I write,you continue!
- Ajax_41
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I write,you continue!
Ok,so i thought i write the first part of the movie,but i change it at the end,and then you continue writing another part,and then someone else will continue until The Warriors somehow get back to Coney.Or will they?Its up to you...you can change the story as much as you want!Make it crazy!
Ok, so heres the first part:
-CAAAAAAN YOOOUUU DIG IIIIIIIIT???
Cyrus shouted and lifted his arms,slowly turning around,looking over the enormous crowd of people cheering at him.The cheering was almost deafening.Suddenly there was a bang.Everyone went qiet as Cyrus fell towards the ground,nothing was heard except for his body hard hitting the ground.For a couple of seconds they all remained qiet.Then panic errupted.Total chaos.All the gang members were running in different directions.Sirens started to sound,together with the sound of thousands of feet against the ground trying to escape.
Fox-Move it!
Rembrandt-Is Cleon alright?
Fox-I think he's up there.
Rembrandt-Are you sure?
Fox-No.Come on,move it!
Swan-Everybody make it?
Fox-Just Cleon's missing.
Cochise-Cops must have got him.
Swan-Did you see him get busted?
Cochise-I seen him,then he wasn't there nomore.I was haulin ass.
Swan-Why dont you look around and make sure we're safe.
Rembrandt-No,i wont.
There,now its someone elses turn!
Ok, so heres the first part:
-CAAAAAAN YOOOUUU DIG IIIIIIIIT???
Cyrus shouted and lifted his arms,slowly turning around,looking over the enormous crowd of people cheering at him.The cheering was almost deafening.Suddenly there was a bang.Everyone went qiet as Cyrus fell towards the ground,nothing was heard except for his body hard hitting the ground.For a couple of seconds they all remained qiet.Then panic errupted.Total chaos.All the gang members were running in different directions.Sirens started to sound,together with the sound of thousands of feet against the ground trying to escape.
Fox-Move it!
Rembrandt-Is Cleon alright?
Fox-I think he's up there.
Rembrandt-Are you sure?
Fox-No.Come on,move it!
Swan-Everybody make it?
Fox-Just Cleon's missing.
Cochise-Cops must have got him.
Swan-Did you see him get busted?
Cochise-I seen him,then he wasn't there nomore.I was haulin ass.
Swan-Why dont you look around and make sure we're safe.
Rembrandt-No,i wont.
There,now its someone elses turn!
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Re: I write,you continue!
Swan: "No?" (Swan looks coldly at Rembrandt)
Rembrandt: "That's right, No! An' why are you givin' the orders? I got as much right to take over as you."
Fox: "It was Cleon's choice, Swan's Warchief."
Rembrandt: "Well, right about now Cleon's most likely got a nightstick shoved halfway up his @ss. Sh!t, I bet you can't even find the subway!"
Swan: "Maybe we oughtta talk about this back home, huh?"
Rembrandt: "What's wrong with right now?! I wanna be Warlord..."
Swan takes a step towards Rembrandt.
Swan "Make your move."
Cowboy: "Hey Rembrandt, smarten up."
Vermin: "Little man, Swan's Warchief."
Cochise: "You better do what he says."
Meanwhile, Ajax has already climbed a tomb and has spotted something in the distance... excitedly he points and shouts to the others...
Ajax: "Hey, stop bickerin' like pussies an' take a look over there!"
Rembrandt: "That's right, No! An' why are you givin' the orders? I got as much right to take over as you."
Fox: "It was Cleon's choice, Swan's Warchief."
Rembrandt: "Well, right about now Cleon's most likely got a nightstick shoved halfway up his @ss. Sh!t, I bet you can't even find the subway!"
Swan: "Maybe we oughtta talk about this back home, huh?"
Rembrandt: "What's wrong with right now?! I wanna be Warlord..."
Swan takes a step towards Rembrandt.
Swan "Make your move."
Cowboy: "Hey Rembrandt, smarten up."
Vermin: "Little man, Swan's Warchief."
Cochise: "You better do what he says."
Meanwhile, Ajax has already climbed a tomb and has spotted something in the distance... excitedly he points and shouts to the others...
Ajax: "Hey, stop bickerin' like pussies an' take a look over there!"
Hold your tongue...
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Re: I write,you continue!
*They turn and walk over*
Swan: What.
Ajax: Theres a fight comin'
Swan: How do you figure?
Ajax: Theres another gang coming.
Swan: We don't know even if the truce is off.
Ajax: Look Warlord, you can stand aroung and be a wimp, but I'm gonna go do something.
Snow: Who is it?
Ajax: Those Eliminator faggots.
*Everyone looks at Swan*
*Swan glares at Ajax*
*Ajax grins back with that cocky grin*
Swan: Lets move.
*They walk off*
Keep it going...
I like this idea Ajax_41. Everyone always talks about it, but I'm glad somee finally did it.
Swan: What.
Ajax: Theres a fight comin'
Swan: How do you figure?
Ajax: Theres another gang coming.
Swan: We don't know even if the truce is off.
Ajax: Look Warlord, you can stand aroung and be a wimp, but I'm gonna go do something.
Snow: Who is it?
Ajax: Those Eliminator faggots.
*Everyone looks at Swan*
*Swan glares at Ajax*
*Ajax grins back with that cocky grin*
Swan: Lets move.
*They walk off*
Keep it going...
I like this idea Ajax_41. Everyone always talks about it, but I'm glad somee finally did it.
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Re: I write,you continue!
*Eliminators walk over*
Eliminator:Warriors!You guys got some nerve walkin around here after what you did!
*Warriors look confused*
Cowboy:What're you talkin about?We didn't do nothin!
Vermin:Yeah,YOU got some nerve soundin us.
Swan:Cool it.Now,what do you want?
Eliminator:You know what we want,Warrior.We want you dead!
Swan:And why?
Eliminator:Oh you know why.GET EM!
*Eliminators run at the Warriors,and a large brawl begins*
Ajax:Lets get it on!
*Turnbull AC's bus rolls up*
Turnbull:Hey!It's the Warriors!
Turnbull #2:And some other clique's brawlin with em!They're ours!
*Turbull bus guns the engine,and heads right at the Warriors*
Fox:Swan!We gotta go!
Swan:Right.Run!
Ajax:Ah F**k!
Swan:Shut up and move.
*The Warriors run to the subway station,and avoid the Turnbulls*
Good idea,Ajax 41.I leave it off here.
Eliminator:Warriors!You guys got some nerve walkin around here after what you did!
*Warriors look confused*
Cowboy:What're you talkin about?We didn't do nothin!
Vermin:Yeah,YOU got some nerve soundin us.
Swan:Cool it.Now,what do you want?
Eliminator:You know what we want,Warrior.We want you dead!
Swan:And why?
Eliminator:Oh you know why.GET EM!
*Eliminators run at the Warriors,and a large brawl begins*
Ajax:Lets get it on!
*Turnbull AC's bus rolls up*
Turnbull:Hey!It's the Warriors!
Turnbull #2:And some other clique's brawlin with em!They're ours!
*Turbull bus guns the engine,and heads right at the Warriors*
Fox:Swan!We gotta go!
Swan:Right.Run!
Ajax:Ah F**k!
Swan:Shut up and move.
*The Warriors run to the subway station,and avoid the Turnbulls*
Good idea,Ajax 41.I leave it off here.
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Re: I write,you continue!
They run into the train puffing and laffing.
Vermin:Those cats were some despiret dudes!!
Cowboy:So was we.
Ajax:I just don't get what those freakin Eleminators meant.
They look around wondering the same thing when they all saw something wrong.
Cochise:Where's Rembrant and Fox?
Swan:I thought they were behind us.
Then a voice came.
Fox:We were.
Ajax:Where's Rembrant?
Fox:He's............dead.
The Warriors look around in shock.
Fox:We were running behind ya's and he tripped. The Turnbulls ran him over. Blood and guts went everywhere. And the reason why they were after us was because they think we shot Cyrus. The Roughs were the ones who did and because they saw me see them do it, they had to have blamed us.
Snow:Now we know one thing.
Ajax:What's that?
Snow:The truths is off.
Vermin:That means we're going to have to bop our way back.
O.K., someone elses turn now.
Vermin:Those cats were some despiret dudes!!
Cowboy:So was we.
Ajax:I just don't get what those freakin Eleminators meant.
They look around wondering the same thing when they all saw something wrong.
Cochise:Where's Rembrant and Fox?
Swan:I thought they were behind us.
Then a voice came.
Fox:We were.
Ajax:Where's Rembrant?
Fox:He's............dead.
The Warriors look around in shock.
Fox:We were running behind ya's and he tripped. The Turnbulls ran him over. Blood and guts went everywhere. And the reason why they were after us was because they think we shot Cyrus. The Roughs were the ones who did and because they saw me see them do it, they had to have blamed us.
Snow:Now we know one thing.
Ajax:What's that?
Snow:The truths is off.
Vermin:That means we're going to have to bop our way back.
O.K., someone elses turn now.
The Warriors ain't good. Not even really good. They're the best!!
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Re: I write,you continue!
The train roared down the tracks. Sunnedly it came to a screeching halt.
"What was that?" Vermin almost shreeched.
"Somthing's got to be going down on the tracks." Snow said. Everyone a little surpirsed to hear his voice rumble through the echoey car.
"Come on," Swan said."Let's move."
They stepped out of the train car only to be met with intence heat.
"Come on!" Ajax yelled in frustration.
"Don't get so hot under the collar Ajax" Vermin joked.
"Shut up Vermin!" Swan ordered as Ajax gave Vermin a punch on the arm.
"Look!" The Fox said with unmistakable dred in his voice.
A shadow loomed at the end of the street. They couldn't quite make out what it was yet, but no way was it somting good.
"Come on, it's nothing"Swan reassured his Warriors as the continued down the dark and urban wasteland.
"What was that?" Vermin almost shreeched.
"Somthing's got to be going down on the tracks." Snow said. Everyone a little surpirsed to hear his voice rumble through the echoey car.
"Come on," Swan said."Let's move."
They stepped out of the train car only to be met with intence heat.
"Come on!" Ajax yelled in frustration.
"Don't get so hot under the collar Ajax" Vermin joked.
"Shut up Vermin!" Swan ordered as Ajax gave Vermin a punch on the arm.
"Look!" The Fox said with unmistakable dred in his voice.
A shadow loomed at the end of the street. They couldn't quite make out what it was yet, but no way was it somting good.
"Come on, it's nothing"Swan reassured his Warriors as the continued down the dark and urban wasteland.
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Re: I write,you continue!
Okay, allow me to get off-key with this a bit... 
The Warriors march down the dark, hot street (?!) toward the shadow at the end.
Swan: "Fox, run ahead and see what it is."
Fox: "You got it, warchief."
Fox skips down the street towards the shadow... as he gets closer, the heat becomes more intense and a whirring sound can be heard...
Suddenly Fox stops in his tracks as he reaches the edge of the shadow...
Fox: Rembrandt?!
Rembrandt is standing in front of a street light, blocking it with his massive 'fro, pointing an oversized yet portable hairdryer at his mass of curls. What's more, he's wearing an Eliminators jacket. He switches off the hairdryer (the source of this 'intense heat') and looks at Fox.
Rembrandt: "Heeey Fox! What happened to you guys? One minute we're rumbling with the Eliminators and the next you all take off and leave me behind!"
Fox: "But... the Turnbulls... I saw you get hit by their bus... I saw your guts"... (his voice trails off)
Rembrandt: "Hell Naw! That wasn't me! Whilst we were rumbling with the Eliminators, some punk with a fro' stole my vest and took off running right after you guys did. I was left to fend off those yellow jacket wearin' pussies on my own... which I did. Coz I'm hard in THIS version of the Warriors story. Anyways, I got a bit wet on the walk down here, so I thought I'd stop and dry my hair while the rain let up."
Fox: "Nice colour, little man." (Fox touches the shiny yellow material)
Rembrandt: "Hey, I only took this 'coz I was cold. Don't think I ain't no Warrior!"
Suddenly Swan and the rest of the guys appear.
Swan: "Rembrandt?! What the hell?!"
Fox: "He's cool, I guess I got it WRONG when I said he'd been killed."
Ajax: "Yeah, I guess you did. Hey Rem, what's with the coat? Yellow's definitely your colour! Haaahaha!"
The rest of the Warriors laugh with Ajax... A bit like they do at the end of 'Scooby Doo' cartoons.

The Warriors march down the dark, hot street (?!) toward the shadow at the end.
Swan: "Fox, run ahead and see what it is."
Fox: "You got it, warchief."
Fox skips down the street towards the shadow... as he gets closer, the heat becomes more intense and a whirring sound can be heard...
Suddenly Fox stops in his tracks as he reaches the edge of the shadow...
Fox: Rembrandt?!
Rembrandt is standing in front of a street light, blocking it with his massive 'fro, pointing an oversized yet portable hairdryer at his mass of curls. What's more, he's wearing an Eliminators jacket. He switches off the hairdryer (the source of this 'intense heat') and looks at Fox.
Rembrandt: "Heeey Fox! What happened to you guys? One minute we're rumbling with the Eliminators and the next you all take off and leave me behind!"
Fox: "But... the Turnbulls... I saw you get hit by their bus... I saw your guts"... (his voice trails off)
Rembrandt: "Hell Naw! That wasn't me! Whilst we were rumbling with the Eliminators, some punk with a fro' stole my vest and took off running right after you guys did. I was left to fend off those yellow jacket wearin' pussies on my own... which I did. Coz I'm hard in THIS version of the Warriors story. Anyways, I got a bit wet on the walk down here, so I thought I'd stop and dry my hair while the rain let up."
Fox: "Nice colour, little man." (Fox touches the shiny yellow material)
Rembrandt: "Hey, I only took this 'coz I was cold. Don't think I ain't no Warrior!"
Suddenly Swan and the rest of the guys appear.
Swan: "Rembrandt?! What the hell?!"
Fox: "He's cool, I guess I got it WRONG when I said he'd been killed."
Ajax: "Yeah, I guess you did. Hey Rem, what's with the coat? Yellow's definitely your colour! Haaahaha!"
The rest of the Warriors laugh with Ajax... A bit like they do at the end of 'Scooby Doo' cartoons.
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Hold your tongue...
- Vermin/Cowboy
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Re: I write,you continue!
The Warriors started to head down to the next station. Fox told Rembrant about the Roughs and how they were probabley blamed.
Rembrant:Wow. That sucks.
Vermin:Now every gang in the city is looking for us. We might not even make it to Coney. We're going to get japped tonight, WE'RE GOING TO GET JAPPED!!
Ajax:Vermin, shut up and keep walking.
Vermin:O.K. O.K., calm down.
They get to the next station, but they couldn't get on because of a fire.
Cowboy:This is freakin impossible. What are we going to do now Warlord?
Swan:We have to find another station. How far away Fox?
Fox does some calculating.
Fox:We're in Tremont and the other station is about four blocks away. If we hurry, we can get there in 15 minutes.
Swan:Let's get moving.
They walk three blocks until they come to a stop. They see a bunch of gang members in green.
Fox:Orphans. Strength may be 30.
Cowboy:30 is alot more than 8.
Vermin:SEE, what did I tell you? I said we were going to get japped and you guys didn't believe me. No one ever listens to me.
All the Warriors:VERMIN!!!!
Fox:Anyway, they're so far down they ain't even on the map. Therefore they don't even no about the meeting.
Snow:Look over there.
They see a bunch of Orphans waiting there for them.
Cochise:Anybody got an idea?
Swan:Yeah, I do. Snow and Ajax, you guys come with me.
They walk over and so does two Orphans.
Sully:What are you guys doing here. You come over invading our turf. No permits, no parley.
Swan:We're not invading.
Snow:We don't really need a permit.
Ajax:And we're parleying right now.
Sully:Yeah well the Orphans have a big rep, you mess with us and you'll find that out.
Ajax:Listen baconbits, we're just trying to get to the next station.
Snow:We don't mean any harm. Just let us pass man.
Sully:You think the Orphan ain't with it, you think we're not well known?
Swan:We didn't even say that.
Sully:Jesse, give them the paper.
Jesse gives them a small peice of paper with an artical on it.
Sully:See, they write about our rades in the paper.
Ajax and Snow read it.
Ajax:Oh yeah, the Orphans, yeah your youth worker talks about you guys all time.
Jesse:We ain't got one.
Snow:Maybe cause you guys suck so much they don't want to be around you guys.
Ajax crumbles up the paper and throws it into Jesse's face.
Sully:Nothing wrong with you guys going threw our turf as long as your coming in peace.
They then hear a chicken noice. They look over and it was a women making the noice and laffing.
Sully:Cut it Mercy. You've been a pain in my ass lately.
She walks down the stairs.
Vermin:You know what that is don't ya?
Rembrant:Yeah, trouble.
Mercy looks at Ajax the whole time. AJax keeps on smiling.
Mercy:Hey.
Sully:Don't get any ideas Mercy.
Ajax:Hey retard, leave her alone. Maybe she wants a real man like me and not a sissy like you.
Sully:HEY, you mess with me you mess with all the Orphans.
Mercy:Shut up Sully. He's right.
Sully:WHAT, you actually want to be with him?
Sully just stares at Ajax and Mercy.
Sully:Everyone inside.
They go in except Sully.
Sully:Go head, go with him. But you will always be a slut.
Mercy just looks at him like she's going to cry.
Ajax:YOU SON OF A BITCH!!!!
Ajax starts pounding on Sully for 5 minutes.
Swan:Allright Ajax. We better move before they come out.
Ajax:Right. You coming?
Mercy:Yeah. Let's go.
They all get to the station and get on the train. Everyone sits down but at one end is Rembrant and Swan talking and at the other end is Ajax and Mercy.
Mercy:That was really nice, what you did back there for me.
Ajax:No problem.
Mercy then jumps on him and keeps on kissing him. They end up making out.
Cowboy:GO AJAX!!!!
Snow:YEAH!!!!
Meanwhile Swan and Rembrant were still talking.
Rembrant:Swan, about what happened in the graveyard earlier, I'm sorry. It's just that I thought something happened to Cleon and I just couldn't stop thinking about it. When one of us is missing I get angry and worried.
Swan:It's allright man. We just have to get to Coney.
Rembrant:Aren't we going to tell someone about the Roughs?
Swan:If we try to tell a gang they'll kill us before we could say anything.
Rembrant:Yeah your right. Hey the train is slowing down.
Swan:We have to wait for the next train. I remember that this was were we changed trains. The next train should be the one to Union Square.
Rembrant:Union Square here we come.
O.K., someone else's turn. And I'm really sorry if this was to long.
Rembrant:Wow. That sucks.
Vermin:Now every gang in the city is looking for us. We might not even make it to Coney. We're going to get japped tonight, WE'RE GOING TO GET JAPPED!!
Ajax:Vermin, shut up and keep walking.
Vermin:O.K. O.K., calm down.
They get to the next station, but they couldn't get on because of a fire.
Cowboy:This is freakin impossible. What are we going to do now Warlord?
Swan:We have to find another station. How far away Fox?
Fox does some calculating.
Fox:We're in Tremont and the other station is about four blocks away. If we hurry, we can get there in 15 minutes.
Swan:Let's get moving.
They walk three blocks until they come to a stop. They see a bunch of gang members in green.
Fox:Orphans. Strength may be 30.
Cowboy:30 is alot more than 8.
Vermin:SEE, what did I tell you? I said we were going to get japped and you guys didn't believe me. No one ever listens to me.
All the Warriors:VERMIN!!!!
Fox:Anyway, they're so far down they ain't even on the map. Therefore they don't even no about the meeting.
Snow:Look over there.
They see a bunch of Orphans waiting there for them.
Cochise:Anybody got an idea?
Swan:Yeah, I do. Snow and Ajax, you guys come with me.
They walk over and so does two Orphans.
Sully:What are you guys doing here. You come over invading our turf. No permits, no parley.
Swan:We're not invading.
Snow:We don't really need a permit.
Ajax:And we're parleying right now.
Sully:Yeah well the Orphans have a big rep, you mess with us and you'll find that out.
Ajax:Listen baconbits, we're just trying to get to the next station.
Snow:We don't mean any harm. Just let us pass man.
Sully:You think the Orphan ain't with it, you think we're not well known?
Swan:We didn't even say that.
Sully:Jesse, give them the paper.
Jesse gives them a small peice of paper with an artical on it.
Sully:See, they write about our rades in the paper.
Ajax and Snow read it.
Ajax:Oh yeah, the Orphans, yeah your youth worker talks about you guys all time.
Jesse:We ain't got one.
Snow:Maybe cause you guys suck so much they don't want to be around you guys.
Ajax crumbles up the paper and throws it into Jesse's face.
Sully:Nothing wrong with you guys going threw our turf as long as your coming in peace.
They then hear a chicken noice. They look over and it was a women making the noice and laffing.
Sully:Cut it Mercy. You've been a pain in my ass lately.
She walks down the stairs.
Vermin:You know what that is don't ya?
Rembrant:Yeah, trouble.
Mercy looks at Ajax the whole time. AJax keeps on smiling.
Mercy:Hey.
Sully:Don't get any ideas Mercy.
Ajax:Hey retard, leave her alone. Maybe she wants a real man like me and not a sissy like you.
Sully:HEY, you mess with me you mess with all the Orphans.
Mercy:Shut up Sully. He's right.
Sully:WHAT, you actually want to be with him?
Sully just stares at Ajax and Mercy.
Sully:Everyone inside.
They go in except Sully.
Sully:Go head, go with him. But you will always be a slut.
Mercy just looks at him like she's going to cry.
Ajax:YOU SON OF A BITCH!!!!
Ajax starts pounding on Sully for 5 minutes.
Swan:Allright Ajax. We better move before they come out.
Ajax:Right. You coming?
Mercy:Yeah. Let's go.
They all get to the station and get on the train. Everyone sits down but at one end is Rembrant and Swan talking and at the other end is Ajax and Mercy.
Mercy:That was really nice, what you did back there for me.
Ajax:No problem.
Mercy then jumps on him and keeps on kissing him. They end up making out.
Cowboy:GO AJAX!!!!
Snow:YEAH!!!!
Meanwhile Swan and Rembrant were still talking.
Rembrant:Swan, about what happened in the graveyard earlier, I'm sorry. It's just that I thought something happened to Cleon and I just couldn't stop thinking about it. When one of us is missing I get angry and worried.
Swan:It's allright man. We just have to get to Coney.
Rembrant:Aren't we going to tell someone about the Roughs?
Swan:If we try to tell a gang they'll kill us before we could say anything.
Rembrant:Yeah your right. Hey the train is slowing down.
Swan:We have to wait for the next train. I remember that this was were we changed trains. The next train should be the one to Union Square.
Rembrant:Union Square here we come.
O.K., someone else's turn. And I'm really sorry if this was to long.
The Warriors ain't good. Not even really good. They're the best!!
- Ajax_41
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Re: I write,you continue!
The doors opened and the Warriors stepped onto the Union Sqare platform.
Vermin:"Oooohhwhooa! Hold on a second guys."
Ajax:"What?"
Vermin:"Over there."He pointed towards a set of stairs.All of them looked and saw 7 Lizzies sitting there,looking back at them,speaking qietly to eachother.Of course,the Warriors didnt know they were Lizzies.
Ajax:"A bunch of wool,so what?"
Cochise:"Thats something i've never thought i'd hear from you,Ajax!"
Ajax:"Yeah,well i've got my own bit of wool right here!",Ajax replied,pulling Mercy closer towards him.She smiled at him.
Swan:"Let's go.We havent got the time for this."
Vermin:"But Warchief..."
Fox:"Look,now's really not the time to trying to chase down girls.We got to worry about the hundreds of gangs trying to chase down US.So just do what Swan tells you to do,Vermin."
"Guess youre right...jeez..."
They start to walk towards the exit.
Vermin:"Oooohhwhooa! Hold on a second guys."
Ajax:"What?"
Vermin:"Over there."He pointed towards a set of stairs.All of them looked and saw 7 Lizzies sitting there,looking back at them,speaking qietly to eachother.Of course,the Warriors didnt know they were Lizzies.
Ajax:"A bunch of wool,so what?"
Cochise:"Thats something i've never thought i'd hear from you,Ajax!"
Ajax:"Yeah,well i've got my own bit of wool right here!",Ajax replied,pulling Mercy closer towards him.She smiled at him.
Swan:"Let's go.We havent got the time for this."
Vermin:"But Warchief..."
Fox:"Look,now's really not the time to trying to chase down girls.We got to worry about the hundreds of gangs trying to chase down US.So just do what Swan tells you to do,Vermin."
"Guess youre right...jeez..."
They start to walk towards the exit.
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Re: I write,you continue!
"Look who's got a one track brain now, Vermin." Ajax teased.
"Yeah, whatever, man."Vermin said.
"Cut it out guys."The Fox said. "Stop goofing around and stay sharp."
"How about some tunes, Snow?" Rembrant asked.
Snow put on the default radio station of The Warriors. Nothing special really, just a rock station. Rembrant started humming some random Led Zeppelin song.
"So, what were you doing with a two-bit gang like the Orphans anyway?" Fox asked Mercy.
"You know, just getting aroud." Mercy answered with a glint in her eye.
"What about me?" Vermin started,"I got the-"
"Shut up Vermin!" The Warriors shouted, starting to laugh at the predictabilitly of their close friend.
"Jelous Ajax?" Vermin asked.
Mercy whispered something in Ajax's ear. He chuckeled a bit and looked at Vermin. Somthing made Vermin look away but he didn't know what. Maybe he thought Mercy said somthing about him.
They continued down the street with the raidio on softly.
"Cool it,"Swan warned, "Turn that off, I think I hear somthing."
"Were gonna get japped!"Vermin gasped, the other Warriors glaring at him and not daring to make a sound. When Swan said he heard somthing he was ussaly right.
Swan was the type of guy who could keep his head clear in any situation. No matter what was happening around him he could keep it cool. This is one of the majior reasons Cleon chose him for War Cheif.
"Yeah, whatever, man."Vermin said.
"Cut it out guys."The Fox said. "Stop goofing around and stay sharp."
"How about some tunes, Snow?" Rembrant asked.
Snow put on the default radio station of The Warriors. Nothing special really, just a rock station. Rembrant started humming some random Led Zeppelin song.
"So, what were you doing with a two-bit gang like the Orphans anyway?" Fox asked Mercy.
"You know, just getting aroud." Mercy answered with a glint in her eye.
"What about me?" Vermin started,"I got the-"
"Shut up Vermin!" The Warriors shouted, starting to laugh at the predictabilitly of their close friend.
"Jelous Ajax?" Vermin asked.
Mercy whispered something in Ajax's ear. He chuckeled a bit and looked at Vermin. Somthing made Vermin look away but he didn't know what. Maybe he thought Mercy said somthing about him.
They continued down the street with the raidio on softly.
"Cool it,"Swan warned, "Turn that off, I think I hear somthing."
"Were gonna get japped!"Vermin gasped, the other Warriors glaring at him and not daring to make a sound. When Swan said he heard somthing he was ussaly right.
Swan was the type of guy who could keep his head clear in any situation. No matter what was happening around him he could keep it cool. This is one of the majior reasons Cleon chose him for War Cheif.
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Re: I write,you continue!
Swan was right. He COULD hear something. It was the sound of their train to Coney Island leaving the platform at the station they'd just left.
Cochise: "Hey man, why did we just leave the station?! We just missed our ride home!"
Snow: "It was Ajax_41's idea. He had us get off the train and leave for some reason. I'm not sure what reason that is yet."
Suddenly the Warriors stop in their tracks. The Lizzies have followed them out of the station and circled them. One of them raises a gun and points it straight at Mercy. She barks loudly...
Lizzie With Gun: "YOU, get over here."
Mercy: "What? But..."
Lizzie With Gun: "NOW, B!TCH!!"
Mercy leaves Ajax's side and scurries towards the Lizzie with the gun. With a shove, the girl pushes Mercy towards another one of her fellow Lizzies who quickly restrains her, throwing a hand over her mouth. The girl then points her gun at the Warriors in a threatening manner.
Lizzie With Gun: "You 'Warriors' are coming with us, and you're gonna do EXACTLY as we say. Anyone tries ANYTHING funny, and I pop one of ya. And just to show you we ain't playin' around..."
She finishes her sentence sharply and aims the gun at Mercy. The Lizzie that was holding her lets her go and quickly steps to one side as... *BOOM!*
A bullet rips through Mercy's chest and she drops to the ground, without so much a scream.
Ajax: "YOU..."
The Lizzie quickly points her gun back towards the Warriors.
Lizzie With Gun: "Shut it... I hear one word out of ANY of you... ONE WORD! And I drop you like I did your girly friend here. Now MOVE IT! We're gonna go pay the Riffs a little visit..."
With that, she motions the Warriors back down the street towards the subway station. They exchange glances at each other before slowly walking, almost single file, along the empty, wet road.
"This is all Ajax_41's fault." Cowboy mutters under his breath.
Meanwhile, looking on from the shadows, a couple of Furies have been watching the whole scenario. One of them slowly turns to another. His face twists into an evil mess of yellow and black...
Cochise: "Hey man, why did we just leave the station?! We just missed our ride home!"
Snow: "It was Ajax_41's idea. He had us get off the train and leave for some reason. I'm not sure what reason that is yet."
Suddenly the Warriors stop in their tracks. The Lizzies have followed them out of the station and circled them. One of them raises a gun and points it straight at Mercy. She barks loudly...
Lizzie With Gun: "YOU, get over here."
Mercy: "What? But..."
Lizzie With Gun: "NOW, B!TCH!!"
Mercy leaves Ajax's side and scurries towards the Lizzie with the gun. With a shove, the girl pushes Mercy towards another one of her fellow Lizzies who quickly restrains her, throwing a hand over her mouth. The girl then points her gun at the Warriors in a threatening manner.
Lizzie With Gun: "You 'Warriors' are coming with us, and you're gonna do EXACTLY as we say. Anyone tries ANYTHING funny, and I pop one of ya. And just to show you we ain't playin' around..."
She finishes her sentence sharply and aims the gun at Mercy. The Lizzie that was holding her lets her go and quickly steps to one side as... *BOOM!*
A bullet rips through Mercy's chest and she drops to the ground, without so much a scream.
Ajax: "YOU..."
The Lizzie quickly points her gun back towards the Warriors.
Lizzie With Gun: "Shut it... I hear one word out of ANY of you... ONE WORD! And I drop you like I did your girly friend here. Now MOVE IT! We're gonna go pay the Riffs a little visit..."
With that, she motions the Warriors back down the street towards the subway station. They exchange glances at each other before slowly walking, almost single file, along the empty, wet road.
"This is all Ajax_41's fault." Cowboy mutters under his breath.
Meanwhile, looking on from the shadows, a couple of Furies have been watching the whole scenario. One of them slowly turns to another. His face twists into an evil mess of yellow and black...
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Hold your tongue...
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Re: I write,you continue!
The Lizzies were taking the Warriors to the station when the Furries came out. They beat up the Warriors til they were all dead, except Ajax. The Lizzie with the gun came up to him and pointed the gun at him.
Lizzie:Say hi to your girlfriend.
Then..........
Vermin:AJAX!!!! WAKE UP YOU IDIOT. THE TRAIN TO CONEY ISLAND IS HERE SO WAKE UP!!!!
Ajax:WO, I just had the craziest dream.
Mercy:About what?
Ajax:Mercy, your allright.
Mercy:And your sexy.
Ajax and Mercy laff.
Vermin:You guys coming?
Ajax:Yeah, come on Mercy.
The doors opened and the Warriors stepped onto the Union Sqare platform.
Vermin:Oooohhwhooa! Hold on a second guys.
Ajax:What?
Vermin:Over there.He pointed towards a set of stairs.All of them looked and saw 7 Lizzies sitting there,looking back at them,speaking qietly to eachother.Of course,the Warriors didnt know they were Lizzies.
Ajax:A bunch of wool,so what?
Cochise:Thats something i've never thought i'd hear from you,Ajax!
Ajax:Yeah,well i've got my own bit of wool right here!,pulling Mercy closer towards him.She smiled at him.
Swan:Let's go, we haven't....
Ajax:STOP!!!! We going to wait right here.
Swan:Ajax, why did....
Ajax:SHUT UP!!!! WE ARE WAITING RIGHT HERE TIL THE TRAIN COME THAT WILL GO TO STILLWELL AVENUE.
Swan:............ O....K.
Afetr 5 minutes the train comes and they get on but Ajax watches the Lizzies from the window til the train was moving so they didn't get on. The Lizzies couldn't believe it.
The Warriors were finally safe. They were on the train that went to Coney.
Vermin:Big Cyrus, he was going to run the whole city, what crap that was.
Cochise:Cyrus was right about one thing, it's all out there, all we got to do is figure out a way to go steal it.
Snow:Sounds great, but all we got to do is figure out what's wearth stealin.
Cowboy, Fox, and Rembrant were sleeping. Swan, Snow, and Cochise were falling asleep. And Ajax, Vermin, and Mercy were wide awake.
Mercy:What are your names?
Ajax:Ajax.
Vermin:Vermin.
Mercy:I mean your real names.
After a minute they said there names.
Ajax:David Pencala.
Vermin:Adam Sansi.
Mercy:David and Adam.
Ajax:Yep.
Mercy:Now what David?
Ajax:We wait til the train gets to Coney.
O.K., someone else go.
Lizzie:Say hi to your girlfriend.
Then..........
Vermin:AJAX!!!! WAKE UP YOU IDIOT. THE TRAIN TO CONEY ISLAND IS HERE SO WAKE UP!!!!
Ajax:WO, I just had the craziest dream.
Mercy:About what?
Ajax:Mercy, your allright.
Mercy:And your sexy.
Ajax and Mercy laff.
Vermin:You guys coming?
Ajax:Yeah, come on Mercy.
The doors opened and the Warriors stepped onto the Union Sqare platform.
Vermin:Oooohhwhooa! Hold on a second guys.
Ajax:What?
Vermin:Over there.He pointed towards a set of stairs.All of them looked and saw 7 Lizzies sitting there,looking back at them,speaking qietly to eachother.Of course,the Warriors didnt know they were Lizzies.
Ajax:A bunch of wool,so what?
Cochise:Thats something i've never thought i'd hear from you,Ajax!
Ajax:Yeah,well i've got my own bit of wool right here!,pulling Mercy closer towards him.She smiled at him.
Swan:Let's go, we haven't....
Ajax:STOP!!!! We going to wait right here.
Swan:Ajax, why did....
Ajax:SHUT UP!!!! WE ARE WAITING RIGHT HERE TIL THE TRAIN COME THAT WILL GO TO STILLWELL AVENUE.
Swan:............ O....K.
Afetr 5 minutes the train comes and they get on but Ajax watches the Lizzies from the window til the train was moving so they didn't get on. The Lizzies couldn't believe it.
The Warriors were finally safe. They were on the train that went to Coney.
Vermin:Big Cyrus, he was going to run the whole city, what crap that was.
Cochise:Cyrus was right about one thing, it's all out there, all we got to do is figure out a way to go steal it.
Snow:Sounds great, but all we got to do is figure out what's wearth stealin.
Cowboy, Fox, and Rembrant were sleeping. Swan, Snow, and Cochise were falling asleep. And Ajax, Vermin, and Mercy were wide awake.
Mercy:What are your names?
Ajax:Ajax.
Vermin:Vermin.
Mercy:I mean your real names.
After a minute they said there names.
Ajax:David Pencala.
Vermin:Adam Sansi.
Mercy:David and Adam.
Ajax:Yep.
Mercy:Now what David?
Ajax:We wait til the train gets to Coney.
O.K., someone else go.
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The train glided over the tracks and Vermin drifted off to sleep. Ajax looked over at Mercy and started to kiss her. They were interupted when CowBoy rolled off the subway seat while sleeping. It didn't matter much anyway, the doors from the next car opened and two prom cuples walked over and took a seat. Why they decided to move to this car was unknown but they did it anyway.
"What are you looking at, huh?" Mercy said in a offenceiev tone.
"Nothing much." One of the men of the group said flaty, with a sneer on his face.
"Hey man. Just leave them alone, they don't look to friendly." His buddy said to him under his breath.
"You know," the first boy said ignoring his buddy "Maybe you 'ot ta get you self cleaned up alittle. Jeez! Ya think you were raised in a barn."
This was enogh for Ajax. Completley out of chacter his walked over to the boy.
"Excuse me sir, I belive that we miss understood you."
"You heard me, retard."
"Look, you scuffed your new shoues."Ajax said pionting at the ground. When he looked down at his shoues Ajax toook a knee to his head. "Maybe you 'ot to find a new car then, huh?"
"Ok, ok." They got up from the train car seats and walked to ward the door. The one male nursing his nose said under his breath "Bitch."
"What was that?"asked Ajax. The question did not need to answered, he was already throgh the other car not wanting more pain from Ajax.
"What was that about?" asked CowBoy half awake. But, by then Ajax and Mercy were alraedy kissing again. "Get a room" said CowBoy, rolling over to go back to sleep. Ajax extended a single middle finger toward Cowboy. Yep, the old Ajax was back.
P.S. That part about the intence heat, I ment to put a part about a fire. That's why they had to get off the train. I guess I forgot.
"What are you looking at, huh?" Mercy said in a offenceiev tone.
"Nothing much." One of the men of the group said flaty, with a sneer on his face.
"Hey man. Just leave them alone, they don't look to friendly." His buddy said to him under his breath.
"You know," the first boy said ignoring his buddy "Maybe you 'ot ta get you self cleaned up alittle. Jeez! Ya think you were raised in a barn."
This was enogh for Ajax. Completley out of chacter his walked over to the boy.
"Excuse me sir, I belive that we miss understood you."
"You heard me, retard."
"Look, you scuffed your new shoues."Ajax said pionting at the ground. When he looked down at his shoues Ajax toook a knee to his head. "Maybe you 'ot to find a new car then, huh?"
"Ok, ok." They got up from the train car seats and walked to ward the door. The one male nursing his nose said under his breath "Bitch."
"What was that?"asked Ajax. The question did not need to answered, he was already throgh the other car not wanting more pain from Ajax.
"What was that about?" asked CowBoy half awake. But, by then Ajax and Mercy were alraedy kissing again. "Get a room" said CowBoy, rolling over to go back to sleep. Ajax extended a single middle finger toward Cowboy. Yep, the old Ajax was back.
P.S. That part about the intence heat, I ment to put a part about a fire. That's why they had to get off the train. I guess I forgot.

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The train slowed down. They arrived at Coney. They all step out and look around. Ajax, Vermin, and Mercy were talking.
Ajax:This is what we fought all night to get back to? Nothing makes sence anymore.
Vermin:What are you saying? You just going to take off?
Ajax:No, if I'm a Warrior, I'll die a Warrior.
Mercy:Well if you do take off, take me with you, I like to travel to.
Vermin:Where have you ever been?
Mercy:Nowhere, I just know I like to.
The three of them smiled.
Mercy:How come you guys are like this?
Vermin:Like what?
Mercy:You guys fight then you's laff and have a good time. How come your like that?
Ajax:That's what families are like.
Mercy:Families? What do you mean "Families"?
Vermin:Me and Ajax are cousins.
Ajax:His dad is my unkle. We grew up together.
Vermin:We had each others backs.
Mercy:That cool.
Ajax:We better get with the others.
Vermin:Let's go.
They walk past the carnavel area with the The Wonder Wheel. They start to head down to the hangout, but all of a sudden, a black car came right behing them. They started to run at get under a peir. Luther then made a noice with some beer bottles and chantted.
Luther:WARRIORS, COME OUT TO PLAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!
Swan:We got one more bop to go. It's the Roughs.
Fox:Let's get packed.
Ajax:It's about time we get to fight them lying bastards.
Snow:Let's do it.
Rembrant:Let's do it for Cyrus.
Cochise:For Cleon to.
Cowboy:For us.
Vermin:KILL THEM ALL!!!!
And for the first time, they agreed with Vermin.
They all grabbed a weapon, even Mercy.
Ajax:I don't want you to do this with us.
Mercy:I can handle myself Ajax. Please let me do this with you guys.
Ajax:Allright, let's go.
Right before they ran to the beach, Swan had a quick talk with Ajax.
Swan:Give me your chain.
Ajax gives him his chain.
Ajax:Now everyone has a weapon but me.
Swan:Here.
Swan gives Ajax his bowie knife.
Ajax:Swan, Cleon gave this to ya, I can't take it.
Swan:Keep it. Your a better soldier then me. I'm stepping down as Warlord and naming you the new Warlord. I'll be Warchief.
Ajax:Thanks.
Mercy:You guys coming? Come on.
Ajax and Swan rushed down to the beach by the ocean. The Roughs were then walking toward them.
O.K. some one else go.
Ajax:This is what we fought all night to get back to? Nothing makes sence anymore.
Vermin:What are you saying? You just going to take off?
Ajax:No, if I'm a Warrior, I'll die a Warrior.
Mercy:Well if you do take off, take me with you, I like to travel to.
Vermin:Where have you ever been?
Mercy:Nowhere, I just know I like to.
The three of them smiled.
Mercy:How come you guys are like this?
Vermin:Like what?
Mercy:You guys fight then you's laff and have a good time. How come your like that?
Ajax:That's what families are like.
Mercy:Families? What do you mean "Families"?
Vermin:Me and Ajax are cousins.
Ajax:His dad is my unkle. We grew up together.
Vermin:We had each others backs.
Mercy:That cool.
Ajax:We better get with the others.
Vermin:Let's go.
They walk past the carnavel area with the The Wonder Wheel. They start to head down to the hangout, but all of a sudden, a black car came right behing them. They started to run at get under a peir. Luther then made a noice with some beer bottles and chantted.
Luther:WARRIORS, COME OUT TO PLAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!
Swan:We got one more bop to go. It's the Roughs.
Fox:Let's get packed.
Ajax:It's about time we get to fight them lying bastards.
Snow:Let's do it.
Rembrant:Let's do it for Cyrus.
Cochise:For Cleon to.
Cowboy:For us.
Vermin:KILL THEM ALL!!!!
And for the first time, they agreed with Vermin.
They all grabbed a weapon, even Mercy.
Ajax:I don't want you to do this with us.
Mercy:I can handle myself Ajax. Please let me do this with you guys.
Ajax:Allright, let's go.
Right before they ran to the beach, Swan had a quick talk with Ajax.
Swan:Give me your chain.
Ajax gives him his chain.
Ajax:Now everyone has a weapon but me.
Swan:Here.
Swan gives Ajax his bowie knife.
Ajax:Swan, Cleon gave this to ya, I can't take it.
Swan:Keep it. Your a better soldier then me. I'm stepping down as Warlord and naming you the new Warlord. I'll be Warchief.
Ajax:Thanks.
Mercy:You guys coming? Come on.
Ajax and Swan rushed down to the beach by the ocean. The Roughs were then walking toward them.
O.K. some one else go.
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Re: I write,you continue!
So... The Warriors made it back to Coney WITHOUT fighting any Furies? WITHOUT fighting any Lizzies? WITHOUT fighting any Punks? Just some jumped up love story betwen Ajax and Mercy?! Is this all we're gonna get?! Where's the action gone?
Ajax_41 said make it crazy! C'mon people... :doubt:
Ajax_41 said make it crazy! C'mon people... :doubt:
Hold your tongue...