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the warriors-a love story chapter 10

Posted: Sat Dec 12, 2009 12:59 pm
by the lady warrior
sorry guys for not posting my next chapter for a long time,coz i had to write up some more chapters on paper first...its sad to say in a couple of more chapters this fan-fic will be finished but dont worry my friends coz i have the perfect ending and least its not ending on this chapter, the lady warrior is back in buissness,LETS ROLL!! 8) :D

                                    chapter 10
                                    the hangout

Swan new what was going to happen if he didnt end this party,so he acted quickly and said"WARRRIORS GET ARMED AND READY" and they did but he told them to stay put until he gave his word. he told snow and vermin to take dianna to his apartment to keep her safe,then just as she left he kissed her goodbye because with how many beast's there are outside he could die and some of his soilders were drunk so they would probally try thier best and might even become invinceable but he would fight to the death if he had to. after that he explained calmly"party girls get out its for your own safety but go out the back door and make an escape home", they did what he had demanded and went out then he made a signal to ajax(he wa still kinda drunk but the shock and rage of them coming back made him sober up a bit) to start the rumble!! they went out and suprisinly they were calm and spoke" hey the warriors of your wondering why we came here well why cropsey came is becoswe want your hangout,your rep and his revenge, so if you have a little bit of intelligence you will run and run fast" then ajax jumped infront of the whole of the warriors and shouted" you stupid fucks think you can take us down,well you cant coz we have ot a heavy rep and theres more of us than you. so what have you got that makes you think you'll take us down THE BEASTS"!!

Cropsey replied"well look what i've got in my pocket A GUN WE ALL HAVE GUNS HAHA YOUR DEAD" and with that the rumble began!! the warriors charged with ajax and swan at the front,swan saw that snow and vermin had came back well he never told them to come back but he knew dianna would be fine, they crashed into them some of them screamed as tey fell to the ground swan ran over to cropsey but was stopped a number of times by other gang members. so he just grabbed them and punched them down a roung house kick, bashed ther heads together and handed them to snow and ajax to finish them off, he didnt have to look to know they were fine. he dodged some bullets then wacked a gun out of one of the beasts hands and pistol wipped another then ran to cropsey and he didnt care if anyone was behind him and pointed the gun at him:
"why did you come back you knew that your gang would get wiped out just look" he looked and saw a load of gang members geting head butted,booted,lethally punched and then finished off, he started to cry.
"look i never wanted to start this its just...just i had so much anger inside about my brother getting killed i mean he was evil but he was my brother, you must understand like theese are your brother's and they are not even related and you would have revenge inside of you if they died...imagine how i felt becos luther was actually my brother", swan thought long and hard and said" i'll tell you what your rite but like all them innocent young bloods you killed and we did the same but as the mafia say its only buissness. so ill make an offer you stop having all this revenge in you for your brother becos he wouldnt want you to be like this..well he would..but thats not the point,ill understand that you'll never forgive us for that or the riffs but you gotta understand we never killed him they did and it was for his own goodm becos he would of got killed by all the gangs in new york city in-anyways. so here's the close line you join us,or you die right here becos e cant keep watching you threatning us all the time and playing with our soilders lives, so whats it gonna be, cropsey"!!

So thats the end of chapter 10, i hope all this action made you excited and thank you for all the peope that have waited patentiley for this and supported me throughout this fan-fic, also find out what cropsey decides in chapter 11, thanx boppers adios!!

Re: the warriors-a love story chapter 10

Posted: Sat Dec 12, 2009 4:05 pm
by Dud
Another nice chapter, lady warrior. It was worth the wait.  :D

So yeah, good piece. It was pretty exciting with all the action in it, and that was a nice cliffhanger to end on. To be honest, I could believe Cropsey & Luther were brothers, and that's why Luther bullies him so much. Was still a nice twist though. I just hope Dianne's been okay during this fight.  :shock:

Anyway, overall, good chapter, and I hope the last few chapters are as good as this. Keep it up.  8)

Re: the warriors-a love story chapter 10

Posted: Sat Dec 12, 2009 4:53 pm
by the lady warrior
aww thats so sweet :D..thanks for the continous support and thanks for saying its worth the wait too, your story is coming along great you and lots of other people on this forum as a very talented writing gift and i appreciate all the good no thats not the word more like.....UNBELIVABLY OUTSTANDING TALENNTED PIECES OF WORK, i could go on and on about how brilliant yours and other members stories are yeah and thanx for the support agian dud!! 8)