The new warriors!!! tell me what you think

[Rembrandt_Swan_Ajax4ever]

Swan and Mercy were talking about the future of the warriors and where they would be in a year.
Swan called a meeting between the warriors and dicided to take off with Mercy. " Snow your the new warcheif and vermin your 2nd in comand" Swan said.
"Now i know not everyone made it back so i want a minute silence for Cleon,Fox and Ajax.

After the meeting,Swan handed over his vest and walked away.
On his way to the train station, he noticed 3 cop cars in the area.
Why are they here? Swan was thinking.
he countinued to the station with Mercy.

Back at the hangout,The Warriors got a phonecall. Rembrant answered 'Hello, Who is this?"
"Its me i escaped the police station.Those faggots didn't know what hit em.
"Ajax?'' Rembrant replied.
"Look i got to go theres police everywhere, i"ll be there later.
The phone goes dead.

''Oh my god" Remberant shouts
"What? What happend" Cowboy replies
"I think Ajax might be back"
                                    To Be Countinued...................
                               
                                    Plz tell me what you think

[Dud]

I don't think I've ever read a story where Ajax doesn't come back, ha-ha. I guess everyone likes writing about him.

Liking it thus far, a little short but it's your opening chapter, so there's not much to be said. I just look forward to seeing what you can do to the new Warriors and how they function without Swan.

Keep it up, and please continue. 

[Rembrandt_Swan_Ajax4ever]

i havent been on for ages so il make chapter soon