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Well the name comes from a real gang my cousin was in back in my hometown of Santa Ana Orange County.my cousin David Vega died in the summer of 05 ,so im writing this as a tribute to him.



Shaolin Land aka Stanton Island April 26,1975 6:00pm
David Vega is out of jail,and is on his way home.


David-Taxi!
(A taxi pullls up,and David hops in.)

Taxi Driver-Where to man
David-Crooke avenue
Taxi driver-Orale

(The taxi drops him off in front of an apartment building on the corner of crooke ave. and st paul pl. he goes inside his apartment and sees his cousin sitting there with a six pack of beer.)

David-SLAMERS!!
Slamers-What up Solo!you outta jail now
David-yea
Slamers-we should go somewhere
David-I don't know,i just got out and wanted to rest
Slamers-Ey lets go kick it at  Prospect park
David-Well yea i guess so

(they head down to prospect park and see two guys messing with some girl)

Guy1-c'mon girl,let me get some of that pussy
Girl-[bad word deleted] off asshole
Guy2-we're gettin some action from you one way or another,wether you like it or not

(David and Slamers recognize the two and call them out)

David-ey [bad word deleted] you punk ass loperz*Loperz was the enemy gang of my cousins and his crew*
Loper1-Que pues Solo,lets throw down!
David-Orale homes

(David and the loper stare each other down,the loper puts on some brasss knuckles,and as he does that,David rushes him.The loper gets dropped,David gets on top of him and starts punching him repeatedly
As he does that,the other loper kicks David in the side,Slamers comes up behind the guy,and elbows him 
on the back of the head.he goes down.David has beaten the guy up,and he ain't even moving no more.Slamers is stomping on the other guy,the guy turns over and vomits up blood.)

David-Lets dip on outta here before the cops show up
Slamers-Yea fool lets go

What do you think so far,comments will be greatly appreciated

So far its really good. write more, i want to know what stuff david and slamers get into next with the Loperz.



im sorry your cousin died. Real sad. 

David's apartment 8:00 pm,later that day

David-Damn Slamers,we fucked those fools up
Slamers-yea man,I know they ain't shit
David-Let them come at me,they know where it's at
(CRASH!!)
David-What the fuck was that

They both look out the window.Slamers' car is on fire

Slamers-Oh shit my fucking car!!!!

Seven Loperz are standing outside

Slamers-Ima fucking kill those bitches
David-not now esse,there's only two of us,and seven of them. we'll call up some homies
and deal with it later.
Slamers-I guess let's take the fire escape so they won't see us leave
David-Orale

The Next day

David(now in Slamers house)-Let's call up Lucky*Lucky is an actual member of Los Crooks*
Slamers-yea man I'm pretty sure he still lives in the hood.
David-and call up your brother George*my cousin George was also in Los Crooks*
Slamers-alright,ey u want me to call Toba*another cousin in Los Crooks*
David-Fuck yea,we're gonna need as much muscle as we can get,but first I gotta call my mom
cause she doesn't know I got out of jail yesterday
Slamers-Simon'

David calls his mom,talks to his three younger brothers,and then says he'll be there later.
Slamers is makin the fone calls to his homies and tellin them that the Loperz are starting shit

(SHIT!,My bad people,Prospect park is in Brooklyn not in Staten Island)

George,Lucky and Toba are coming from Lucky's house who lives on the corner of crooke ave,and ocean ave.They are headed to Slamers pad who lives on Bedford and Clarkson avenue.they get there in a short amount of time.they go in and greet them

George-Whats up Solo
David-Nuthin much coketo,how bout u  you guys have been fine or what (Toba and Lucky both nod)
George-well yea,but I'm having trouble with paying my mom the rent
David-Oh man,again
Slamers-fool you better stop freeloading and blowing your money on drugs and shit,and get a job so you can pay mom
George-I don't waste it on drugs,I waste it on bitches and hos
David-Whatever,well you guys are here for a reason,we can catch up later,right now lets get down to business
Slamers-Those Loperz have been asking for an ass kicking,its time los crooks take prospect park and the turf around it
George-Hell yea!
David-As of now,we are offically stoppin los Loperz

i cant write much,i got school,pleez fell free to leave comments

The Crooks are headed to Prospect park and are looking for some loperz to wreck
Solo (a.k.a.David)is Leader,Slamers is Luietenant(i dont know if I spelled it write)
George is bringin up the rear,and Toba and Lucky are soldiering.

At Prospect park,the Crooks see the 7 Loperz

Slamers-Ey Bitches!! remember me,You pussies blew my ride up!
Lead Loper-Yea so what,you guys messed with the Loperz
Solo-Naw man,you guys messed with a girl,we're gonna return the favor, if you punks have a problem,then do something about it!
Lead Loper-YOUR ALL FUCKEN GAY
Solo-Let's Throw it Down!!

The Fight is on and it begins,Solo takes on the lead loper,and Slamers tackles two other loperz,George headbutts one in the nose,and decks another 3 times in the face,Toba starts swinging at one,and gets him 4 times on the upper brow,he drops him and starts kicking him,Lucky is on fire,he is hittin another loper,he picks him up and slams him on the floor,then picks him up again just to knee him in the face,after the loper falls,Lucky stomps on his stomache and face,Solo is rockin the lead loper,Solo gives him punch after punch,he punches him in the gut,then in the face,then on the back of the head.Slamers is gettin killed,as one loper holds him,another one punches him in the face,then in the stomache.Slamers starts bleeding,and then Lucky comes up behind the loper whos decking Slamer,and cracks his neck.Solo has beaten up the lead loper.He's on the ground and not moving,George has tooken one loper down,but the other has managed to elbow George in the chest,Toba decks him in his grill,and the last loper falls

Solo-That's right Putos!!Los Crooks are back,and you levas can't do shit!!Tell your friends about us!Let them know we are coming for them,and we are taking back what's ours...PROSPECT PARK!!!

(Police sirens)

Lucky-Ey esse,Vamonos!!!
Toba-Simon'
Solo-OK let's get the fuck outta here

April 28,1975,the next day,Lucky's pad
Lucky and Toba are just chillin

Lucky-So the Crooks are back,and we are stoppin the Loperz
Toba-that's right esse
Lucky-We should celebrate,I say we go down to 10th street
Toba-have you been smokin crack holmes,or what,that's loperz turf
Lucky-Fuck the Loperz,you saw what we did to the,and they were 7,and 5 of us
Toba-yea but,on 10th street,there's like 70,and 70 to 2 ain't gonna happen
Lucky-they don't know that we are in Los Crooks,so no te preocupes
Toba-Fine

Lucky and Toba take the bus down there,they get off and see 15 Loperz standing there

Lucky-Oh Shit
Toba-Run!!!

To be continued Esse's...

you have some real writing talent, i cant wait to read more.