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starting to write a story
Posted: Sat Feb 09, 2008 3:06 pm
by New Jersey Warrior
hey guys i'm starting to write a non-warriors related gang novel. there is swearing in it. and lots of it. so if i put a link to it {it's on word} could i still get banned for swearing?
Re: starting to write a story
Posted: Sat Feb 09, 2008 8:16 pm
by New Jersey Warrior
Re: starting to write a story
Posted: Sat Feb 09, 2008 8:23 pm
by GramercyRiff99
I believe there is a sort of unwritten rule that, in the Fan Fiction section, blanking out swears with stars and using racial remarks is tolerated, but only if you use them in a story for the purpose of making it more real.
For example, if in your story, there is a nazi gang that swears and uses racial slurs, you probably are fine with that. However, if someone writes a story and you respond by swearing at them and telling them it sucks, yes, you will be banned.
That's the answer I got when I asked this question during the great purge, so I assume it's still in effect.
Re: starting to write a story
Posted: Sat Feb 09, 2008 11:27 pm
by New Jersey Warrior
how do i get a link to word posted but without posting the story online???
Re: starting to write a story
Posted: Mon Feb 11, 2008 9:34 am
by ajax the warrior
I think there is a limit of how much swearing you can do in a fan fiction i would not do too much in it though.
Re: starting to write a story
Posted: Mon Feb 11, 2008 8:32 pm
by New Jersey Warrior
there are 3 pgs of actual story, 10 pgs total. and there are 15 swears.
Re: starting to write a story
Posted: Tue Feb 12, 2008 12:04 am
by New Jersey Warrior
well here ya go guys here is THE WOLVES.
enjoy.
WRITTEN BY: CHRISTOPHER ERNST
COPYRIGHT JAN. 28 2008
INSPIRATIONS
GOD
MY MOM
MY DAD
MY UNCLE
MY GRANDPA
MY GRANDMA’S
MY GREAT Aunt Maureen {who has told me of her first and second hand experiences of gang culture and warfare of the 60’s in New York}
MY FRIENDS
S.E.HINTON
MARK TARRANT
KEVIN SMITH
GEORGE LUCAS
MY BIG BROTHER
THE EVENTS IN THIS STORY ARE FICTIONAL.
ANY RACIST REMARKS IN THE BOOK ARE NOT THE VIEWS OR PERSPECTIVES OF THE AUTHOR. THEY ARE SIMPLY PUT THERE TO
MAKE THE STORY SEEM
REALISTIC AND KEEP IT FLOWING.
LONG BEACH ISLAND, NEW JERSEY. APRIL 15 INSIDE THE WOLVES CLUBHOUSE.
“NO DAMMIT. WERE NOT GOING TO WAR WITH THE F&CKING JERSEY DEVILS.â€
Re: starting to write a story
Posted: Tue Feb 12, 2008 12:17 pm
by Vermin16
The swearing seems too excessive for only a small amount of story but this can still turn out good, just cut back a little.
Re: starting to write a story
Posted: Tue Feb 12, 2008 7:55 pm
by New Jersey Warrior
Vermin16 wrote:
The swearing seems too excessive for only a small amount of story but this can still turn out good, just cut back a little.
Ya i know vermin 16. its a habit, cause i almost always swear a real lot in my stories.
Re: starting to write a story
Posted: Wed Feb 13, 2008 12:18 am
by New Jersey Warrior
We walked down the isles until we got to isle 5, the tool isle. I grabbed up a hatchet, a few saws, nails, some knives, hammers, a fire extingusher, and some wood.I walked to the counter with Shift and Claw. "Here ya go J-Paper, this is everything. Now can you bag up everything." I said to J-Paper. "Sure thing Fang, and no charge as usual. Have a nice day." J-Paper said to me with a smile. "Ya well take it easy JP." I said. We walked back to the hangout with all the new supplies. "YO, Fang what's with all the new home improvement stuff, man." said Shift. "Well all of your B!tchin made me realize that we need to be prepared for the very worst that could possibly happen. So we're gonna start repairing the clubhouse." I told him. "oh, okay. Well what're the knives and fire extinguisher for" Asked Shift. "The fire extinguisher is obviously in case of a fire retard, and the knives are a start to keep building up a weapons stash in the clubhouse, in case of emergency." I told Shift. They got working on the task I had just assinged them. It took about 3 days for them to finish. But boy did it look great. 8)
sorry for the shortness guys trying my best here

Re: starting to write a story
Posted: Wed Feb 13, 2008 8:27 am
by ajax the warrior
Good work for having ago i think its alright i remember doing my first fan fiction i was nervous aswell but anyway good work new jersey warrior keep up the good work.

Re: starting to write a story
Posted: Wed Feb 20, 2008 8:03 pm
by New Jersey Warrior
here is the entire story from begining to as wrote so far. its got lots and lots and curses. and i don't wanna git banned so here is a link to microsoft word.
