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This here is the first in a series of vignettes I plan to write about The Warriors. Not all of them will be directly connected to the movie, but they will be related somehow. This is my first one, and I think it turned out pretty good. Let me know what you think.
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The bang. The piercing pain of a projectile entering his chest. This was all Cyrus felt as the bullet entered his body. He knew he was dying the second he cartwheeled backwards off the platform. He could feel it in his bones. He could sense the blood pouring out of the severed vein in his chest. The drowsiness began to overwhelm him as he flew towards the ground. Suddenly, a white light filled his vision, and he felt a sense of seperation. All went blindingly white, then black, then white again. He never felt the impact with the cement.

He found himself floating in a sea of ivory. There wasn't a speck of any other colour around him. It was as though he were weightless, and he didn't seem to occupy any physical space. He began to notice inconsistancies in his vision. He would see things for brief seconds, then they would be gone. Suddenly, he was floating in a hospital room. He could see two men standing at the foot of a bed, one dressed normally, the other wearing the traditional white of a doctor. Cyrus couldn't control himself, so he just sat, watching. He looked around and spotted the calender over the bed. It said "March 4th, 1956". The realization hit him like a ton of bricks. He was watching his own birth!

There was a cry of pain, followed by a cry of a different sort. The man at the end of the bed turned around, and Cyrus felt a pang of anger. His father. He was holding a small bundle to his chest. The conversation between the nurses, doctor, and his mother was loud enough to be heard. His mother was speaking, out of breath and pained, "We're naming him Marcel, after his grandfather... my god, he's so beautiful."

Cyrus suddenly found himself jerked away, and he was in the sky above Van Cortlandt Park. He saw utter chaos below. There were cops swarming in, gangs swarming out, and among all that was his body. Sitting there on the concrete, positioned like Jesus on the cross. There was a disturbance nearby. A man in a black vest was yelling at something. Cyrus knew without even thinking about it that this was the man who shot him. He seemed oddly familiar, almost as if he had seen him before. Cyrus willed the Riffs to do something, but no. They moved for another guy. A black man in a red vest. Cyrus wanted to scream, but he found that he couldn't speak. The Riffs scattered, leaving the wrongfully accused man dead on the ground. A light shot up from the corpse, and a figure flew out of it. The figure flew past Cyrus, barely even slowing down, enroute to the stars above.

Cyrus looked down again, only to see Masai staring up. Cyrus thought for one amazing second that Masai could see him... no, he was only staring at the storm clouds that were gathering. The weather was mimicing the events of the night, in a way. Masai looked back down and ran after the other Riffs. His body was left out to be battered by the elements. Another jerk, and a blast of white light.

Cyrus found himself floating in the living room of an apartment. The black and white television was on, and it was tuned to Lyndon Johnson's first State of the Union Address. There was a disturbance in the next room, then a yell. Cyrus knew what was coming. Eight year old him came flying through the door, and he smashed into the TV, breaking it. A hulking figure filled the door. His father. Cyrus knew that he would be smelling alcohol right now if it weren't for the strange absence of smell. His younger self tried to run, but his drunken father caught him and smashed his head into the ground. His dad pulled back for another punch, then went limp and fell. There was a knife in his back, and Cyrus' mother was standing there, a large bruise on her face. Cyrus remembered the aftermath of that very well. The courts, the lawyers, and the eventual exoneration of murder charges on the grounds of self-defense.

He felt himself pulled away yet again. He was in the kitchen area of a different apartment, though still a familiar one. His mother was sitting there at the table, staring into a cup of coffee.There was darkness outside. A door slammed open, and Cyrus came running into the apartment. According to the newspaper on the table, it was July 19th, 1968. The twelve year old Cyrus came sauntering into the kitchen. He was wearing a red shirt and white pants. The colours of the Delancey Thrones. He walked over to the table, "Hey mom." She looked up, "Do you know how late it is?" "Nope." "It's three in the morning Marcel-" "It's Cyrus now goddammit!" he yelled. She stood up, "Well whatever the f*ck you're calling yourself now, your curfew is ten! You know that, whether you're Marcel, Cyrus, or Joseph f*cking Stalin!"

He stared her down, "F*ck you mom. The Thrones need me now. I can't just stay out till ten and come back-" "Another thing, what's with this Thrones bullsh*t? I am sick and f*cking tired of everything being about the Thrones. I want you out of that gang. You are going to get yourself killed one of these days!" "Better to get killed doing what I love than live in this sh*thole!" "Oh, so it's a sh*thole, is it!? This apartment that I work damn hard for us to live in is a sh*thole!? Y'know what Marcel? F*ck you. I saved your ass from that crazy f*ck who fathered you, and you repay me like this!?" The younger Cyrus thought for a second, "No mom, f*ck you. F*ck you and everything you ever worked for. The Thrones are my family now. I'm out of here." "Have fun," his mother said, a steely look in her eyes. "You dumb whore," Cyrus swung at her, clocking her full in the face. She sprawled against a wall and Cyrus took off out the door. He never returned.

Cyrus felt that now familiar jerking motion. He was in a room, and there were several guys hanging around. They were all wearing Thrones colours. He was in their hangout. The DJ was on the radio, though it wasn't the current DJ. It was the male DJ that held the radio waves before the smooth voiced one they knew and loved. He was talking about a big brawl in Flushing Meadows, between the Hampton Road Homewreckers and the Carolina Road Crushers. Cyrus tracked back mentally, and found himself in May of 1971. There was a commotion at the doors, and they were kicked inwards. A fifteen year old Cyrus walked in, followed by a familiar figure. Masai. "Where the hell is Ismael!?" Cyrus yelled. A figure limped in from the next room. Ismael Rivera walked in, "Cyrus? What are you doing back so soon?" He was cut off, "You tried to get us killed, you goddamn backstabber!" Ismael looked at him with a confused look, "Cyrus, what in god's name are you talking about?" "You know what I'm talking about. We walked in on that drug deal about a half second after someone shot the place up. We saw a guy in Thrones' colours running away, and the buyers were dead. Those bullets were meant for us!"

The other Thrones started to stand up slowly, and Cyrus kept raving, "We have been planning this for a while, but consider this the casus beli! Gramercy Riffs, join me! Immediately, two of the six Thrones in the room turned to Ismael, "Sorry about this man. We're with him now." Ismael looked around in shock, "A mutiny is it?" Cyrus nodded, and groups of Thrones from elsewhere in the building started to walk in. Some walked to Cyrus, others to Ismael. Ismael spoke, "I don't know what in the hell you are talking about Cyrus. I ordered nothing in regards to you. If you think that way though, so be it. You just started a war." Cyrus turned wordlessly and walked out, followed by his people.

Cyrus watched all this from the ceiling, then faded out from the room. He was in another place. Above a park. He recognized it as East River Park, and it was in chaos. There was red and orange everywhere below, with specks of blue dotted around. Cyrus knew exactly when and where he was. It was the early morning of February 10th, 1974. He was witnissing the final reckoning between the Riffs and the Thrones. He could see a few members of the Battery Park Patriots there as well. Cyrus finally located himself, being held up by the throat by Ismael. There was a gunshot, and Ismael fell. Jamal, of the Patriots, was standing there with a gun in his hand. There was blood pouring out of a wound in his side, and the gang member collapsed about ten seconds later, unconscious.

Cyrus was jerked to a different location, though on the same day. He was sitting in a restaurant, eating breakfast. There were members of the Riffs and the Patriots at the table with him. The door to the bathroom smashed open, and a man wearing Thrones colours ran out. He was carrying a gun, and he sprinted out the front door. Cyrus watched as the scene unfolded, Jamal running out and informing them that the man had stolen the gun that Ismael was shot with. Just then, Cyrus was hit with a massive revelation. He didn't even notice when he was pulled back to the present and saw the same man who shot him speaking on a telephone. He had come upon a huge realization.

It was Luther all along. The guy who had shot the dealers in an attempt to get Cyrus killed. He could see the long hair in his memory, flying behind the Throne as he took flight down the alleyway. It was Luther. The Throne who stood just behind Ismael in the hangout later that day. It was Luther. The one who went tearing out of the bathroom after the defeat of the Thrones. It was Luther. The one who finally killed him... it was Luther. It was Luther all along. The whole reason the Riffs even existed... was Luther. Ismael had been telling the truth about that day. Luther had always held a bit of a vendetta against Cyrus, as Cyrus had stolen his girlfriend when they were thirteen. He had tried to get back at him and failed. From then on in, it was just him biding his time for a second chance. That chance came the night of July 13th, 1979.

Cyrus was pulled away again, and he found himself in the white room for the second time. He was able to walk now, though there was no tangible ground. There was another person there. Cyrus rubbed his eyes in disbelief as he stared upon his mother. She stared right back, and she spoke, "Nice to see you again, Marcel." Cyrus found his voice for the first time since the shooting. However, it wasn't the booming voice of the Riffs' leader, but a meeker version. "Mom, is that you?" "Yes, Marcel, it's me." Cyrus looked around, "What are you doing here-" "I'm dead, you fool. I killed myself two weeks after you left. Overdosed on my prescriptions. I guess you never found out. Doesn't exactly surprise me." Cyrus let out a shout of rage, "Why the hell are you so disappointed with me now? I'm dead, you're dead, we're the same."

She screamed at him, "I am disappointed because you didn't listen to me! One of the last things I ever said to you was "That gang will get you killed one of these days". Sure enough, you're dead. Dead and gone. Your body is on the way to the morgue right now, as a matter of fact." Cyrus looked on in shock, and his mother read his mind, "Yes, it is just starting to sink in. You will never live again. You will never breathe air, taste food, feel the embrace of your girlfriend. She's the one who will be affected worst by this, you know. Raising a child alone isn't easy, god knows I've tried it.

Cyrus looked at her, "Raising a child? What the hell are you talking about!?" His mother laughed, "She never had a chance to tell you. She was going to drop the bomb after your little get together in the Bronx. She found out three days ago that she's pregnant with your child. I guess those all night romps in the bed finally caught up with you." Cyrus was shell-shocked. His mother stared, "That's all I have to say to you. Go away. Do whatever. I believe your father was around Ursula Minor last I checked. I don't really keep tabs on him though. Leave now." Cyrus snapped out of his shock and felt himself slipping away.

He was floating above a beach. The sun was up, and there were people below. Finding that he could control his flight now, Cyrus flew downwards. There were six people in red beginning to walk away down the beach. There was a group of Riffs on the ground, closing inwards on a smaller group of black wearing people. Luther was among them. Thus, Cyrus got his revenge. The Rogues were left broken and battered on the beach. He saw their spirits ascending towards the heavens, and thought about giving chase. Nah, he thought. The Riffs walked away towards their vans, and Cyrus began to fly upwards. He swung downwards and passed over Manhattan. He went past the Bronx, noticing the fire trucks pulling away from Tremont Avenue Station, and headed upstate. He thought about Tuscany, the one place outside of the USA he had ever visited, and he was there. Flying through the trees and streets, taking in the sights. He then angled upwards, and he headed for his place in the stars. Cyrus was no more.

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Oh my God! =D> that was pure genius.  Everything fit together.  The life of the Delancy Thrones, The Riffs, The Destroyers, The Patriots, Luther, The Warriors, and especially Cyrus.  The world tends to fold up into a huge vortex of answers, and understandings, of ones life and the path of their destiny's.  From the future of 2045, to the legendary 1979 Warriors, it all adds up.  Cyrus soul had one more obstacle to go through, and that was the meaning of his life, and what choices he made.  This was beautiful man, thank you for this phenomenon.

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whoa that took a long time to read but it was worth it man well done :D/
[url=http://imageshack.us][img]http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/6373/20255849yq4.jpg[/img][/url]AND THATS THE BOTTOM LINE BECAUSE PAPA ARNOLD SAYS SO!!!!!

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Legendary. Amazing. Absolutely amazing. It's just so good - it's amazing! You're so incredible, your writing is mind-blowing.
It's amazing..
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Awesome... truly amazing. Really love how you managed to tie in events from the movie and the book, it gives the story a real depth. Keep it up.
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Thanks for all the comments. Here's another one I just wrote. Let me know what you think.
Rookie
It was only my first day. There was no goddamn way they shoulda stuck me out there... but they did. Well, there's nothing that can be done now. Time can't be rewound, and they'll have to live with it on their conscience.

It was about eight when I signed in. They'd gone and stuck me on night shift. Night shift in Riverside, what an amazing assignment. That was sarcasm, in case you missed it. It was surprising to see how many people were just milling around doing nothing. I didn't find out about the lack of any gang related crime that was accounting for the lack of work to do until later. The lieutenant stuck me with an older officer, guy named McAffrey. He'd been on the force for about five years, and knew the streets damn well.

First thing he warned me about was that the streets were going to be hot tonight. I didn't get what he meant. Sure, it was hot, but it was July in New York. What the hell did he expect, snow? Then it hit me. He was speaking metaphorically. I didn't question any further. A rookie knows his place. We sat around in the break room most of the first few hours of the shift. There were barely any calls coming in at all.

About eleven-thirty, one of the older officers came in and quietly called out McAffrey and two other men. McAffrey gestured for me to follow, and I did. We walked out of the precinct and headed about a block south. The others stopped, and I followed suit. The older guy, man by the name of O'Conner, pointed in the direction of 96th Street Station. It was visible from their position.

There was motion, and a group of nine people walked out of an alley. It looked like the New York Yankees had gone out for a late night stroll. "Baseball Furies," O'Connor told us, "Local gang. Numbers of about a hundred. They control Riverside Park and most of the area surrounding it." "Why the hell are we here?" one of the others asked. "Wait for it," O'Connor said. Nine other figures came in from the other side of the street. "Morningside Manhunters," O'Connor said. Immediately, we all grabbed our batons, but O'Connor raised his hands, "Watch." The two gangs stared each other down, then they both entered the station.

"What the hell did I just see?" McAffrey asked. I wanted to know the answer just as badly as everyone else. "Something big is going down," O'Connor said, "I've been on the force for nigh on twenty years now. I can only remember one night like this before." "That would be?" McAffrey asked. "Independence Day, 1965. Big group called the Delancey Thrones called a meeting in Van Cortlandt Park. To this day, nobody has found out what they were trying to do. None of the gangs were willing to talk, obviously. All we know is there was a city wide truce, a large gathering of gangs was reported in Van Cortlandt Park, and people started shooting. Ismael Rivera, that was the leader of the Thrones, got hit a few times. He ended up walking with a limp the rest of his life, but he got off alright. He aint around anymore though. Got killed in a brawl in East River Park about five years ago."

We were walking by this time. Despite the warm temperatures, I felt freezing. What the hell had I gotten myself into? He continued, "We've been getting reports from our contacts in the gangs. Something big is happening in Van Cortlandt Park tonight. Pretty much every officer of the 47th, 50th, and 52nd Precincts are going to be there, waiting. We have the opportunity to mop up a lot of major players in the gangland, and we're taking it." We re-entered the building and headed for the breakroom. O'Connor split off from the group and headed down towards the garage. Someone called after him, and he turned back, "Chief wants me on patrol at 96th Street. The transit cops won't be able to hold down the fort if anything huge happens, so a few of our guys are going in to help out." McAffrey called after in a joking voice, "Hey, remember, if you get in trouble, throw 'em on the tracks!" "Will do," O'Connor said with a laugh.

Around midnight, me and McAffrey were sent out on a foot patrol. This was my first one, and I found it rather exciting. At least, it was to start with. Within a few minutes, it was apparent that nothing was going on. Nothing at all. The streets were dead. It was as though the vibrant lifeblood of the night had been poured out of slashed veins. We ate some pizza at the shop on 94th Street. The owner seemed on edge, almost afraid. We didn't ask, though McAffrey made it clear that he could call us if there was any trouble.

After about an hour, we finally caught some criminals. It wasn't much, just some teenagers spraypainting a wall in Central Park, but it was a rush for me. It was my first arrest, and I pulled it off perfectly. The kids got brought back to the precinct, then I had to physically restrain the one's father from beating the kid to death right then and there. That was fun. After that, it was back to boredom. There was absolutely nothing happening. Not yet.

Around three o'clock, me and McAffrey were ready to head in. We heard a buzz over the radio, and a yell came through it. "We've got a 10-34 on an officer at 96th Street Station. Several suspects wearing red leather vests are evading arr- oh damn! One under, one under! Sh*t, 10-54 at 96th Street! Some kid is on the tracks!" I looked up at McAffrey, and he filled me in, "One under. It means a person got run over by a train." I felt sick to my stomach at the thought. With that out of the way, we started to head to the station with the intention of backing up the other officers. The light rain that had started earlier had tapered off, leaving humidity in it's wake.

As we walked, McAffrey stopped. He pointed down the street to an alley, where there was a black car parked. On further reflection, it was a hearse, covered in graffiti. McAffrey looked at me, "Looks like trouble. People don't just sit around in alleys inside graffiti covered hearses for no reason." I nodded, and we walked up. McAffrey knocked on the window. It rolled down and a long haired man in his early twenties stuck his head out, "Yeah?" McAffrey took the initiative, "Nothing. We were just wondering what you were doing here." "Nothing officer, just waiting for some friends of ours." I leaned in and saw that there were several others in the car. They were all wearing black leather, and they were staring back at me. "You boys know anything about the disturbance at 96th Street a few minutes ago?" I asked.

The leader looked at me with a strange look in his eyes, "I don't know nothing about no 96th Street." McAffrey had backed off and was talking quietly on his radio. He gestured for me to come over, and I did. He whispered to me, "Group of guys was reported for shoplifting at a candy shop over in Mott Haven. They match the description, right down to the hearse. They're up to no good, I can feel it." I nodded, and we walked back to the car. McAffrey spoke, "Could you step out of the car please?" The leader looked at us, "Why the hell should I?" "Because we're the police, and we say so. Get out of there before I have to drag you out."

He grumbled and the door opened. I saw the gun before McAffrey did. It went off, and I saw everything in slow motion. The shot tore through McAffrey's throat and threw him up against the wall. The man had his back turned to me, and I could see the word "Rogues" stitched into the back of his vest. I reached for my service revolver, but he was too fast. I heard the bullets long before I felt them. The first hit me in the leg, the second in the left side of my chest. I was flung back, but my bulletproof vest protected me. I took aim, and fired once, but missed. He shot off again at me, and hit me in the same spot he hit McAffrey.

My vision went wavy and I hit the ground. I didn't really feel the impact, as the bullet had shattered my spinal cord. I could feel the blood backing up, and I knew it was filling my lungs. I vaguely heard a car peel out, and I knew that was them leaving. I felt my grip on life slipping away, and started to feel almost detached from my body. I can still remember my death. The second that my brain had just had enough, and stopped transmitting signals to my body.

It was only my first day.

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wow, it goes to show you the human side of certain cops.  That some of them are just honest hard working officers trying to make a difference in a cold world.  By the way, was O'Connor the cop who through Fox in front of the train?  Nice story.  Its good to see how the realm of gang activity is seen through the eyes of another, especially the law.  Good job.

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adam88 wrote: wow, it goes to show you the human side of certain cops.  That some of them are just honest hard working officers trying to make a difference in a cold world.  By the way, was O'Connor the cop who through Fox in front of the train?  Nice story.  Its good to see how the realm of gang activity is seen through the eyes of another, especially the law.  Good job.
Thanks. And yes, I meant for O'Connor to be the cop who threw Fox in front of the train. Nice to see you picked up on that one :D

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Whoa. I am shocked into silence once again.
Thats deep, man, real deep.
Deeeeeep.
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This is awesome, can't wait to read more  =D>
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