sotry of the WereWolves and their pack aswell as their Communication Talents and roles within the Pack. Seth gradually gets round and starts acting more exciting almost jumping around the place in happiness knowing that he's not the only one.

"You took all that in Seth?" His mother Sue asks. Without any Reluctance he answers.
"Oh hell yeah!" He litrally shouts. Sam smiles and pats him on his head purposly rustling up his hair.
"So what colours your Furr Seth?" Paul asks half laughing.
"Erm i think Light-Brownish..." He replies thinking a little "Why?"
"No reason. Its just cool to know what colours we all our, as we're all a little bit different. Like Sam here is pitch Black. Jacob is Redish Brown and Paul is grey,- Eric is white etc. Its an easy way to tell who we all are at first" Paul explains.

After the meal. Sam, Jacob,Embry,Quil,Jared,Paul,Eric,Collin & The Newest member Seth head out into the darkening forest. One by one they turn into their beloved Wolf form and bound on through the night.
[url=http://imageshack.us][img]http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/6373/20255849yq4.jpg[/img][/url]AND THATS THE BOTTOM LINE BECAUSE PAPA ARNOLD SAYS SO!!!!!

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It has been atleast 2 weeks now since Seth joined the pack. The days were getting shorter as Winter drew near. Although the Wolves in both of their forms didnt even feel cold so Summer & Winter felt the the same to them, but Longer Nights means more patrolling. Atleast 5 times a week Sam had everyone on patrol which only left 2 days recovery every Sunday & Thursday. He had the Pack working on a strict router. There had been some sightings of Vampire trails near Port Angeles and Sam had sent Collin & Embry to check it out.

Embry & Collin made it to the border of Port Angeles. They stopped on the edge of the Highway looking both directions hoping not to get spotted. The Moon was bright & The Stars were out in force and with the Car lights it wouldnt take a Driver long before they spot the Giant Wolves patrolling by the Highway. They needed to find another way into 'Angeles but since it was a Peninculer there was only one entrance & Exit.

Embry being the scout take about 100 yard forward and stops at the egge of a bush right beside the Highway. His glowing eyes watch the cars go in and out past the Port Angeles welcome sign. A Lorry suddenly slams its breaks as a Loud crash can be heard. Several cars spin off in different directions. The Lorry Driver carefully hops out his Lorry and rushes over to the destroyed car. Luckily No-one was Seriously harmed. Right off the bat several people were phoning 911. Embry suddenly picks up the sent. He follows it with his Nose and suddenly turns east he opens his eyes and in the darkness can see a Human Figure darting through the cars at Super-Human speed.

"Theres out Problem Collin" Embry thought
"I see it. Filthy Blooducker...wanna get after it?" Collin replies
"Stick to these bushes though. If we're spotted, we're screwed. Lets move!"

On that Note both Wolves dart off following the figure. Collin being the Faster More agile Wolf catches up to the Vampire on its left with it being Oblivious that it is being trailed by Giatn Wolves that he probably didnt know excisted. The Vampire jumps left and cuts about 20 foot infront of Collin still not realising its there. Embry who stalks behind realises its Sudden Route Change before Collin and follows it
"This Way" Embry thinks. Collin doesnt respond he just follows easily catching up to Embry as he weaves in and out o the tree's.

As Embry & Collin reach the middle of the forrest they lose scent of the Vampire. Embry slams his paw against a fallen Branch snapping it in half and sitting on his behind. Collin lies down next to him also Pissed Off.

"So why is it i have two Giatn sized Wolves trailing my ass?" Comes a voice behind a tree.
A figure steps out from behind a Trunk and with his arms drawn at his side with his Fists Balled. He smirks tilting his head obviously thinking these are some Ordinary Wolves out on a hunt. Collin growls standing up on all Fours. Embry smirks with his Giatn Sized Jaw and with one huge Shudder turns back into his Human Form. The Vampire takes a few cautious steps back completely shocked & Confused.

"What are you Monster?" The Vampire asks showings his teeth and spreading his finsger ready to strike.
"Oh your calling us Monsters? Filthy Parasite" Embry says Sarcastically
"Dont play games with me Wolf. You dont know the Powers i posess" The Vampire replies
"Trust Me i do. Although i can say the same for you" Embry says now chuckling to himself looking at Collin who still stands on guad with his Rows of Teeth showing.

Suddenly Out of nowhere the Vampire strikes. He darts forward with almighty Strength lunging for Embry still in Human form only to get cut off by Collin who Brings both of his Huge Paws down on his Right Shouler taking the Vampires arm clean off. The Vampire shrieks In Pain holding his Stump where his arm was. He looks wide eyed at Embry as he quickly changes Back into Wolf Form before The Vampire could strike again.

Out of the Blue the rest of the Pack show up behind The Vampire who is completely Unawhere of them being there. Embry & Collin both smile as they see Their Brothers line up apart from Sam who seems to be missing.
The Sound of Giatn Footprints can be heard from the left. Collin & Embry both turn their heads to see Sam darting in and out of the tree's and before the Vampire could React Sam slams his Giatn-Sized Body into it sending it flying through several tree's. The Rest of the Wolves pounce traditionally and tear the Vampire apart.

"Wel theres another one down"
[url=http://imageshack.us][img]http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/6373/20255849yq4.jpg[/img][/url]AND THATS THE BOTTOM LINE BECAUSE PAPA ARNOLD SAYS SO!!!!!

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With The Vampire put down to the rest the Pack head back into La Push. They weave in out of the tree's not at a full sprint but jogging. Embry had picked up another scent. An unfamiliar one. Not a vampires one. Embry who is in scout suddenly holts. He looks back at Sam who is leading the pack and they all start to speak to eachother in their minds.

"What is it Em'? what do you smell?" Sam says looking around cautiously
"Not sure. Its definatley not a Vampire scent. It smells Slightly Familiar though" Embry replies smelling the side of a tree
"I wonder What it iss..." Paul says Taking to the right Flank as his partner Jared takes the left. Quil darts forward as the Bodyguard of the scout (Embry) and Collin & Eric guard the rear. Sam & Jacob stand center as the two Alpha's.
"Sam what about me? Whats my position?" Seth asks being the newest member of the Pack.
" Oh Crap erm. Any Suggestions guys?" Sam asks the rest
"What about extra back-up?| Jared suggests.

"Okay Seth. Crouch behind that rock and we use you for a surprise attack on the enemy." Sam explains. Seth simply nods and takes position behind a big Boulder. "Alright Embry. how strong is it?" Sam continues. Embry wanders up and down smelling tree's, bushes & Rocks. There is a loud thud in the distance. Everyone freezes. A loud Howl can also be heard aswell as the sound of Loud Footsteps coming towards them.

Out of the Brush come 5 Large Wolves all very Similar to Sam & His Pack. Our Pack lead By Sam forms a Line as all 8 of the Wolves line up with Sam & Jacob in the middle. The Unknown Wolves stand there teeth showing alert looking at The Guys. The One infront's body suddenly shudders as he Phases into Human form. Sam's Wolf Eyebrow is raised as he looks upon the unfamiliar man. Sam Nods slightly and Phases back himself. Both men are roughly the same heigh bar 2 or 3 inches. Both heavily Tanned and extremely Muscular. The Unfamiliar Man takes a step forward with both arms raised in the Surrender postion.

"Who are you?" Sam asks looking at the Unknown Pack.
"My Name is Jack. This is my pack." The man now named Jack explains "Forgive my sudden interuption. As i heard your thoughts me and my boys were on high alert. We thought we the only Wolves of our kind" Explains Jack
"As did i. Where are you from? are you Native?" Sam asks
"If you mean Native American. Then yes. We all are. We are decendants of The Cherokee's" Jack explains motioning to his men

All the other Wolves star at eachother with their Teeth showing. The Jacob Wolf looks around and tries to figure out which one in his Equivalent.
"Why are you here in La Push?" Sam asks this time with Impatience in his voice
"We were Tracking a Vampire down to Port Angeles" Jack replies
"No need. My Boys Embry & Collin took care of it not 2 hours ago." Sam Explains pointing to the Embry & Collin Wolves.
"Fair Enough. Looks like our Work is done here boys. We shall scoot off" Jack says taking a step back into his Wolf Line.

Sam doesnt take his eye off Jack. He opens his mouth and begins to speak
"Why dont you stick around. We could use some more Wolves on the hunt. There has been alot of NewBorns latley and besides. It would be good to hear your stories." Sam explains & Asks. Jack looks around to his pack as one by one they start to Phase back into their Humans forms. All roughly the same Build as Sam's Pack.

"Let me introduce my Pack. This is Brady (My 2nd in command) along with Justin (My Scout), Joe & Ashley (who are my Flankers)" As Jack says out the names the boys all nods.

"Hey guys. Let me introduce my Pack. Im Sam, this is Jacob(My 2nd In Command) Jared & Paul(My Flankers), Embry(My Scout), Quil(Scouts Bodyguard), Collin & Eric(My Rear Guards) & Our newest Recruit Seth our Surprise Attack." Sam smiles as he says out the names of his beloved Pack "Come Jack. Let us walk for a while and show you our home" Sam says.

One by one the 13 humans all begin to Phase back into their Wolf Form and bound on towards the Beach of La Push
[url=http://imageshack.us][img]http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/6373/20255849yq4.jpg[/img][/url]AND THATS THE BOTTOM LINE BECAUSE PAPA ARNOLD SAYS SO!!!!!

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I must say, although (like I said in my earlier comment) I don't particularly like Twilight, your story has started to become interesting to me. I liked the fight scenes, and the dialogue also. The idea of bring in Jack's Pack (you did that on purpose, didn't you? :p) to merge with the previous pack is a good one, and I will be following this to see how it develops. Keep it up.  8)

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Yeah dude (as my names Jack ;) ) but yeah another chapter will be up shortly so...

and besides this isnt strictly Twilight as it has NO relation to Edward or Bella, just Jacob & his Pack of Werewolves if they didnt exist. As i finished reading the Final Twilight Book (Breaking Dawn) about 5 minutes i have learnt that there was atleast 16 in Jacob's/Sam's pack in the end XD so il need to keep up haha
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Yeah man, one of the main reasons this appeals to me now is because it's not all about Edward & Bella like I thought it might be when you first posted. It's not like I need to have read the Twilight saga to know what's happening. I know that Sam & Jacob are leading a pack of werewolves, and werewolves don't really get on with vampires, so it's all good.  :D

Oh my, I'm beginning to feel light-headed... I think I've used all 5 posts today.  :shock:

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Haha lol il give a run down of the Pack.

Sam Uley = Pack Leader
Jacob Black = 2nd In Command (Although rightfully should be the Alpha)
Embry Ateara = Scout
Quil = Scout Guard
Paul = Left Flank
Jared = Right Flank
Collin = Rear Guard
Eric = Rear Guard
Seth = Backup
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man your writing skills are superb.
just i hate twilight and i can't believe its on the warriors forum :/
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Thanks for the Compliment for my writing skills. Im probably the oldest ( more Veteran-Like_ Fan Fic writer on here. As ive been writing Fics since this forum started!
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The 8 of Sams Pack and the 5 of Jacks Pack stood at the beach in La Push. Sam had his back against a tree as he lightly puffed a cigaretter. Seth & Eric were darting around trying to shove each other into the water being their true adolecent Teens. Jacob and Jacks second in Command Brady were down on the Old Sewer Pipe chatting away before Jack intterupts.

"So Jacob. Sam tells me your the rightful Alpha of you guys?" Jack asks
"Yeah i am why?" Jacob Replies
"Ahh no reason, i just sort of wonderd why Sam was Alpha instead..." Jack says raising an eye brow " Surley you'd like to do it?"

"Well theres your problem Jack" Jacob Answers " I dont want the hassle of Alpha. You know full well what thats like"
"Sure i do Jake. You wanna go hunting? apprently Justin my Scout caught some Fresh Vampire scents on the way down... Not too far past Olympia" Jack explains.

With that said Jacob & Jack gather everyone up. They set off lightly Jogging in their Human form down the beach. Obviously not getting out of breath as their immune to. Sam and Jack runs ahead and darts into the forest by the cliff side. They seem to be having a race as Jack is winning. Sam jumps lightly atleast 3 foot off the ground. He body suddenly starts to tremble as he bursts into his Wolf Form. This is followed by Jack to he slams his huge Wol body into Sam trying to knock him off balance.

Justin, Joe & Ashley all suddenly change behind the group. They bound inbetween us almost Knocking over Jared & Paul who smirk and rip into their Wolf Form chasing after them letting out Croaky Laugh like Growls. Seth, Eric and Collin step up their pace as they race past Jacob still in human form, before phasing as they enter the Woods. Brady suddenly laughs for no reason Jacob looks at him in confusement before suddenly going flying into the air as Brady trips him upm, but before Jacob lands square in his Chest He Phases Growling and jumping towards Brady who dodges the attack & Shifts himself into his Sandy Coloured Wolf Chasing after Jacob into the woods. Behind them all is Embry & Quil who are gently jogging not caring to catch up. Suddenly out of nowhere Quil darts forward throwing sand into Embry's eye on purpose as a Joke. At the same time they Phase into their Wolves and dart through the forest.

The Two conjoined Packs hit Olympia near 11:20 PM. Its Winter and Snow & Ice cover the forest floor. Jack sticks his large head out onto the highway pass. He watches the cars go by and waits for an Opening. He motions over to Brady who crouches next to him. In their minds they start to communicate
"I can smell a Fresh Track. Very rich, you got it?" Jack asks.
"Makes the hairs on my nose stick on the ends. Bloodsuckers heading into Main Town though. Will be hard for us you know. The Forest is on the other side. He'l drag his catch their to feed withut witnessess" Brady explains.

Sam & Embry stalk up beside the two. They look at each other. Sam & Embry have probably decided a plan. Embry darts across the road barley at a sprint a Trucker beeps him as Embry stands smirking showing his sharp teeth. He leans his body gently towards the truck making the Trucker slam on the brakes swooping his Lorry so it takes up the road. Luckily no cars crash as they come to a stand-still. Embry growls scaring the Driver who sticks his head out the Window. Suddenly all the Wolves dart one by one across the road as the Mezmorised Motorised stare in amazement. Clearly the Wolves were out on a mission.
[url=http://imageshack.us][img]http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/6373/20255849yq4.jpg[/img][/url]AND THATS THE BOTTOM LINE BECAUSE PAPA ARNOLD SAYS SO!!!!!

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Re: The Pack || Twilight Fan-Fiction.

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Another nice chapter. It was good to explore a little into why Jacob doesn't want to be the alpha male. Anyway, still going good so far, and I look forward to the next chapter (because I assume it's going to involve the Pack attacking some vampires.)  8)

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