Lynks' Journey as a Warrior
Lynks' Journey as a Warrior
This is a new fan fic, i like writing them up. This is a story about Lynks, and his story as a Warrior.
The first part will be up sometime later today.
The first part will be up sometime later today.
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Re: Lynks' Journey as a Warrior
" Where are we" I ask Snow who is stood to the left of me.
"East Harlem" he replys looking at me like i'm a spaz or something.
We make our way across the dark street, and hide behind a wall. I peer around and see 2 Boppers talking to each other on the other end of the street, one seemed to have a yellow top underneath and the other had a black top underneath.
" what can we do now" i ask still looking at the 2 Boppers.
" Follow me" Snow says as he starts to run down the alley way. I follow him, untill we end up close to the two Boppers. They were still talking, talking about girls or someone like that. Snow points towards the club where the Boppers like to party.
" right, we are going to cocktail that Club, then meet up with Swan at the Train Station" Snow orders. I nod and turn to face the 2 Boppers, they had their backs turned to us, and seem to mention The Warriors, but i couldn't here it clearly enough to pick out entirly what he said.
" Now" Snow whispered, and we cracked the necks of the Boppers. We run towards the Club, and stop where Swan planted the cocktails.
" ready?" snow asks me, and i nod. We picks a Cocktail up each, and threw them at the Club which was across the road from where we were standing, mine went threw the bottom window to the right as Snows went to the left, we threw one more each and made break for it. I started to run down the street before turning towards the train station, we made it up the stairs, before meeting Swan on the platform. I gasped for breath, all that running. The train pulled up, and we stepped on board, i took a seat next to Snow, and we both looked at each other before turning to Swan.
End of part 1
"East Harlem" he replys looking at me like i'm a spaz or something.
We make our way across the dark street, and hide behind a wall. I peer around and see 2 Boppers talking to each other on the other end of the street, one seemed to have a yellow top underneath and the other had a black top underneath.
" what can we do now" i ask still looking at the 2 Boppers.
" Follow me" Snow says as he starts to run down the alley way. I follow him, untill we end up close to the two Boppers. They were still talking, talking about girls or someone like that. Snow points towards the club where the Boppers like to party.
" right, we are going to cocktail that Club, then meet up with Swan at the Train Station" Snow orders. I nod and turn to face the 2 Boppers, they had their backs turned to us, and seem to mention The Warriors, but i couldn't here it clearly enough to pick out entirly what he said.
" Now" Snow whispered, and we cracked the necks of the Boppers. We run towards the Club, and stop where Swan planted the cocktails.
" ready?" snow asks me, and i nod. We picks a Cocktail up each, and threw them at the Club which was across the road from where we were standing, mine went threw the bottom window to the right as Snows went to the left, we threw one more each and made break for it. I started to run down the street before turning towards the train station, we made it up the stairs, before meeting Swan on the platform. I gasped for breath, all that running. The train pulled up, and we stepped on board, i took a seat next to Snow, and we both looked at each other before turning to Swan.
End of part 1
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Re: Lynks' Journey as a Warrior
" So what now" i ask quite sarcasticly as i fell my face so i could know if i had cut my self of something like that. Swan just stares at me, and i stare back. The train stops and we get of, we are back in Coney. The Hangout is near the station, and we walked to it. As we were getting closer we noticed two cops searching for someone.
" Do you think it is one of our guys" Snow asks Swan, i turn towards Swan like i'm thinking the same thing. Swan Shrugs and continues to look. Swan hasd been very quiet since Mercy disserpeared last month. Swan turns around and picks up a glass bottle and throws it towards the beach, it smashes and the cops go in the direction where the bottle smashed, and then we ran towards the hangout, we bursted in, and all the Warriors turned to see us, we stared back,
" Whats up" John says to me, and i nod back.
I walk towards the Mirror across the room, and look at myself.
I am 19 years old, around 5ft10 inches tall, i got hair like Swans, but more of a darker brown colour, i have blue eyes as well. I wear My Warriors vest and my body is bare, i have got pecks and a six pack, with a big scar going down my left peck. I wear black jeans, and black trainers. I turn around and see all my friends drinking and chatting to each other. I head towards Snow, and start chatting to him. Snow is the one i get along with the best out of all the Warriors. We start to chat about our Boppers thing until we hear voices outside.
" Maybe we should go check that out" Snow tells me.
" Yeah" i reply and we head outside the hangout.
We go outside and head down the street. We turn the corner and see Swan talking to two dark figures.
" Stay quite" Snow whispers
They stop talking and the two dark figures head around the corner. Swan heads in the opposite direction.
" Come on" Snow whispers, and we start to slowley and quiestly follow Swan.
" Do you think it is one of our guys" Snow asks Swan, i turn towards Swan like i'm thinking the same thing. Swan Shrugs and continues to look. Swan hasd been very quiet since Mercy disserpeared last month. Swan turns around and picks up a glass bottle and throws it towards the beach, it smashes and the cops go in the direction where the bottle smashed, and then we ran towards the hangout, we bursted in, and all the Warriors turned to see us, we stared back,
" Whats up" John says to me, and i nod back.
I walk towards the Mirror across the room, and look at myself.
I am 19 years old, around 5ft10 inches tall, i got hair like Swans, but more of a darker brown colour, i have blue eyes as well. I wear My Warriors vest and my body is bare, i have got pecks and a six pack, with a big scar going down my left peck. I wear black jeans, and black trainers. I turn around and see all my friends drinking and chatting to each other. I head towards Snow, and start chatting to him. Snow is the one i get along with the best out of all the Warriors. We start to chat about our Boppers thing until we hear voices outside.
" Maybe we should go check that out" Snow tells me.
" Yeah" i reply and we head outside the hangout.
We go outside and head down the street. We turn the corner and see Swan talking to two dark figures.
" Stay quite" Snow whispers
They stop talking and the two dark figures head around the corner. Swan heads in the opposite direction.
" Come on" Snow whispers, and we start to slowley and quiestly follow Swan.
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Re: Lynks' Journey as a Warrior
Feel free to comment. good or bad i would like to hear them.
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Re: Lynks' Journey as a Warrior
He walks past the hangout. We were keeping quiet, and hiding. We were going past the porn shop, we hid around the corner and Swan looked back in our direction but doesn't see us and he continues walking. We follow him until he goes into this abandoned house. We look in and don't see him inside.
" Come on, lets get back to the hangout." Snow whispers
" First i want to call at Hungry's for something to eat" I say and we head of.
We get some food and head for the hangout. while we were walking i was thinking who the dark figures could be. We enter the hangout and Swan is there. He turns and faces us.
" Where u been" He asks, suspiciously.
" Just out to get something to eat" I reply. Then Swan walks of again, and gets another can of beer. I look at Snow, and he looks back. Then we go get a can ourselves, while we were opening one we heard a smash, and then saw a brick on the floor. Our Window had been smashed by some pricks.
We go to the window and look down. We see some Hi Hats, they are pissed that we ruined there hangout 2 week ago.
" yyyyouuu ffffucking pppricks" A fat hi hats shouts to us " yyyyou are gggoing ttto get ssome aaasss kicking. sssee you aaat the fffun fffair"
" Come one Warriors. Lets go kicks some Clown shit" Swan says. " Snow and Lynks stay here and keep guard" Swan tells us. and we were not happy about it.
" Come on, lets get back to the hangout." Snow whispers
" First i want to call at Hungry's for something to eat" I say and we head of.
We get some food and head for the hangout. while we were walking i was thinking who the dark figures could be. We enter the hangout and Swan is there. He turns and faces us.
" Where u been" He asks, suspiciously.
" Just out to get something to eat" I reply. Then Swan walks of again, and gets another can of beer. I look at Snow, and he looks back. Then we go get a can ourselves, while we were opening one we heard a smash, and then saw a brick on the floor. Our Window had been smashed by some pricks.
We go to the window and look down. We see some Hi Hats, they are pissed that we ruined there hangout 2 week ago.
" yyyyouuu ffffucking pppricks" A fat hi hats shouts to us " yyyyou are gggoing ttto get ssome aaasss kicking. sssee you aaat the fffun fffair"
" Come one Warriors. Lets go kicks some Clown shit" Swan says. " Snow and Lynks stay here and keep guard" Swan tells us. and we were not happy about it.
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The other's left while me and Snow stared angrily at them from the corner.
" This is shit" I said to Snow in hope that he would agree with me.
" Yeah i know man" He replies. We walk over to the seats and Snow sits down while i turn on the radio.
" Do you think he knows" I ask Snow while trying to find the right radio station
" I don't know, but sure seems likely" Snow replies while getting a beer from the table. I eventually found the right radio station and i sat down next to snow while in the city played. When the song stopped we turned to listen to the DJ. First she said something about The Turnbulls, and then something about The Furies.
" Also we got word that The Orphans have taken out the Warriors.is this the break the small time crew needed." Says the DJ as me and Snow listen on.
" Those lying little pussys" i cry in rage, and i throw my beer bottle down on the floor.
" wait untill they get back, and we will spread the word" Snow reply's trying to calm me down. I start to chill out. While some Jackson 5 played on the radio, The Warriors walked in, some bloodied and batterd and the others not hurt.
" The Orphans have told a fake radi again Warcheif" Snow says to Swan
" Ok. You,Lynks, and errmmm, just you 2 go sort them out." Swan replies. I get up after he said my name, and walked to Snow
" Don't disserpoint" Swan orders, and we walked out of the door.
" This is shit" I said to Snow in hope that he would agree with me.
" Yeah i know man" He replies. We walk over to the seats and Snow sits down while i turn on the radio.
" Do you think he knows" I ask Snow while trying to find the right radio station
" I don't know, but sure seems likely" Snow replies while getting a beer from the table. I eventually found the right radio station and i sat down next to snow while in the city played. When the song stopped we turned to listen to the DJ. First she said something about The Turnbulls, and then something about The Furies.
" Also we got word that The Orphans have taken out the Warriors.is this the break the small time crew needed." Says the DJ as me and Snow listen on.
" Those lying little pussys" i cry in rage, and i throw my beer bottle down on the floor.
" wait untill they get back, and we will spread the word" Snow reply's trying to calm me down. I start to chill out. While some Jackson 5 played on the radio, The Warriors walked in, some bloodied and batterd and the others not hurt.
" The Orphans have told a fake radi again Warcheif" Snow says to Swan
" Ok. You,Lynks, and errmmm, just you 2 go sort them out." Swan replies. I get up after he said my name, and walked to Snow
" Don't disserpoint" Swan orders, and we walked out of the door.
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We arrived at the subway, we were freezing our balls of. I stood wating for the next train to Tremont. We were to waste those Orphans and get back safely, but we may not be getting back. Swan knows about us following him, and they are 50 Orphans against two Warriors, and that is bad even tho the Orphans are a bunch of lame shits. The Train arrived and we steped on board.
The train stopped at Tremont, we got of the train and immediatly spoted two Orphans bellow the Bridge. Me and Snow quickly moved over the Bridge and down the stairs, we went unnoticed down the stairs and hit hid behind a wall. Two Orphans soon became 5, and 5 became 10. We were in deep shit, and Snow knew it too.
" What shall we do" I whispered to Snow who was crouched next to me.
" Take a risk" He replys as he starts to charge at the Orphans in front of him. I followed him as we were set to take those Pussys down, they noticed us and got up, and were ready to fight.
" Pity there is only 2 of you" One shouted, but we kept running. We got in arm reach of them and i lept in the air in a crossbody style and took 3 down. Snow Was punching away at one to the left of me, and i did the same. I nutted one of them and he went down in a heap of shit. One grabed me from behind, and another started punching me in the stomach. He went to the face but i ducked and he caught the other Orphan good. Then i punched him i the face, then other came at me but i flipped him over my shoulder and he took his mate out as well. I picked up a bottle and cracked an Orphan over the head with it. Snow kneed one to the face and the fight was over.
" You can sure Brawl Young blood" Snow said to me.
" Yeah, now shall we go for the rest" i eplied letting a little smile come across my face.
The train stopped at Tremont, we got of the train and immediatly spoted two Orphans bellow the Bridge. Me and Snow quickly moved over the Bridge and down the stairs, we went unnoticed down the stairs and hit hid behind a wall. Two Orphans soon became 5, and 5 became 10. We were in deep shit, and Snow knew it too.
" What shall we do" I whispered to Snow who was crouched next to me.
" Take a risk" He replys as he starts to charge at the Orphans in front of him. I followed him as we were set to take those Pussys down, they noticed us and got up, and were ready to fight.
" Pity there is only 2 of you" One shouted, but we kept running. We got in arm reach of them and i lept in the air in a crossbody style and took 3 down. Snow Was punching away at one to the left of me, and i did the same. I nutted one of them and he went down in a heap of shit. One grabed me from behind, and another started punching me in the stomach. He went to the face but i ducked and he caught the other Orphan good. Then i punched him i the face, then other came at me but i flipped him over my shoulder and he took his mate out as well. I picked up a bottle and cracked an Orphan over the head with it. Snow kneed one to the face and the fight was over.
" You can sure Brawl Young blood" Snow said to me.
" Yeah, now shall we go for the rest" i eplied letting a little smile come across my face.
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Re: Lynks' Journey as a Warrior
Me and Snow quickly turned around the corner to the next street.
" ok, we are going to split up. Meet me at the subway at 5." Snow commands, while walking to the east. Logic says i should go west so i did, i was going towards their hangout, so there is bound to be some Orphans around some place. I silently walked into some shadow behind a building. 4:23 was the time, so i had to do something. I saw a shop which sells spray paint across the street. I checked my pockets for money. 10 dollars, enough for 2 cans. I was about to jump out but heard footsteps from the other side of the road. I looked on at 2 Orphans walking down the street talking about something. One had a brown jacket on and the other was wearing a baseball cap. I thought about jumping them until more Orphans followed behind. I satyed put, trying not to make a noise, watching on as the Orphans stop.
" Those Warriors got to be someplace" One said looking around.
I had to do something, but my luck changed when a man with a big coat came walking by, i grabed him around the head while the Orphans had their backs turned. I brought him into the shadows and striped him of his brown coat. i quickly put the coat on myself, to cover up the jacket.
" Don't say a word or your dead" I said in a threat.
I walked out of the shadows and across the street towards the shop. i entered and noticed some spray paint cans next to me. I picked two red ones and bought them for 8 dollars, before leaving. I looked around and noticed the Orphans had gone. I quickly ran across the street to an Orphans tag and painted warriors over it. The next street i did the same, and the next and the next. The place was dripping red. i checked the time.
4:53. Better go. I walked towards the station, took of my coat and threw it to the floor. I was about to go up to the station platform, until a gang of Orphans grabed me and tied my hands together and taped over my mouth. Snow came around the corner, and noticed i was in trouble. He charged for the Orphans, before they all pulled blades out of their pockets.
" What u want for him?" Snow asked in an attempt to free me.
" We want your leder to come down here , and say to the Riffs that we have heavy muscle and should be on their network, and one more thing. give Mercy back to us." Shouted the apparant lesder of the gang.
" ok, we are going to split up. Meet me at the subway at 5." Snow commands, while walking to the east. Logic says i should go west so i did, i was going towards their hangout, so there is bound to be some Orphans around some place. I silently walked into some shadow behind a building. 4:23 was the time, so i had to do something. I saw a shop which sells spray paint across the street. I checked my pockets for money. 10 dollars, enough for 2 cans. I was about to jump out but heard footsteps from the other side of the road. I looked on at 2 Orphans walking down the street talking about something. One had a brown jacket on and the other was wearing a baseball cap. I thought about jumping them until more Orphans followed behind. I satyed put, trying not to make a noise, watching on as the Orphans stop.
" Those Warriors got to be someplace" One said looking around.
I had to do something, but my luck changed when a man with a big coat came walking by, i grabed him around the head while the Orphans had their backs turned. I brought him into the shadows and striped him of his brown coat. i quickly put the coat on myself, to cover up the jacket.
" Don't say a word or your dead" I said in a threat.
I walked out of the shadows and across the street towards the shop. i entered and noticed some spray paint cans next to me. I picked two red ones and bought them for 8 dollars, before leaving. I looked around and noticed the Orphans had gone. I quickly ran across the street to an Orphans tag and painted warriors over it. The next street i did the same, and the next and the next. The place was dripping red. i checked the time.
4:53. Better go. I walked towards the station, took of my coat and threw it to the floor. I was about to go up to the station platform, until a gang of Orphans grabed me and tied my hands together and taped over my mouth. Snow came around the corner, and noticed i was in trouble. He charged for the Orphans, before they all pulled blades out of their pockets.
" What u want for him?" Snow asked in an attempt to free me.
" We want your leder to come down here , and say to the Riffs that we have heavy muscle and should be on their network, and one more thing. give Mercy back to us." Shouted the apparant lesder of the gang.
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Re: Lynks' Journey as a Warrior
Swan wouldn't be please i was trapped in a room with an Orphan next to me. I noticed he had the key. I had to think of something to get out of here, so i quickly moved my chair towards the Orphan, he was oblivious to what i was doing, i then threw myself at him, knocking him to the floor. He was out, and i grabed the key, unlocked the chains on my arms, and then the one of my legs. I took the tape of my mouth and ran for the door. But it was locked, i tried to use the key, the first one didn't work, the second didn't, hopefully it would be 3rd time lucky. I looked back to see the Orphan getting up, but the 3rd key worked. I closed the door and locked it with the Orphan inside. I ran towards the subway, ignoring all distractions. I could make it for the 6:00 train. 5:59 was when i arrived at the station, i got on the train, while Snow and Swan got of, i shouted them to come back on but they didn't listen.
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I found myself heading back alone. I wonder what has happened when i was away. I got of the tarin at Coney. I walked to the Hangout, but found myself hiding from the Dark epople who me and Snow saw Swan talking to. they were walking together, i couldn't see their faces. They turned the corner, and i moved in to the hangout. Everyone turned to look at me, Vermin came up to me and asked about the trip. I was back home, but Snow and Swan weren't. 3 hours later Swan arrived but no Snow.
" Where's Snow?" I asked Swan.
" Dunno" He replys while walking past me.
Something is wrong, and i'm going to find out whats going on.
" Where's Snow?" I asked Swan.
" Dunno" He replys while walking past me.
Something is wrong, and i'm going to find out whats going on.
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Re: Lynks' Journey as a Warrior
I should get the next part up tommorow. only the next one and the one after to go.
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Re: Lynks' Journey as a Warrior
Man, it's been a while since I've commented on something by you, nazzac, but it's good to see you're still writing.
Anyway, I like what's going on here. I mean, I like the idea of a first-person story detailing someone starting out as a Warrior, I mean, I did one with Rex not long back (because I'm guessing Lynks is a new blood?) Also like what you've got going on with this whole Swan thing.
I notice you haven't posted in 10 days, but it'd be real good if you came back and finished this. I like where it's going. 8)
Anyway, I like what's going on here. I mean, I like the idea of a first-person story detailing someone starting out as a Warrior, I mean, I did one with Rex not long back (because I'm guessing Lynks is a new blood?) Also like what you've got going on with this whole Swan thing.
I notice you haven't posted in 10 days, but it'd be real good if you came back and finished this. I like where it's going. 8)
Re: Lynks' Journey as a Warrior
I have been on holiday, so i have not had chance to post. Anyway thanks for the comment.
Next Part:
I left the hangout to search Coney. The 2 dark figures were around the corner, talking to Swan. I hid around the corner, i was oblivious to the fact that they were heading towards me, and the next time i turned around i had been grabed by 2 guys. I was knocked out, not a good start. I woke up in a room, familier to me, in that i had been here before, but when? Snow was next to me, and didn't look happy. I took time to remember where i were, but then it came back to me. THE ORPHANS!!
I was locked up here when i was captured by the Orphans, it was all a set up. The phony raid, sending us two, coming to get us. It was all part of the plan, but Why?
Swan and the two darkened figures entered, Swan holding a gun in his hand. they went towards Snow, and took of the black tape that was covering his mouth, they did the same to me, then the DarkFigure revealed themselves, and they were 2 cops.
" You Basterd" I roard at Swan while trying to free myself.
" Calm it soldier. The Orphans are no gang, they are the cops' apprentices. They fake raids and shit to lure gangs here, so the cops can bring them down, and guess what. I am a cop as well."
Me and Snow looked at each other.
" now come with us, your under arrest" Swan says holding the gun.
the 2 cops uncuff Snow, who smacked one in the face and then kneed on in the gut, He went for Swan, who shot the gun which hit snow in the chest.
" Snow" i cried out in sadness as he fell to the floor cluching his chest in pain.
Swan then uncuffed me, i smacked Swan in a fit of rage. I then hit the other cops as they came at me, Swan pulled the trigger, The Bullet hit me in the leg and then another one, came at me, but i had the instinct to dodge it, and it hit an oil drum behind me. It started to leak. Swan then was set to fire again, but i lunged myself at him, and when he pulled the trigger, i reversed the gun so it faced him, and the bullet went through his head, Swan fell to the floor, and during that moment i spotted a lighter in his pocket. I picked it up, then pulled Snow out of the hut, before setting the oil alight, setting the place on fire. But i had lost everything, i stayed in the barn to let myself burn. My life was gone when Snow went. He was like a brother to me, and i had nothing to live for....
The End
Next Part:
I left the hangout to search Coney. The 2 dark figures were around the corner, talking to Swan. I hid around the corner, i was oblivious to the fact that they were heading towards me, and the next time i turned around i had been grabed by 2 guys. I was knocked out, not a good start. I woke up in a room, familier to me, in that i had been here before, but when? Snow was next to me, and didn't look happy. I took time to remember where i were, but then it came back to me. THE ORPHANS!!
I was locked up here when i was captured by the Orphans, it was all a set up. The phony raid, sending us two, coming to get us. It was all part of the plan, but Why?
Swan and the two darkened figures entered, Swan holding a gun in his hand. they went towards Snow, and took of the black tape that was covering his mouth, they did the same to me, then the DarkFigure revealed themselves, and they were 2 cops.
" You Basterd" I roard at Swan while trying to free myself.
" Calm it soldier. The Orphans are no gang, they are the cops' apprentices. They fake raids and shit to lure gangs here, so the cops can bring them down, and guess what. I am a cop as well."
Me and Snow looked at each other.
" now come with us, your under arrest" Swan says holding the gun.
the 2 cops uncuff Snow, who smacked one in the face and then kneed on in the gut, He went for Swan, who shot the gun which hit snow in the chest.
" Snow" i cried out in sadness as he fell to the floor cluching his chest in pain.
Swan then uncuffed me, i smacked Swan in a fit of rage. I then hit the other cops as they came at me, Swan pulled the trigger, The Bullet hit me in the leg and then another one, came at me, but i had the instinct to dodge it, and it hit an oil drum behind me. It started to leak. Swan then was set to fire again, but i lunged myself at him, and when he pulled the trigger, i reversed the gun so it faced him, and the bullet went through his head, Swan fell to the floor, and during that moment i spotted a lighter in his pocket. I picked it up, then pulled Snow out of the hut, before setting the oil alight, setting the place on fire. But i had lost everything, i stayed in the barn to let myself burn. My life was gone when Snow went. He was like a brother to me, and i had nothing to live for....
The End
Nazzac The Living Legend: http://warriorsmovie.co.uk/forum/index.php?topic=11962.0
The Bangers(F): http://warriorsmovie.co.uk/forum/index.php?topic=10828.0
FURIES:Their Story(F): http://warriorsmovie.co.uk/forum/index.php?topic=10754.0
The Bangers(F): http://warriorsmovie.co.uk/forum/index.php?topic=10828.0
FURIES:Their Story(F): http://warriorsmovie.co.uk/forum/index.php?topic=10754.0
Re: Lynks' Journey as a Warrior
BTW i put two chapters together, to make it one big chapter.
Nazzac The Living Legend: http://warriorsmovie.co.uk/forum/index.php?topic=11962.0
The Bangers(F): http://warriorsmovie.co.uk/forum/index.php?topic=10828.0
FURIES:Their Story(F): http://warriorsmovie.co.uk/forum/index.php?topic=10754.0
The Bangers(F): http://warriorsmovie.co.uk/forum/index.php?topic=10828.0
FURIES:Their Story(F): http://warriorsmovie.co.uk/forum/index.php?topic=10754.0
Re: Lynks' Journey as a Warrior
Wow... what an action-packed finale.
Snow died man, that's not cool.
And Swan was a cop... all the Orphans were cops? And Lynks killed himself?
Seriously man, you're pretty creative, and I look forward to your next piece of writing. 8)
Snow died man, that's not cool.
And Swan was a cop... all the Orphans were cops? And Lynks killed himself?
Seriously man, you're pretty creative, and I look forward to your next piece of writing. 8)