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Big Moe vs Cochise Part 2

Posted: Sun Jan 22, 2006 6:08 pm
by Alex
In the year 1978 on December 31st at 3:00 am Big Moe arrived at Cochises door.

Big Moe:OPEN THE DOOR BABY BOY!!!

(Cochise wakes up from sleeping)

(Big Moe punches a hole threw the door and unlocks the knob then opens it)

(Cochise gets up and grabs a pocket knife from outta his closet)

(Big Moe comes walking up the steps)

(Cochise: (Whispers - What the h*** is this fat mutha f**ker doing here?...)

(Big Moe smashes down Cochises bedroom door)

Big Moe:READY OR NOT HERE I COME!!!

Cochise:GO TO H*** FAT BOY!!!

(Cochise swings his arm back with the knife and aims for his head)

(Just as hes about to throw it Big Moe ducks)

(The knife gos into the wall)

Cochise:D*MMIT!!!

(Big Moe runs towards Cochise and tackles him then gets off of him)

(Cochise on the floor holding his arm)

Cochise:B**TARD!!!

(Big Moe sees the windows open)

Big Moe:BOPPERS!!!

(The Boppers get outta the car and run inside the house up the stairs and threw the door)

Big Moe:CUFF HIM!!!

(One of the Boppers reverses Cochise and cuffs him)

Cochise:WHERE DID YOU GET THE CUFFS?!

Big Moe:HA!HA!HA! COPPERS FOOL!!!

(They bring Cochise downstairs and out the door)

Big Moe:MAKE ANY MOVEMENTS AND YOUR DEAD!!! HEAR ME?! DEAD!!!

Bopper:GET IN THE CAR!!!

(The Bopper pushes Cochise in the car)

Cochise:I THOUGHT I KICKED YOUR...

Big Moe:SHUT UP!!!

(Big Moe drives to Boppers hangout)

(Big Moe gets outta car and pulls Cochise by his afro)

Cochise:GET YOUR FAT HANDS OFF MY FRO FAT BOY...

Big Moe:SHUT UP!!!

(Big Moe leads Cochise to a chair with a bunch of rope on it)

(Big Moe sits down Cochise and gets his Boppers to tie him)

Big Moe:YOU THOUGHT YOU'D GET AWAY WITH THIS HUH?!

Big Moe:YOU THOUGHT YOU'D BEAT BIG MOE AND JUST GET AWAY WITH IT?!

Cochise:F**K YOU!!!

(Big Moe picks up chair with Cochise in it and throws it at the wall)

(Cochise is on the floor trying to get up but Big Moe kicks Cochises face)

(Big Moes girlfriend opens the door then all the Boppers and Big Moe go towards her)

Big Moe:ILL BE BACK YOU DONT GO NOWHERE!!!

(Cochise gets up off his stomach to on his knees then he stands)

(Cochise runs out the Exit door)

(Cochise runs down the street he sees Snow and Cowboy talking to the Chef at the food market he runs up to them)

Cowboy:HEY MAN...

Snow:SUP?

Cowboy:WHY THE H*** ARE YOU TIED IN ROPE?!

(Cowboy grabs the chefs knife outta his hand and cuts the rope)

Cochise:THAT FAT A** BROKE INTO MY HOUSE WHEN I WAS SLEEPING AND KIDNAPPED ME...

Snow:WHO?!

Cochise:BIG MOE...

Snow:I THOUGHT WE KICKED HIS A**?!

Cochise:WE DID BUT HES TAKING REVENGE ON US...

(Big Moe and his Boppers came running down the street)

Big Moe:THERE HE IS IN THE FOOD MARKET!!!

(They ran all the way untill they reached Coney Island)

(Big Moe and the Boppers see them on Coney Island and run down the hill Luther was standing on in the film)

Big Moe:NOWHERE TO RUN BABYS HA!HA!HA!

(The cops are standing on the hill Luther was standing on)

Cop:YOUR UNDER ARREST!!!

Cochise:OH S**T!!!

(The three Warriors and the Boppers both run right with the Cops chasing them)

(After a while Big Moe turns around facing the Cops)

Big Moe:OH THATS IT DIE!!!

(The Cops all pull out there guns)

Cops:YOUR UNDER ARREST FAT BOY!!!

(Big Moe Puts his hands up in the air and gets cuffed)

(The 3 Warriors were still running from the Boppers but not Big Moe)

(The Warriors turned around and took out the Boppers)

Cochise:WHERE DID THAT TUB O LARD GO?!

Cowboy:I THINK HE GOT ARRESTED...

Snow:OK LETS GET HOME NOW THERE GONNA BE WORRIED ABOUT US...

Big Moe vs Cochise Part 2

Posted: Sun Jan 22, 2006 6:33 pm
by Alex
This is my 1st story so if you dont like it plz dont put it down. :D

Not bad..

Posted: Mon Jan 23, 2006 3:13 am
by Baby Joker
not bad!!! NOT BAD AT ALL! :D *sorry if the little pic thingy don't show up my comp is screwed over* I love that fight scene you ought to continue like maybe moe breaks outta jail or something. send me a message if you ever need help ok?

Big Moe vs Cochise Part 2

Posted: Mon Jan 23, 2006 11:41 pm
by Furies4life
I really liked it. I got confused in one part. They are running untill they reach Coney Island. So they ran from Harlem to Coney. I am just sayin.

Re: Big Moe vs Cochise Part 2

Posted: Sat Feb 04, 2006 10:56 pm
by MiddleMan07
Good, but if Big Moe kidnapped Cochise and took him to Harlem, why would the Warriors be just down the street? And that would be a pretty long run back to Coney Island. Good story though, keep on writing.  :)

Re: Big Moe vs Cochise Part 2

Posted: Tue Feb 07, 2006 3:59 pm
by Alex
Still thinking what i should do on part 2.