chapter1-who are they?
jack bolted up the path,he clutched his bag tightly hoping for it not to fall off "GET BACK HERE"shotued a voice from behind,jack looked back the school 'bully' damon was chasing him with 3 of his men "IM GONNA BUST YOUR HEART OUT AND WATCH YOU BLEED"shouted damon,now filled with rage,but jack still kept on running
jack reached the park he looked all around,he could see his friends lucas matty and jole hanging by the swings,jack smiled and sprinted over the to them "hey guys"jack said chucking his bag down "whoa whats the matter with you?"lucas asked "damon started chasing me and their coming this way"jack explained "you idiot"jole said reaching into his school bag,jole pulled out a car antenna "what the f*ck"matty said looking straight at the weapon "oh i grabbed it from a car,i needed it once 'cause some gang was chasing me,so i fought them off with it"jole explained
about 5 minutes had past,damon and his goons had reached the park "for an athlete damon's not that fast"lucas said laughing to himself,damon notcied jack standing by the others so he started to strut towards him "ok jack there a wooden pole over the by the climbing frame.grab it. lucas over by the slide is a bike chain once again grab it"matty explained "what about you?"jack asked "i can take care of myself" matty replied
damon reached the park,him and his men hopped the fence and they stood,lined up in front of jack and the boys "so you think you can play dumb pranks on me huh?"damon asked "no..i dont think,i can"jack replied in a sarcastic tone "oh thats it,GET 'EM BOYS"damon shouted
one of his men ran forward,but jole caught his cheek with the antenna,he swung it again catching the boys skull which sent him to the ground,another of his boys ran forward,lucas swung the chain which wrapped round his head,lucas tugged forward sending the goon toward him,the boy looked confused,so lucas brung his knee to his groin,the boy fell to the ground and lucas began kicking him,the last but biggest goon ran forward,matty being his 'equal' stepped in,he swung his fist connecting with damon's goon's face,he swung again catching him in the stomach
damon and jack were the last people that hadnt fought yet "bring it damon i aint scared of you"jack said "put the weapon down and lets fight like a real men"damon explained,jack chucked his weapon to the side and immidietly swung at damon's face,damon stumbled for a bit and regsained some energy,he grabbed jacks collar and threw him to the ground "get up"damon said,jack jumped up and pounced on damon,they tussled for abit and jack finally got damon to the ground,over and over again jack swung at his face
after a while matty and lucas yanked jack off damon,who was now a motionless reck on the floor "damon get up"one of his men said but damon just laid there not moving "no....."the same goon csaid "check his pulse"matty said,the goon stuck his two fingers by damon neck "nothing"the goon said "YOU IDIOT YOU KILLED HIM"the boy shouted,the oy reached into his pocket and pulled out a cell phone "what..what are you doing"jack asked terrified "im calling an ambulance"the boy said dialing 911 "nooooooo............ you cant do that il get done for murder and..and you'l get done for assault"jack said suddenly sprinting off "wait jack no.."mtty said trying to run after him,suddenly lucas and jole followed,hoping they would not get caught
the 4 reached the edge of the park,they ducked behind some trees and watched as an ambulance pulled up by the playground "why'd you guys come with me?"jack said "because friendstick together.......
chapter 2 up soon
hoped ya liked it (this story is kinda based on gezza's stor'the bladed furies
friends stick together
- papa arnold
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friends stick together
[url=http://imageshack.us][img]http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/6373/20255849yq4.jpg[/img][/url]AND THATS THE BOTTOM LINE BECAUSE PAPA ARNOLD SAYS SO!!!!!
Re: friends stick together
Excellent! Good work! You have great explanatory skills! I was thinking about making a fan fic like this myself soon.
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- Rembrandt_Swan_Ajax4ever
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Re: friends stick together
pretty good
keep going
keep going