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After the movie

Posted: Tue Feb 21, 2006 12:43 am
by Tylor
They all get into the hangout were Swan wanted to say something.
Swan:We lost 2 of our best soilders last night. But we still don't know what happened to Fox.
Mercy said that a cop grabed him and that's all she saw.
Vermin:But she also said she saw a train coming before she ran up the stairs. So the cop could've....
Swan:Don't even say it. I already feel bad that I didn't make Ajax come with me, Cowboy, and Snow.
Cowboy:We already told you last night before we faced The Punks, he was like that. Besides, I wanted to stop those cops from taking him.
Snow:If I didn't go with you, you'd be with Ajax. Afterall, I stopped you, remember.
Cowboy:Oh I remember 3 squad cars, 8 cops, and 1 Ajax that was going to jail.
Swan:Anyway, I've thought about it, and I've decided to take of with Mercy.
Rembrant:You can't, we need you Swan.
Swan:It's to late, we're going. But the last thing I want to do is go get Ajax. You guys in?
Vermin, Cochise, Cowboy, Rembrant, and Snow decide to go.

LATER ON

Ajax:I just can't believe this happened. I should've gone with Swan.
Swan:Yeah, you should've.
Ajax:How the f#ck did ya guys get in here?
Snow:We snuck in ya idiot.
Vermin:We even got the keys.
Vermin opened the cell door and Ajax was free but still in his prison cloths.
Vermin:Ya know orange is definnetly your color.
Ajax:Very funny. Just come with me.
Ajax found his cloths and quickly put them on.
Swan told him all about the night.
Ajax:So that's why every gang was after us.
Snow:We would've known right away if you didn't smash my sterio over that guys head on the train when we were going to the meeting.
Ajax finished and reallize something.
Ajax:Oh sh#t, where are my gloves?
Vermin:Do ya even need them?
Ajax:You f#ckin sh#itface, those were my brothers before he died.
Vermin:Sorry.
Ajax found them and they left.
Ajax:Where's the others?
Snow:Swan told them to stay at the turf.
Vermin then told what Swan was going to do and Ajax couldn't believe it.

SWAN'S LAST DAY

Swan:Before we go, Vermin your still the Bearer and new Warcheif and as for the new Warlord............it's Ajax.
Ajax:Look Swan, I'm sorry about that night. It's just that I wanted to nail down some wool.
Swan:It's O.K., Warlord.
Swan and Mercy left. But just 2 weeks later, someone came in the hangout. It was Cleon.
Ajax:Holy sh#t, Cleon. We thought you were dead.
Cleon:No. I just got out of the hospital. Where's Swan?
Ajax and the others tell what happened, what might of happened to Fox, and how Ajax was Warlord and Vermin was Warcheif.
Cleon:I'm still in but Ajax, you can still be Warlord.

The Warriors never saw Fox, Mercy, or Swan ever again.

Re: After the movie

Posted: Tue Feb 21, 2006 5:12 pm
by Sleeping Dragon
it could be a bit better,but its alright.

Re: After the movie

Posted: Fri Apr 28, 2006 12:44 am
by Mercy88
:? im sorry but... IT SUCKS!

Re: After the movie

Posted: Fri Jun 09, 2006 6:25 pm
by Vermin/Cowboy
Can ya at least give me a break,  I tried.

Re: After the movie

Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 7:38 pm
by Ajax jr
u rushed it man, but good try.

Re: After the movie

Posted: Thu Jun 22, 2006 3:55 pm
by taylor
quote after quote :doubt:

Re: After the movie

Posted: Thu Jun 22, 2006 5:22 pm
by Vermin/Cowboy
A Scurvy Dog, thanks 4 dat. Ur right, it does take time 2 make a good fan fiction!!

Re: After the movie

Posted: Sat Jun 24, 2006 8:01 pm
by coney77
Nice try, pass it along to Walter hill.

Re: After the movie

Posted: Tue Jun 27, 2006 8:51 pm
by Kartoon
Mercy88 wrote: :? im sorry but... IT SUCKS!
wow....nno reason to get rude about it