Origin Of The Desolaters

[ajax1234]

that is a great story u should get ajax to come back

[Jigsaw]

Maybe he will maybe he wont.. I think Cowboy_Rules is doing the next part, but if he doesn't mind i will..?

[cowboy rules]

Go ahead man. Im pretty busy now so I wouldnt be able to do it for a while/

[Jigsaw]

Rembrandt and Vermin are sitting by the phone, Sully taking a nap on the couch, his new colors on, but you can tell he had a struggle (He has a cut on his forehead) with trying out for the Desolators. Vermin picks up the phone when Cowboy walks over.

Cowboy: Your not calling Ajax again are you?

Vermin: ....well, yeah but..

Cowboy: The last thing you want to do is annoy someone we want to come back. Don't screw this up man.

Rembrandt: Calm down man..

Cowboy: No, you know what I won't calm down. Being a soldier back in the Warriors was one thing, but being a leader I don't need a sense of humor hanging around.

Rembrandt: ...just a bit of patience.

Cowboy looks at him funny and walks away. Vermin dials a number anyway.

Ajax: Hello?

Vermin: Hey..

Ajax: ...who the hell is this!?

Vermin: Vermin.. I..

Ajax: Stop calling me man. I don't want people thinking I have connections with street gangs. Thats the last thing I need. Do you know how much I make by plowing a couple wimps in under two minutes a night!? 700 bucks man. 700 bucks to knock a little wimps head off!

Vermin: Whatever man.. whens your next fight?

Ajax: Tonight, in four hours. Why?

Vermin: Oh, nothing just wondering.

Ajax: Wondering about what!?

Vermin: Nothing.

Ajax: Whatever!

Ajax slams down the phone. Vermin looks at Rembrandt.

Vermin: We're going to the Bronx.

*****

Rembrandt, Vermin, and Sully show up outside the 'Fight Night' arena. Vermin looks back at Sully, then Rembrandt.

Vermin: Did we have to bring him?

Rembrandt: It was him, or ask Cowboy. You don't want Cowboy to find out.

Vermin just shakes his head and signals for Rembrandt and Sully to follow. They walk into the arena and sneak past the ticket booth.

Sully: Why did we skip the ticket booth?

Vermin: You have got to be kidding me. We have hardly any money left now. We spent it on food. And you, want to pay your way in?

Sully: I just don't want security screwing us up.

Vermin: Don't worry about it.

Vermin Rembrandt and Sully go sit down. Vermin looks over to the cage in the middle of the arena.  He points at it, because Ajax just entered it.

Announcer: 200 dollars to the first volunteer to step into the cage, and stay 5 minutes with.. AJAX!!!

Ajax raises his arms.

Vermin: Things are gonna go better than planned.. YO! I'LL FIGHT HIM!

Rembrandt: What are you doing..

Announcer: You! With the red vest! Come on down!

Vermin walks down the steps until he gets to the cage. He runs in the door as the shut and lock it.

Ajax: What the-

Vermin spears him onto the ground and holds him down.

Vermin: Your coming back to Coney after this.

Ajax: I told you I ain't comin' back.

Ajax gets to his feet and tosses Vermin into the side of the cage. Coughing, Vermin gets back up.

*****

Vermin has been knocked out by Ajax. Vermin didn't know where he was. He know wakes up to see Cowboy, Sully, and Rembrandt at his hospital bed (Without their colors on ofcourse).

Cowboy: Hey. Good news, and bad news.

Vermin: Lets hear some good news.

Cowboy: Your not injured bad, and Ajax came home to join the Desolators.

Vermin: ...bad news?

Cowboy: After being brang to the hospital, your vest was taken off, and has been given to cops.. That means-

Vermin: I'M GOING TO JAIL!?!?

to be continued..

[cowboy rules]

"What the [bad word deleted] am I gonna do!?" Vermin whined
"Calm down dude, you aint goin to the slammer. Why the hell do you think we dont have our colours on? Were gettin you out" Cowboy said
"How the hell you gonna do that?" Vermin asked
"Well theres a door downstairs  that takes you outside and out the back. Were just gonna casually walk out of the ward and if anyone tries to stop us we hit em and run like hell hahaha" Rembrandt said
"Hey guys we better get goin. Vermin take this" Sully says throwing him a jacket "And put the hood up"

The Desolators start to walk down the ward towards the door. They pass the woman at the desk and several nurses before reaching the door. They are ready to walk out when a doctor comes rushing out a room near the door

"What the hell do you-"  BAM. Cowboy turns round and visciously punches the doctor in the nose. The doctor falls down holding his nose

"RUN!! GO!" Cowboy shouts. The police downstairs are informed of the commotion and rush up to the first floor, where the Desolators are. One manages to cut them off

"Hey you! Stop" The Cop shouts. The Desolators keep running towards him. He goes to draw his gun but is too slow

"[bad word deleted] you pig!" Vermin says driving a shoulder into the policemans stomach. The policemen folds over and lies on the floor clutching his stomach. The Desolators continue to run as three cops come up the stairs behind them. The police start to catch up to them and Sully realises they cant get away by running.

"We gotta lose this heat man!" He says
"Dont worry. I got this one" Reambrant says pulling a spray can out his pocket. They run for another few seconds then Rembrandt pulls a trash can down to the ground, hitting into two of the Cop's kneecaps, sending them flying. He turns around to the other one and sprays him in the eyes with his paint. The cop rubs his eyes and screams as rembrantd picks up a wooden chairs and breaks it over his head
"Sweet Rembrant" Cowboy says as he barges through the door to the outside.
"Yeah we made-" Vermin says turning round. He sees three cop cars surrounding the area and about 8 policemen
"Aw [bad word deleted]....what we gonna do?" Sully says
"Were gonna have to find somethin soon or were all [bad word deleted]ed!" Cowboy says

To be continued. This was my first time writing in this style. I'm normally more descriptive but I thought I'd go for change. The next part is being done by Vermin_2_2 or Ash-McKean. I think its Ash. Anyway I hope you liked it!

[Sleeping Dragon]

nice,dude!!

[Jigsaw]

Vermin: Run back in!
The Desolators run back into the hospital.
Vermin: Sully, you want to prove your loyalty to the Desolators?
Sully: Yeah, what should I do?
Vermin: Go-
Cowboy: No, Vermin. I know what he can do. Sully, you go out there, and put your hands up. You walk towards the cop car. Whe you get to the nearest one, put your head on the hood. Sit back up, hold you head, and fake a faint. The cops will have their attention focused on you, then Vermin, me, and Rembrandt can come out and attack them. There were eight right?
Sully: Y-yeah..
Cowboy: Okay, sounds good. Two cops each. We are Desolators, we can handle them. Go Sully!
Sully nods and walks out the door. The plan doesn't go as planned, but works better. Sully gets and idea, and hopes that the Desolators will fall into it for their benefit. Sully walks out and starts to cry. He says hes guilty and gets in the back of the first cop car. They start to drive off, and the other cars follow. (They think that Sully was the one supposed to go to jail). Then Cowboy runs out with Vermin and Rembrandt.
Cowboy: Where are you going!?! You idiot!
The first cop car notices Cowboy and doubles back, crashing into the other cars. Sully jumps out the window and sprints back to them. They turn to see one cop staring at them with a gun. Until Ajax come behind him, with ________. They are both packing heat for the first time for Desolators.

(Just for people who don't know what 'Packing Heat' means.. it means carrying guns)

[Sleeping Dragon]

nice,my man!!but what's with the blank?

[Jigsaw]

It's a person who we will tell who it is soon.

[cowboy rules]

Who is it? LOL I'm even anxious to know. You have to PM Me dude!

[cowboy rules]

BANG! The shot sounded throughout the hospital. Blood poured out the cops head as he lay lifeless on the ground

"HOLY SHIT! Ajax, Cochise, what are you guys doin here?" Cowboy said
"Well Ajax told me you guys had started up another gang and the odirnary life was becomin' pretty boring so I htought I'd give you guys a hand" Cochise said
"Guys we can talk later, we gotta get the fuck outta here" Vermin says
"Yeah come on" ully says

The Desolators run through the door again and down the stairs. The run out the hospital towards the trin station. They got the first train to Coney

"So whos this cat?" Cochise says pinting to Sully
"Hes a new soldier. The former leader of the Orphans" Rembrandt said
"I thought I recognised him from somewhere" Cochise says
"What we gonna do now?" Ajax says
"Well we better lay low for a while. You did just blow a cop's head off" Vermin says back
"Alright but I cant go without action for too long" Ajax says making them laugh. They ride back to coney laughing and jokin, forgetting their troubles.

Meanwhile....

"All of 'em"
"You want every last one of em killed?"
Yeah, I want those Desolator pussies wasted"
"Okay, I'll get all the soldiers we can on it". The Lieutenant leaves and goes to plan the attack on The Desolators.

Really short I know but Im very very tired at the moment. ENJOY!

[Jigsaw]

Vermin and Cowboy are sitting in the hangout. Vermin looks at Cowboy with a bored look on his face.
Vermin: Let's head up to the Black Cat. I need a drink.
Cowboy: ...ok sure. Rembrant! Ajax! Come here.
Ajax and Rembrandt walk over.
Cowboy: We are going to the Black Cat. Tell Sully he's in charge. Now, lets go!
Ajax: Yeah! About time we have some fun!

*****

They are in the Black Cat drinking some beer as the door flies open. Ajax, Cowboy, Vermin, and Rembrandt turn to see 10 Heavy Muscles. They run in and start beating the living crap out of them. Out of nowhere, a guy with muscles bigger than Ajax's ( ) starts beating them off of the Desolators with his baseball bat. They are all gone except one, who is laying on the floor. This man pushes his shaggy hair out of his face, behind his white bandana and hits him again. The guy dies, and the Desolators get to their feet.
Vermin: Thanks man! What's your name?
Guy: Kash..
Vermin: Well, Kash, you belong to a gang?
Kash: No, not at the time. I was in the Van Courtland Rangers, but they treated me like crap, so I took out more than half of them. Now I come here everyday.
Vermin: Welcome to the Desolators!

*****

Kash is punching a punching bag in the Desolators' hangout. Cowboy is sitting in a chair, taking notes. Cowboy looks up at him.
Cowboy: Your in buddy. Go get your colors from Rembrandt. You know, the little guy with the afro.
Kash: Y-yeah. I know.
Kash, exhausted, walks up the stairs to Rembrandt to get his colors. Kash sits down. Vermin looks at him. How big he is. His intimidating cut off jean shorts. His long shaggy hair, with his white headband. His baseball bat. This guy is Desolator material. Kash falls asleep.

*****

Kash: Wha-WHAT!?
Kash opens his eyes to see all the Desolators laying on the ground in the hangout, all passed out. A cop is walking towards him. He gets up and cracks him in the head with his baseball bat, killing him. Kash looks around. 15 cops surround him. He swings his bat down on a cops head, bringing it behind his head quick taking out a cop who was sneaking up on him. He quickly and easily jumps onto two cops. Punching one with his right hand, and hitting the other cop with his left hand holding his bat. He knocks them out. After a while he has taken out all the cops but one. The cop pulls out a gun. Kash throws his bat, hitting the cop in the leg. The cop looks up to see Kash, staring down at him. The gun shoots into the cop's face, leaving chunks of flesh and torrents of blood all over the floor. Kash puts it in his back pocket. Kash goes over and wakes up Cochise.
Kash: Cochise, lets wake them up and get their colors off.
They get their colors off and lay them in the street. Then they too take off their colors and lay in the street. A local runs to the nearest phone booth and calls in the injured people.

*****

They are all back in the hangout. Kash grabs a beer and the phone rings.
Kash: Hello?
Girl: Hey baby!
Kash: What!? How'd you get this number?
Girl: That doesn't matter. I'm coming to see you!
Kash: What!? NO! YOU CAN'T!
Girl: See you..
Kash hangs up the phone. He looks at Cowboy.
Kash: It's my olf girlfriend. She dumped me a long time ago, and I was fine with it but she won't stop calling me. She wants me back bad but I don't care, I'm in a gang now thats all that matters to me.
Cowboy: Who is she?
Kash: Lincoln. She dumped me for some guy in a gang that used to be around here. What happend to them anyway?
Cowboy (shocked): Oh my god! That was my old gang's leader, Cleon!
Kash: You close friends?
Cowboy: Well.. we were.
Kash: Your not anymore? Good, cause I'm gonna go kill him. I don't even like Lincoln, but people can't mess with me like that.
Cowboy: Yo! NEW BLOOD! YOU AIN'T DOIN NO SUCH THING! Cleon died man. He died trying to make us a big gang. This gang is a tribute to him, so you better get used to it.
Kash: Dead or not, don't screw with me. I can let it go I guess though.
Cowboy: You better be able to.
Ajax walks into the room and feels the tension.
Ajax: What the hell happend!?
Cowboy: Nothing.
Kash: None of your buisness!
Ajax walks over and grabs his shirt.
Ajax: NO ONE TELLS ME WHAT IS AND ISN'T MY BUISNESS!
Kash: Someone outta!
Ajax: WHAT DID YOU JUST SAY!?
Kash: I said someone outta tell you whats your buisness! You don't hear good?
Ajax: No, I don't hear b.s!
Kash: Maybe you will now!
Kash knocks Ajax on his butt. He starts kicking him in the side and gets on top of him. He starts punching him repeatedly. Vermin and Cowboy break it up. Ajax gets free and goes towards Kash.
Cowboy: AJAX! STOP IT! DO YOU WANT TO STAY IN THIS GANG!!??
Ajax: ..no comment "warlord". Pfft.
Cowboy: What was that?
Ajax: Oh everyone finds little Cowboy the "warlord" type. Ain't I right? I mean-
Cowboy hits him in the face. Ajax didn't expect it, and falls onto the floor.
Cowboy: Shut your goddamn mouth!
Just then Lincoln walks in the door with _________.
Ajax: What the hell!?

[cowboy rules]

"Lincoln.....Tyrone? what the fuck are you doin with my ex?" Kash says fuming
"Now hold on a sec Kash, she dumped you, she obviously didnt like you anymore so I took advantage of the situation like anyone would"  'Tyrone' replies
"What in the hell?" Vermin says to himself

Kash runs toward 'Tyrone', trying to attack him. 'Tyrone' dodges every one of his attacks and tackles him to the ground


"ALRIGHT STOP! KASH, WHY THE FUCK ARE YOU CALLIN' CLEON TYRONE AND HOW THE HELL DID YOU GET HERE CLEON?" Cowboy shouts. Everyone stops and looks at him

"The Riffs helped me but that aint important. Whats important is the fact that this gang has been turned into some shity outfit called the 'Desolators' and no one is around. Tou guys mind tellin me what the fucks goin on?"

"Maybe you should tell me what you're doin with my ex-girlfriend "Cleon" " Kash says

"Look, Cleon, everyone left so me and Vermin started our own gang. And Kash, two things, stop carin so much about you're ex and....how do you know Cleon and keep callin him 'Tyrone'" Cowboy asks

"Well me and this cat go back a long way. We was in a gang together when we was kids, 17 mabe 18 years old. As you know I was in the VC Rangers and I met Cleon at a brawlin contest. Then we became friends and started 'The Killers'. We werent very successful though. So then me n Cleon parted ways and he stole my girlfriend. Thats pretty much it" Kash says

"Okay enough. Cleon you want in the gang?" Vermin asks

"Yeah alright, but under one condition. You guys dont ever make me Warlord" Cleon says

"Agreed" Vermin and Cowboy say

Just then Remrandt and Sully burst through the door

"You guys, you guys, the Heavy Muscles they're-  CLEON!" Rembrandt says

"Yo 'sup little man" Cleon replies

"Rembrandt what about the Heavy Muscles?" Cowboy asks

"They chased us. They're about 3 blocks away" Rembrandt says

"Alright lets go. You ready for your first brawl as a Desolator Cleon?" Vermin says

"Lets do it" Cleon replies


To be continued by Vermin_2_2...

[Scotty Rave]

I think the fic's good, though maybe the last twist was a bit off. I'm pretty sure Cleon would never survive the onslaught he suffered after Luther pinned Cyrus' murder on him, even though he was a tough guy he got attacked by some huge crowd. So maybe you should go into more detail about his survival.

[Jigsaw]

I think the fic's good, though maybe the last twist was a bit off. I'm pretty sure Cleon would never survive the onslaught he suffered after Luther pinned Cyrus' murder on him, even though he was a tough guy he got attacked by some huge crowd. So maybe you should go into more detail about his survival.

Two things. One. This isn't the first fan fic to have Cleon come back. Two. Who said we weren't gonna explain how he survived? That mught have been the next part you gave away.