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Ain't Safe After Dark (A 'what-if' story)
Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2007 4:45 am
by Space Toaster
A/N: This is just a what-if story, asking this question: “What if there was someone else on the park bench?â€
Re: Ain't Safe After Dark (A 'what-if' story)
Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2007 4:51 am
by Matty
Pretty good. I like it. I much rather have seen him get his ass kicked by a chick instead of being arrested.
Re: Ain't Safe After Dark (A 'what-if' story)
Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2007 4:53 am
by Cowboy Is Cool
Great story, I really like it. And, MAN-FRUIT! HA!

That's the funniest term for nuts I've heard in a while.
Good work!
Re: Ain't Safe After Dark (A 'what-if' story)
Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2007 2:41 pm
by New Jersey Warrior
really great stort. i liked it alot