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 Post subject: Change of heart: Chapter three
PostPosted: Sun Aug 28, 2011 3:32 pm 
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Change of heart: Chapter three


It had been three days since Fox had taken Vixen to the hospital and she still showed no signs of waking up yet.
“Man this sucks why aren’t we raidin anythin warlord” complained Vermin for the third time this morning.
“Coz most of our soldiers are still recovering from that stunt the destroyers pulled last night” Answered Cleon getting irritated about the recurring question.
“Yeah and besides your still recovering from your hangover” laughed Rembrandt rewrapping his arm in bandages.
Vermin sulked over the pinball machine and sat down on one of the sofa’s scattered around the room after nearly falling over it causing Rembrandt to laugh even more.
Swan wasn’t amused that Vermin had gotten himself drunk yet again after the incident two days ago.
Fox walked in a couple of minutes later soaked to the bone and shivering needless to say that he was in a bad mood and the raid last night wasn’t helping much.
Fox walked past Vermin on the sofa and sat down on the stool opposite of him but closet to the heater.
Fox surveyed his surrounding’s on the far left corner snow was sprawled out on a mattress peacefully sleeping but minding the injury to his left side, Ajax was sitting by the radio listening to the Dj, Cochise was down in the gym area hitting the punching bag and Cowboy was out on patrol again.
The whole gang war with the deystroyers was getting pretty heavy even if they were led by a paranoid fuck called Vergil.
Fox sighed and rubbed his hands together trying to warm himself up and keep what little warmth he had.
“So” said Vermin looking at Fox, “I heard that you saved some chick called Vixen”
Fox nodded before he spoke “Yeah what’s it to you” Fox questioned.
“Haha also heard that she kicked some deystoryers ass man” Laughed Vermin.
Fox sighed before lying down on a random mattress before falling asleep leaving Vermin to get over his hangover alone.
At the hospital
5:57 pm
Evan though Vixen couldn’t see anything she could hear and feel everything.
Vixen wounded where she was to be able to hear so much going on around her people were running down the hallway their shoes making soft clicking sounds and heavy carts were getting wheeled down the hallway.
Once gain a sharp pain came to her hand as something was pulled out for the third time.
After a while Vixen Clenched the bed sheets causing somebody to shift beside here
Vixen slowly tried to get up but she couldn’t move which irritated her.
“Okay first things first try opening your eye’s Vixen” She thought.
Vixen’s eyes slowly opened her sight was blurry at first but after she blinked a few times everything became clear.
Vixen looked around she was in a hospital room it was painted white like most and smelled of bleach.
But what else surprised her was that somebody was sitting in the chair beside her smiling sown at her making Vixen feel somewhat helpless.
“Evening Vixen glad to see your awake” Greeted Fox

“I’ve been better Fox” groaned Vixen.
All of a sudden the door to her room burst open showing a large man and the so called “Father” of Vixen.

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 Post subject: Re: Change of heart: Chapter three
PostPosted: Mon Aug 29, 2011 12:02 pm 
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Sorry for not posting a comment before for ur fanfic vixen lol I hope you didn't think I was being ignorant or selfish or anything coz am not lk tht :o so erm yeah since you have been showing me support I'll you some feedback on ur fanfic 8-) this fanfic is awesome and I love how you've brought ur own username into the story and I love fanfics what shine some light on fox coz he is a really nice character and easy to base most things around. Yeah this story is awesome I love it..... I can't wait for some more chapters up on this boyo x :D


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 Post subject: Re: Change of heart: Chapter three
PostPosted: Mon Aug 29, 2011 5:09 pm 
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Thank you Lady Warrior lolz I didn't think you were being selfish at all lolz.
Yeah I also think that Fox is a nice character it's too bad that he died in the movie :( but anyway ending this on a lighter tune thankx for the support and get more of the Warrior chick up lolz

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 Post subject: Re: Change of heart: Chapter three
PostPosted: Mon Aug 29, 2011 8:13 pm 
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Aww thanx vixen :D and yeah it was too bad that fox died he was a very observant character lol I think that's why he was a scout hahaha :lol: erm yeah agen I absolutely love this fic it's awesome 8-) and yeah I'm goin to get my chapter posted up Tomoz if I can vixen don't worry x :D


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PostPosted: Mon Aug 29, 2011 8:17 pm 
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yay :D lolz

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