The Warriors 2: Battle for New York

[GramercyRiff99]

Whoa. This is my new favourite piece of fiction on this board. I especially liked your explanation of the gang history. Keep it up

[RRA]

Chapter 3: Breaking the Ice

October 17, 1979
4:33 PM

Gary Zimmerman hasn’t had a good day. First, the Sons of Liberty mugged him of his money. Then the Slammers, the other major gang in the district, stole his car. At least he got back to HQ in one piece with his precious Intel. His direct superior, Bob Greenwood (Assistant to the President for Domestic Policy) demanded that they both go to see the Boss immediately.

They walked down through the halls of the White House. Greenwood had called the boss ahead of time, demanding and receiving a 15-minute opening within his schedule. They entered the Oval Office, with the President of the United States seating behind his desk, and his Chief of Staff Ronald Gold standing by his side.

Greenwood opened his mouth. “Mr. President, we have bad news…â€

[adam88]

yeah he actually was a made man, but that doesn't matter anyway, I am not sure that he would be relivent to your story. Although he made a lot of success, the black community did not condone his action for bringing more drugs into Harlem.  So maybe you can add that the black Panthers were against this, but you don't have to, this story is great the way it is, keep up the good work.

[RRA]

Chapter 3: Wake Up & Smell the Coffin

September 5, 2006
3 PM

“The way I see it Bob, out of this wonderful book of yours, we can make 3 very good movies that will make a profit.â€

[Baby Bear]

This came together good. I just wanted to say that he isn't the only one that has great fan fics, But I do too!!