Rememberance of Fox & Cleon

[War Chief]

Part 9:They Didnt say They'd Be Back,But They Are



                (Previously on my story the Hurricanes got ran over and Vermin lived
                  from what happened to him,also finding Carl shot dead)

                Cowboy-So good to be home,but things are missing...

                Ajax-Why'd they have to go?I mean this has happened way too much!

                Swan-Mercy,hows Rembrandt?

                Mercy-He...he...I think hes dead.

                Cropsey-No!He cant be!Your,your LYING!(runs to room to look at him but sees hes
                not breathing or anything)No!NO!NO!

                Cowboy-(looking down in sadness)He was a good one too...(takes hat off and holds
                by chest)

                (the godfather music plays quietly)

                Mercy-Wheres Vermin and the other dude?

                (No one answers.Instead they all walk outside)

                  (2 days later...)

                Cropsey-Hey guys c'mon,today we're gonna get away from it all,so lets go.

                (The group leaves to the beach a few blocks down)

                A voice of a familier voice-They left me,he left me...(opens hangout door)

                (A few hours later the others come back to find someone sitting in Swans chair)

                They nearly dead but sourly pissed off Vermin-Surprised?Beacause I sure am.Swan,
                whos supposed to be the responsible one huh,YOU!You guys left me,you left Carl.
                I've been walking all the way from Harlem down.And your off with these guys,tsss.

                Swan-Vermin what has gotten into you!

                Vermin-Ohh nothin Im fine!And you guys look sad because?

                Cropsey-Rembrandts dead...

                Vermin-(after hearing that Rems dead he cooled off)No way!What happened to him?

                  Cowboy-They just hit him too hard...

                  Ajax-Tell us about the way back here Ver.

                  Vermin-Ok well it started ...

                      This part in the story is his trip back home.

                    It started after he found Carls dead body.First he went to the Youth Center a few
                  blocks back and got cleaned up.Then he beat some kid up for his motorcycle or hog
                  as its called.He rode to a biker bar,had a few drinks,got a leather jacket to keep him
                  warm.He got on his bike again,it was beginning to get dark and the song Hotel
                  California by The Eagles was playing.Wierdly the song was what happened to him.Like
                  in the start of the song,the guy says cool wind was blowing in his hair.It was blowing
                  in Vermin's.It says he has to stop at a place for the night.Vermin did.He saw a girl
                  there.Everyone was acting like they expected him and new him.Some people danced,
                  some danced to forget.Vermin did that same thing.The last thing he remember,he
                  was running for the door,trying to find a passage to the place he was before.He
                  finally got out,to find it was a drug house.Then he rode once more on his bike.That
                  morning You Could Be Mine by Guns N Roses was playin...now thats a good biker
                  song!He even had a cool pair of sunglasses so he looked like the Terminator,funny
                  that this song was made for that movie!When Axl Rose says,"Theres nothing new
                  just another memory,"Vermin thought about Carl dying,he was thinking that hes seen
                  so many deaths before,its not a surprise...And when Axl says,"You could be mine"
                  Vermin was thinking of how the people who did this could be his,he could kill them.
                  And when Axl also says,count your stars Im home again.He was thinking that when
                  he gets back to Coney the Warriors should be happy he's home....Then a few hours
                  later he was home.And now he's sitting in a chair telling this story but in English.......

                  Vermin-So that was the whole shabang.

                  Cropsey-Hey was the chick hot?

                  Vermin-What do you think dippi!

                  Cropsey-Ohh...

                  Till They Didnt Say Theyd Be Back But They Are Part 2,where some one else returns!

[Furies4life]

Hey Joey why dont you print it out and become a pro. you got that good stuff. You captures Vermin attudie which is nice. Rem died that wack and sad. However like always good job my friend and it took you long enough. LOL

[joe123abc]

Thanks man!Now Im a member so we could chat and stuff!Thatnk you 4 the feedback!

[Furies4life]

Thanks man!Now Im a member so we could chat and stuff!Thatnk you 4 the feedback!

Fianlly you become a memeber and get the story quicker. I give you Karma for all the story keep it up.

[joe123abc]

8)Alright cool! 8) :p

[joe123abc]

i just wanna thank all of MYreaders

[Furies4life]

Stop thanking and start writing. LOL :badgrin:

[joe123abc]

gimme time man! :p

[swan12]

wow! really amazing and really action packed, keep writing more

[Sleeping Dragon]

Awesome chapter!!

[Bopper69]

yeah, that's pretty good

[BaseballFury100]

wow man keep it going

[joe123abc]

The new one will be up in few hours or something 8)

[BaseballFury100]

oh god i hope so, DONT MAKE AJAX OR VERMIN DIE PLEASE! you gave me 2 hear attacks in one sitting lol

[joe123abc]

AJAx or vermin dying?Hell no!Their both tocool to die ! :p