the warriors-a love story chapter5

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the lady warrior
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the warriors-a love story chapter5

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                                          chapter5
                                          2 days later

It had been two days since Swan had last seen or heard from Dianna,he thought to himself she must not be interested in me anymore or she might be still angry with me after what i told her.Swan was listening to bopper f.m the dj was saying:"hi boppers im here to spread the word of gangs all around the big nyc the latest news some small-time crew apprently called the beasts said thier after the warriors,i suggest babbies you better start packing. In other news the riffs are holding a tagging competion down by gramecy thats all adios boppers"! Swan suddenly jumped up"WHAT THE FUCK WAS THAT ALL ABOUT,NOBODY BUT NOBODY COMES AFTER THE WARRIORS-ARRHH" he was in such a rage he began smashing the chairs up and told all the party-girls to get out of his hangout until ajax went over to try and stop him"Swan come on man lightin up,we can sort theese guys out thier only a small-time crew..i mean thier not even on the riffs network"
"FUCK U AJAX" he swung at him and bust his nose then hell broke loose and the 2 mucsly warriors were laying into each other and it took 7 warriors to get them off each other. ajax was dragged off by cowboy and 3 newbloods called"wire,fish and rocket all of them strugggling to keep hold of him while he was shouting abuse at him,swan was being holded by snow,rembrandt and cochise he was also shouting abuse at ajax,then they both calmed down!

Later on that night swan apolagised to ajax and he said"sorry ajax i was just so mad about theese gangs messin with us and i just went crazy,sorry about busting your nose...it was werid losing my cool becos i never normally do that ya no" ajax replied"im sorry too i mean i shud of never layed into you like that becos after all warriors aint suposed to fight each other,so yeah sorry....oh i almost forgot to tell you rembrandt went up to that taggin competion with cowboy and vermin.rembrandt said that the beasts will probally be there and if they start with them he's gonna bust some heads" snow suddenly sprang out of his seat.
"shit look the beasts have got rembrandt,vermin and cowboy they look really banged up and theres loads of them fuckers warlord what we gonna do", swan said quickly"everyone listen up not all of us will go out cos they will get scared and probally's kill them cos one of them's got a gun so about 40 of us will go out and listen to what they have to say,ok everyone get packed just incase" they all do as they are told then swan takes his 40 warriors outside with him and stands at the door. he says"what do you want with us",then the leader of the beast's says"i want revenge"
"what are you talkin about we havent done shit to youse" then the leader takes his hat off its CROPSEY from the rouges! ajax shouts"cropsey what the hell you still doin alive i thought the riffs wasted you horrible sons-of-a-bitches"
"yeah thats what you thought,but when they were killin the rouges they only knocked me out but they thought that they killed me,so now im here to get revenge for me and luther becos he was my brother and your guys here won that taggin trophy they thought they were the best but they didnt know that round the corner of the station they wud bump into us" swan said"let them go man..i mean look at them they're already banged up enough,now you've got your revenge man just let them go"
"no,i havent your wrong to get even i'd have to kill all of you to get even you fuck-faces and now youse are gonna pay you assholes"!

BAMM cropsey had pulled the trigger and it went striaght into rembrandt swan suddenly screamed"nooooooo,you idiot lookm what you've done are u proud of yourself"
"yeah and it feels so great"
"WARRIORS WRECK,EM ALL".
the warriors charged at the beasts and swung right-hooks left-hooks,roundhouse-kicks and headbutts untill fianally they were all wiped out and cropsey was the only one left swan charged at him and headbutted him then dragged him by his head and swung into the wall cropsey was knocked out.... then BAMM cropsey had some how had enough strength in him to shoot swan in the back then cropsey ran away laughing cruelly!
is swan and rembrandt goin to make it find out in chapter6,plz comment and chapter6 will be comin soon,adios boppers!! :D :p

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Re: the warriors-a love story chapter5

Post by Dud »

Wow, poor Swan and Rembrandt.  :(

Another nice chapter, lady warrior. The return of Cropsey was quite the surprise.  :shock:

Although I think you made Swan overreact a little. I know he's unhappy about Mercy and Dianna, but maybe yelling "FOOK YOU AJAX" and hitting him was slightly too angry. Also, I think Ajax was a little too nice. He's more likely to go "Screw off, faggot," than to apologise.  :p

All in all though, this is doing good, and I'm looking forward to seeing what happened to Swan and Rembrandt. Keep it up.  :D

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Re: the warriors-a love story chapter5

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OMG i hope they live..... come on right another
i have a reason, so there fore i am not a rebel without a cause

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