The OutBreak.

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The OutBreak.

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Its now been two weeks. Ever sicne those stupid Russians did that experiment on those Homeless the whole world went wrong. Obviously it started in Russia. There was some strange cases of people eating each other... Then Europe got infected and god Knows how Asia and my place of America got infected. Its everywhere and no one is safe.

They were Evacing everyone out on several rooftops for the past 3 days and me and my buddy Jason spent 2 travelling there on foot. When we got there, there was nothing. No Chopper no people and no safety zone. Well actually i lie there was some people. 3 Infact just like me and Jason. 3 Other Survivors who are now my family. You got Me (Jak) Jason, Courtney,Isaac,Dwayne & Rambo. Dont ask me why he's called Rambo but thats what he said (he even wears a red headband and is pretty muscular)

So here we are sitting on a lonley rooftop with limited supplies.
"What weapons do we have?" Isaac asks spinning a Large Knife around.
"I got two Handguns" Dwayne says holding them up.
"Baseball Bat" Jason replies
"Chainsaw" Rambo says reving it up
"Frying Pan" Courtney says in shame...
"... Jak?" Isaac asks
"Huh oh sorry, erm Nothing" I reply in even more shame than Courtney.
"Here take this" Dwayne says chucking me a handgun. I have had very little expirience with guns and i was sure i was going to shoot one of these guys with it.

I tilt me head slightly to the said to see Courtney peering over the roof to the ground. He see her suddenly look away and bury her head in her knees like she's done somthing wrong. Jason sits next to me with his IPod on his ears listening to some good Old Metallica. Who were probably dead by now. He smile which he notices and replies with the same kind of smile.

"Whats the plan big man?" Dwayne asks looking up at Isaac
"Im not the leader here. We're all equal" Isaac replies holding his hands up like he has surrenderd.
"Your a smart guy though and smart guys like you normally have some sort of plan up dere sleeve" Dwayne continues to ramble on about Smart people and how their different from him. I can see Rambo paying full attention and occasinally chuckling. Courtney still buries her head in here knee while Jason & Isaac try and block out Dwayne. Me. I just sit here hoping things are going to change.

All of a sudden there is aloud bang from the Roof Door. Rambo immidietley stands up holding up his Chainsaw with his hand on the clutch. Jason looks dead at the door wide eyed. With one slow motion he takes on earphone out and plaving it under his worn out shirt. Dwayne cocks his 9MM as do i. I could hear Courtney gaso as another Bang is heard. This time me & Jason both hop to our feet. Isaac hoods his knife in hand and stands next to the door ready for it to burst open. Dwayne helps Courtney up who holds her Frying Pan close to her chest.

With one massive swing the door swings open. and about 5-7 Zombies come Piling it. Dwayne lets off a shot ripping through the head of one. Isaac lunges forward catching one in the neck with his knife. Rambo boots on in the chest sending it flying back into 3 more and starts to decapitate them with his Chainsaw. I let off a couple shots hoping to catch some witch i do. the final one staggers towards me. It stretches out its arms and with one bi lunge it jumps at me taking me off guard. It holds onto me like a Baby & Mother i angle the gun in place and shoot it in the stomach hoping to kill it but it only wounds. He falls down landing on both fee tlooking at the wound. Suddenly it grows angry, but Luvkily out of nowhere Rambo comes flying towards litrally spearing it to the side. He grabs it by the collar and headbutts it so hard that it flies over the hightened ledge of the roof and falls down below.

Its all silent for a minute. Every looks at their feet and the sound the breaks it is the sound of the Falling Zombie landing on a car. Unluckily for us moments after the car alarm sounds. Everyone looks at eachother wide eyes. Dwaye shakes his head and looks over the edge.
"We better get moving NOW!" He says pushing Isaac through the door aswell as Courtney. Jason follows after looking over the edge of litrally screaming. Before exiting through the door i peer over the edge just for a second. Dozens of Zombies are attracted to the car. I suddenly whip my head back and carry on down the flights of staires taking two or three at a time.

As we reach the bottom we duck behind the reception desk. About 3 Zombies are staggerig around outside. Jason hops over the desk using one hand. I try to stop him but his movements restrict mine. He darts forward readying his Baseball. He swings catching one in the head. He pushes another out the way and goes crashing with the last one taking it out with a Dump tackle. In the distance the soudns of Zombies can be heard getting closer. We were doomed surley
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[url=http://imageshack.us][img]http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/6373/20255849yq4.jpg[/img][/url]AND THATS THE BOTTOM LINE BECAUSE PAPA ARNOLD SAYS SO!!!!!

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Interesting. My friend, this looks good so far, and I do hope you continue with it; I haven't read a zombie story in a long time. Like I said when I commented on The Pack, you do have very good descriptive skills.

Only one negative thing I can comment on, and that is just to make sure you proof-read your work before posting. I noticed a few small things like missing capital letters, and you sometimes typed the wrong word ('said' instead of 'side'.) May I suggest maybe typing your work up on Microsoft Word or something before posting?

Regardless, it is still a good story and I look forward to the next installment.  :D

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We had exited the Evac building where we had missed our ticket out of this hell-hole. Isaac & Rambo had been argueing all afternoon about where the group should go. Apprently they both feel that one of them should be our leader. Jason had not stopped listening to his Ipod and was driving me nuts that he didnt talk. Courtney & Dwayne had been flirting with eachother which was sweet.

We reached the ball park about 3 blocks away from the Evac-Station. Dwayne & I took to scouting it our using our Hand-Guns as we had the best weapons. I crouched behind a Bush and looked across the park & the astro-Turf. There was a group of Zombies staggering around occasionally swiping at eachother. Dwayne had snuck forward. He ducked under a bench and watched them for any sudden movements. Suddenly there is a loud rustling noise in the bush behind me. My heart jumps and i turn over onto my back holding my Handgun out waiting for the Zombie to appear, but no. No Zombie just a small Jack-Russle darts out the bush barking and jumping around. My heart slowly stops racing as i realise Dwayne had crept beside me. I look at him and Nod.

As we arrive back to the others they were hung on the edge of the park in a Semi-Circle stair case. Courtney had perched herself o na stone wall with Jason crouched beside it leaning against looking into the sky Miming along to the words on his Ipods. Rambo & Isaac had stopped argueing and were now just Planning a different root all together.

"Whats it like down there?" Isaac asks
"Just like everywhere. Deserted apart from those Zeds" Dwayne replies taking a seat next to Courtney and smiling at her.
"Me and Ram' decided we should try and make it to the bridge. Any queries?" Isaac explains
"None"
"Nope
"Nahh"
As the series of Replies are returned Isaac notes them and turns back around to plan the route.
"Wait is that what i think it is? Jason says suddenly standing up. This is the first word he's said all afternoon.

All of our heads turn to Jason and follow his eyesight. We all squint through some fog and realise a big neon sign reading 'Ammunation- All your firearm needs' A smile reaches my face, i dont even realise i am smiling. Suddenly Rambo darts off towards the sign followed by Jason who places his Ipod in his Pocket. Dwaybe helps courtney off the stone wall and they begin Jogging. Isaac fodls some paper in his pocket ans follows after us all.

We reach the shop the door is jammed shut, but that is quickly sorted by Rambo as he saws through padlocks with his Chainsaw. He kicks the handle and the door flies open. He first enters reving his Chainsaw incase somthing jumps out on us, but his eyes clearly widens as he see's the rows open rows of Guns stakced on the shelves and Racks.
" Alright gang, take as much as you can carry, because going loaded." Rambo says dropping his chainsaw.
"Holy Shit! look at all this Man!" Dwaybe says placing his HandGuns on the shelf and forgetting about it.

All of us spend atleast half an hour in the shop choosing and Re-Choosing Guns to carry. All of our eyes wide open and our lips stretching as far as we can smile. We all are loaded for our long journey.

Isaac || 2x Desert Eagle w/ Combat Blade & Grenades
Rambo || M16, 9MM w/ Machete & Grenades
Dwayne || 2x Uzi's w/ Grenades
Courtney || AK-47 w/ Combat Blade & Grenades
Jason || Tec-9, Remington Shotgun w/ Grenades
Me || Combat Shotgun, Desert Eagle w/ Machete & Grenades


We were all set.
[url=http://imageshack.us][img]http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/6373/20255849yq4.jpg[/img][/url]AND THATS THE BOTTOM LINE BECAUSE PAPA ARNOLD SAYS SO!!!!!

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You seem to know your stuff about guns, haha. I must say Dwayne looks pretty set with his two Uzis, but that's only because I love automatic guns (in video games, heh, I'm not old enough to carry a firearm just yet.)

Anyway, another nice chapter. Can't help but think that seeing as you've loaded these guys up, something big must be coming their way soon, and I can't wait to see it. Good job so far; keep it up.  8)

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Re: The OutBreak.

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Haha you know the score Dud! i got somthing cool planned for this storyline... Its good that i can do both my Twilight Fic aswell as this...as they both need to necessarily end i can just gradually add to them as time goes on XD
[url=http://imageshack.us][img]http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/6373/20255849yq4.jpg[/img][/url]AND THATS THE BOTTOM LINE BECAUSE PAPA ARNOLD SAYS SO!!!!!

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