Change of heart

[The Vixen Scout]

A young girl lay face down on the cold concreate after getting a metal pipe to the head.
"Haha this wimp cant even hold his up own" laughed a solder from some gang.
they had probally mistaken her for a boy becouse she preferd to keep her hair cut short and she likes to wear baggy tops to hide bad memories, she tried to get to her feet but another hard wack came across her sholders sending her back to being face first on the ground.
That was it.
She'd had enough.
she rose up and uppercutted one of the guys,fliped another and then kicked the last one standing in the groin.
leaving the three men on the ground the girl began to limp away hoping the rain would ease the pain of her head and her foot.

"hey wait up...HEY" said a voice but it fell on deaf ears becouse the girl quickend her pase
she could hear the person jogging to catch up with her but she just kept on going.
All of a sudden she lost her footing and fell again hurting her ankle even more her vision became blurd with tears but she wouldn't let them fall that hasn't happend since she was 13.
About two seconds later she felt herself hoisted back up into the air and back onto her feet.
"you need to be more carefull round her destroyers dont take kindly to strangers" stated the man.
"Thanks" mermerd the girl,"this isn't your turf so why are you here" asked the girl.
"ummm wweeelllll about that im scouten for my gang Even though I know the the whole of Coney and more like the back of my hand" laughed the man.
she smirked.
"sooo do you need help getting home or somthing lady" he asked
"yeah that would be great oohh Im Estal but most people just call me Vixen though" she replied.
"I'm Fox you know with them movies you could be in our gang but the only problem is that your a girl" laughed Fox
"Yeah shame"said Vixen.
The rest of the walk to her house was quite unenventfull.
"thanks for walking me home Fox"
"no problem next time we meet I should Invite you to the hang out and get you uest to the streets" offerd Fox
"thanks I'll think about it Fox, night"
Vixen clsed the door letting a sigh escape her lips maybey going to the hang out with Fox would help lighten her mood she thought.
"ESTAL GET YOUR SORRY ASS THORUGH HER NOW" came the bitter voice of her father he was a fat ugly man and his kindness went as far as his good looks needless to say that wasn't far.
"where were you bit*h" asked her father.
"sorry father I should have told I was going out for a walk" replied Vixen, Vixen braced herself for a blow to the head whtch came as normal it knocked her for six.
"next time it won't be a blow to the head girl, now get on with your work or else" commanded her father.
"yes father sorry father" aplogised Vixen

[the lady warrior]

i really like this and i think you should continue it, becos i would like to see how the story develops over time. also i think for your first fic it is really good, plz continue it vixen!! also if you need any advice on your fanfic or if you want a lil romance added in it just go ahead and PM me!!

[The Vixen Scout]

thanx Lady Warrior i appreciate the comment lolz i might get more up today or tomorrow becouse i have to juggle homewark as well lolz