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This is my first attempt of writing my own Warriors story please tell me what you think.

11:38pm four months since the meeting

“Are them cats still on us?â€

Very cool story. I liked it. Good description. You should've made a different gang wanna make a move on the A.C's.For example when you said the Furies wanted to take out The Turnbulls you should've used a gang that people aren't familiar with so the reader can say "Wow I never heard of those guys!"

Keep up the great work. Make more fan fiction stories. You have some talent.

I said it would be a while untill my next chapter but I just got so into my writing that I wrote another chapter so enjoy.

Chapter 2
“Swanâ€

You did good again. You could've made your chapter a little longer.

Baby Bear wrote: You did good again. You could've made your chapter a little longer.

Ye flew to high very good job, very good ideas... I agree BB, chapters a little longer would make your story almost perfect!!! 8)

Excellent job, keep it up! Oh, and sometimes having chapters shorter, depending on what you put in them, can still be good.

Here You go guys the long awaited 3rd chapter.Enjoy!

Chapter 3
10:42 The next night
“I’ve called you all here tonight,â€

i love it nice work

Ladies and gentleman here is the much awaited next chapter. Enjoy!

Chapter 4

The large metal doors of the warehouse were thrown open with such force that the sound echoed throughout the building. Swan stormed into the building like a mad man. “WARRIORSâ€

Its been a while but here you guys go another suspenceful chapter enjoy!

Chapter 5
Later that night…
“Yo Rembrant, where are you manâ€