The Hellfire's: The Rise, The Glory and The Fall of Lucifer.

[Luther828]

Wow! I'm totally blown away by your comment!
Book or magazine? are u sure?
Well thank you very much and i'll get the next chapters up as soon as i can.

P.S. I've changed the setup of my story. The topic name is a little different now and the story will be in three books: The Rise, The Glory and The Fall. So, this is going to be quite a long story as i'm still quite far away from finishing book 1.

[danny06]

Wow! I'm totally blown away by your comment!
Book or magazine? are u sure?
Well thank you very much and i'll get the next chapters up as soon as i can.

P.S. I've changed the setup of my story. The topic name is a little different now and the story will be in three books: The Rise, The Glory and The Fall. So, this is going to be quite a long story as i'm still quite far away from finishing book 1.

keep up the good work mate

[Luther828]

Chapter 14: Tonight, They Fight for God

Blood flew out of Star’s mouth as the back of the soldier’s hand slapped her. “Shut up, ya whore!!” he yelled.
“ No! You better let me go now, mister, or I’ll kill ya’ babies!” She flapped her legs in anger, trying to kick the man.
“ What’s the little lady gonna do to me? She gonna kill me’ babies? Ha! Like you’re gonna hurt me!”
“ You think you’re so f*****g strong!!! Well, here go ya’ babies!” The man fell to his knees grasping his crotch.
“ You BITCH!!” he screamed in a very high-pitched tone. Another man entered the room, carrying handcuffs and some duck tape.
“ Hey, Bill, you got the…what the f**k?”
“ She f*****g kicked me in the n**s!”
“ How’d a girl manage to do that?”
“ It don’t matter. Just get over here, she’s getting’ out a’ the ropes!” The second man hurried over to Star and hit her over the head with the cuffs, knocking her out cold. “ Get up ya p***y! We gotta get this chick to Josiah. The big plans coming together tonight.”

“ Are we all set, my children?” Asked Josiah.
“ Yes, Father Josiah,” they responded.
“ Tonight is a major step towards us owning Hell’s Kitchen. Once we have tempted that s**t out of his hiding place, all we have to do is waste ‘em. And we all know that we can do that. We’re much heavier than they are! So, my children, tonight you fight for me, you fight for Hell’s Kitchen, you fight for glory, you fight for good against evil…and you fight for God!!!” Now grab your weapons, cause we’re gonna win our place in Heaven!!!”
“ YEAAAAAHHHH!!!” They roared, grabbed their weapons (the second man that knocked out Star grabbed the black bag she was trapped in) and followed their great leader into the streets of Hell’s Kitchen.

Chapter 15: Heaven vs. Hell

Pedestrians fled, animals cowered, and shop-owners shut their stores. A drunken fool harassed them, an old, crazed lady shouted at them and a hobo begged them for money. All these things would have got these stupid people a right good kick up the a*s. But tonight, they were in luck. Josiah and his army were marching with a purpose, not blinking, not flinching. Their aim was on one thing and one thing only. No person or thing was going to break their focus

Josiah called for The Scout to come and identify which house was The Hellfire’s hangout. The Scout pointed to a very small block of flats, “ They’re in the basement. It’s their church; real top secret. I found out where they were based when scouting for ya’, Father,”
“ If they’re down in the basement, how we gonna get ‘em out? They can’t hear us. Even the great Josiah ain’t got the skills to do that!” yelled a very, very silly man. Without hesitating, Josiah drew a dagger from the inside of his very long black coat and threw it in the direction of the man, all within the times of two seconds. The whole street went silent as the dagger pierced through the soldier’s eye; killing him instantly. Every man stood like a statue, not making a move in fear that they too will upset Josiah. But, he just turned back in the direction of the house and bellowed, “ Lucifer! My Army and I, Josiah, have come here to claim back our turf and to risk our lives for the greater good! Hell’s kitchen, and the rest of New York, cannot have a Satan-worshipping gang in its mists. In the end, good always triumphs against evil, and this will be no different! We will take no mercy and take no prisoners! We will fight till every last one of you filthy maggots is down in that horrific place, with the horrific person that you worship. And believe me, he will take no mercy either. Because he is the Devil, and whatever you have done in this life you have wasted, he is wicked enough to make your existence in Hell, a very, very unpleasant one! Now come out and fight us. If you don’t, we will have to come to you. And it will not be pretty!!”

The Hellfire’s paused from their sinful behavior of drinking and smoking. All eyes turned to the trapdoor at the top of the ladder that reached down to their small, cramped church. “ F**k me! It’s Josiah!! And they’re really serious! Oh f**k, f**k, f**k, f**k, f**k, f*********k!!!!!” screeched Hubert.
“ Really? Lucifer, what are we gonna do?” asked Inferno.
“ We’re not gonna go out there. But, Hubert, go up there and ask why we should come up. I wanna see what those lame f***s come up with,” answered Lucifer.
“ Bu…bu…bu…but-“
“ NOW!” Hubert trudged over to the old, rusty, bent ladder and started to climb. “ F*****g Lucifer. ‘Now Hubert,’ he says. ‘Go check it out Hubert.’ F*****g s**t face,” Hubert mumbled under his breath,
“ Shut the f**k up Hubert and get on with your job,” ordered Lucifer.
“ Yes, boss,” He opened the trapdoor and pulled himself up into the streets. Josiah’s Army were waiting for him.

“ Uhh..um.. Luc…Lucifer says wha…wha..wha..why..sh..shu..should we come up?” Josiah signaled to the man-carrying Star to bring her over to him.
“ This is why,” Josiah answered. Star was thrown out of the bag, still unconscious.
“ Is..is..she..d-d-d-dead?”
“ No, just unconscious. This is Lucifer’s new little love interest. And if he don’t come out and fight us, she’ll be killed. Now go and tell Lucifer about what you’ve just seen,”
“ Ok, I’ll go now,” Hubert jogged over to the trapdoor and lowered himself down again.

“ Lucifer, they’ve apparently got someone called…Star. They say id you don’t go out and fight, then they’ll kill her,” Lucifer remembered the magical night a few days ago, and how he actually loved her. Silly as it was, seeing as it was only one night. He had to go rescue her. “ Right, men. We will go out there, but we’re not going to fight. I’ll tell you the full plan in a minute. If we do get away, we’re going to go to another part of NY and keep quiet. We will start to rebuild our gang. Getting much more members, getting more weapons and getting more rep. Then, we will get ourselves a new church. Big and beautiful, decorated by our very own artist, just the way we want it. Finally, we will waste Josiah’s Army and then start to take over the gang world. But, for now, we run,”
“ Uh, boss. What happens if we don’t get away?”
“ We will. And that’s the bottom line; cause Lucifer said so. Hubert, go tell em we’re coming out just as soon as we get ready,”
“ But, I won’t know the plan,”
“ Just get on any bike you see…except mine,”
“Bikes?”
“ Just go,” Hubert twoddled over to the ladder for the second time.

Lucifer, Inferno and Blaze emerged from the trapdoor, carrying their bikes (somehow they got them through). They then swung their legs onto them and drove over to the hundreds and hundreds of The Army.
“ You’re up to something, Lucifer. Where’s the rest of ya’? Why are you on motorbikes? Tell me a**hole!”
“ Ok, Ok. Geez, there was no need for that rude insult at the end there,”
“ Just tell me,”
“ Well, we always come out on our bikes. It’s our trademark. And well, the others are still getting their bikes ready,”
“ But, you’re not gonna fight. You’re just gonna drive off with her. I’m not dumb, Lucifer,”
“ Ah, good question. The answer is that, um, well, a person of your skill and ability wouldn’t let us get away with that. And I love Star, so, I wouldn’t want to get her killed,”
“ I don’t believe you, but, I’m desperate to get my hands on your dirty, scrawny neck. And, the worst that will happen, is that she’ll die, hurting you, and you’ll get out a’ Hell’s Kitchen, leaving us in charge. So, I ain’t that bothered about you escapin’,” Josiah’s Army looked at eachother in awe, can’t believing that after all their hard work, he’s giving up. Lucifer, Inferno and Blaze got their bowie knives out from their pockets and raised them in the air, ready to strike.

Bikes flew in the air as the three knives flew at Josiah and two of his men. Lucifer swiveled round and grabbed Star. Then he and his men turned in the other direction and rode off down the road, leaving their angry enemies behind them. Josiah pulled the knife from his shoulder and apologized to his men. How could he have let them get away? How could he have listened and believed that fool? Maybe his power was fading.
Sorry for the bad explanation about how they got away, I couldn't think of anything good that would have fooled Josiah

[Luther828]

Chapter 16: Where to Hide?

The Hellfire’s rode for days, waiting for a place far enough away to be safe, but near enough to be near to Josiah’s Army. When Star had woken up, all Hell broke lose. She ordered Lucifer to take her home. He explained to her over and over again that he rescued her and she would have died if she didn’t. But, she just wouldn’t take it. In the end, Lucifer had to knock her out again.

Before they left, they made sure that they had enough money for food. Every night they would stop at a fast food joint to get some food for everybody. The nighttime was the only time they could buy food, because with over 50 people to feed, money had to be rationed..

Lucifer thought of many places that they could hide. But, none were appropriate. His men were getting restless and impatient. They were fed up with riding in no particular direction. One place, however, did attract Lucifer. It was in The Bronx. A big hall that all his family used to meet in once every year. After a lot of thought, Lucifer decided it was perfect.

[Luther828]

Chapter 17: Bit of a Problem

The day after Lucifer made the decision on their new hangout, they arrived in The Bronx. The small houses next to The Big Hall were dwarfed and shadowed under its grandeur. Lucifer smiled as they approached on their bikes, knowing that his decision was definitely the right one. That is, until they saw the twenty Turnball A.C’s that were sitting outside.

“Hey, who the f**k are you? A gang? Trying to invade our turf? You better not be?” asked what seemed to be their leader.
“ Why? Twenty of you ain’t gonna wreck fifty of us?” replied Inferno.
“ The A.C’s are a big gang if you don’t mind. We’ve got over a hundred soldiers. There just..uh..not here right now,”
“ Yeah, right! We want your hangout,” said Blaze.
“ Well you gotta fight us first. And, believe me, there are much more soldiers that this,”
“ I know this gang, men. He’s telling the truth; there are much more than these few. We’re not gonna fight cause we’ll just get wrecked. There’s gotta be more hangouts in New York we can go to,” surrendered Lucifer.
“ No, boss. We came here to fight and kill Josiah’s Army. We ain’t never gonna do that until we can get ourselves settled,” said Blaze.
“ I agree. Let’s stop running. Where’s your anger with God gone? Where’s your hunger for revenge gone? Maybe you weren’t the leader we thought you were. If you wannna keep your gang, you’re gonna have to fight these wimps,” added Inferno.
“ YEAH!!” agreed the soldiers. Lucifer looked around at his men and suddenly felt the passion flow back through his veins. His eyes thinned and a large, crazed smile filled his face once more. His knife glistened from the light shining down from the street lamps.
“ Alright, let’s fight!”

Chapter 18: Liars

The Hellfire’s all brought out their knives from their pockets and ran at the A.C’s. They responded by running through the double doors of The Big Hall, trying to get away. Lucifer stopped running and stood in-between the charging Hellfire’s, “ STOP!” he shouted. His men skidded to a halt.
“ Huh?” they mumbled.
“ Can’t you see that they obviously don’t have back-up?”
“ No,”
“ If they didn’t have back-up then why would they have run away?”
“ To phone for back-up,” Inferno replied.
“ Ohhhhhh, right. Carry on charging,” The men held their knives up high again and followed their opponents through the doors and into The Big Hall.

“We surrender! We surrender!” the A.C’s cried.
“ Excuse me?” asked Lucifer.
“ We haven’t got back-up. The A.C’s kicked us out after we made a rebellion against them,” the leader replied.
“ Does that mean we can have this hall?”
“ Yes, yes. It ain’t even ours. It belongs to the Council; anyone can use it,”
“ Let’s kill those lying scumbags!!” threatened Blaze.
“ YEAH!!”
“ No way. I’ve got a plan for these ‘lying scumbags’,”
“ What is it?” the ex-A.C’s asked.
“ We’re a gang that’s trying to build ourselves up. More men, more money and a bigger reputation. Would you be interested in joining us? You’ve gotta be heavy to be in the Turnbull A.C’s,”
“ Yeah, sure. We’d love to! There’s more of us rebels that haven’t been found out yet. I’m sure they’ll join too! There’s about another 30,”
“ There’s one little problem, Lucifer. They ain’t Satan-worshippers,” One soldier said.
“ We’re prepared to become Satan-worshippers. Just as long as ya’ don’t kill us we’ll do whatever you want,”
“ You’re in. Now let’s see what the locals here have got to offer us,” said Lucifer, helping the men off the ground where they were cowering.

[danny06]

this is just awesome man keep it up

[warrior9721]

DUDE! You have such an awesome thing going on! I love your story! Can't bare to wait for the next chapter!

[Luther828]

This chapter used to be different but I changed cause...well, it just weren't very good at all! I was trying to experiment with something new and it went completely wrong.

Sorry I haven't written many chapters lately but I've been on holiday as well as being busy.
This is the replace chapter, just something I rustled up quickly,
After this, I'm gonna get rolling again and hopefully I'm gonna write some good chapters like I used to.

Chapter 19: What to do with an angry chick

Star’s head was pounding as she woke up. The quiet chatter of the surrounding gang-members seemed like shouts. She tried to open her eyes, restricted by the burning of the light. Once she had realized where she was, and after she remembered what had happened to her, the pain of her head and the burning in her eyes faded. She was angry.

“ Get me the f**k out of this f*****g chair! Untie me! Untie me!” she screeched.
“ Of f**k, the chick’s awake!” exclaimed Hubert.
“ Bring that b*****d Lucifer to me right now. I’m gonna kill that d**k-head!”
“What should we do? I’ve never had to deal with an angry chick before. What do you do with an angry chick?” asked Hubert.
“ What does Lucifer normally do when she wakes up?” another soldier asked.
“ He knocks her out,’ replied Hubert
“ Why the f**k does he do that? I thought he loved her,”
“ You know he don’t do things normally. Now just give her a whack round the head and hopes she don’t wake up till Lucifer comes back again,” ordered Hubert

[warrior9721]

OMG CONTINUE, MAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PLZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[danny06]

This chapter used to be different but I changed cause...well, it just weren't very good at all! I was trying to experiment with something new and it went completely wrong.

Sorry I haven't written many chapters lately but I've been on holiday as well as being busy.
This is the replace chapter, just something I rustled up quickly,
After this, I'm gonna get rolling again and hopefully I'm gonna write some good chapters like I used to.

Chapter 19: What to do with an angry chick

Star’s head was pounding as she woke up. The quiet chatter of the surrounding gang-members seemed like shouts. She tried to open her eyes, restricted by the burning of the light. Once she had realized where she was, and after she remembered what had happened to her, the pain of her head and the burning in her eyes faded. She was angry.

“ Get me the f**k out of this f*****g chair! Untie me! Untie me!” she screeched.
“ Of f**k, the chick’s awake!” exclaimed Hubert.
“ Bring that b*****d Lucifer to me right now. I’m gonna kill that d**k-head!”
“What should we do? I’ve never had to deal with an angry chick before. What do you do with an angry chick?” asked Hubert.
“ What does Lucifer normally do when she wakes up?” another soldier asked.
“ He knocks her out,’ replied Hubert
“ Why the f**k does he do that? I thought he loved her,”
“ You know he don’t do things normally. Now just give her a whack round the head and hopes she don’t wake up till Lucifer comes back again,” ordered Hubert

amazing man keep up the good work.