warriors poem

[All Grown Up]

Part 5: Vermin

Here he is
all balled up,
He doesn't like trains
and he wont shut up.
Running and running
down an endless road,
holding a bomb
about to explode.
as heroes, and legends
emerge from this clan
God may wait
to decide his plan.

[Manson-Cryptorchild]

That's real nice work. I really like reading your poetry, you have good skills. I am gonna have to bring up that karma with a [glow=green,2,300]positive[/glow]. I look forward to reading more. I also like the poems that Sleeping Dragon and Vermin did quite awhile ago. Good job to all 3 of you.

[Bopper69]

good, and interesting

[All Grown Up]

Part 6: Cochise

Here he is
an Indian man,
every one knows
he will do the best he can.
He will fight
from day to night,
a warriors faithfull,
his tale in sight.
So I say to those
warriors faithfull,
those with him
should be eternally greatfull.

[Ajax_41]

make one about rembrandt!

[Jigsaw]

Rembrandt

The smallest in this epic tale,
He carries his red spray,
Not the strongest,
But still okay,
He is loyal to his friends,
And likes to tag here and there,
He's very skilled with paint,
It makes people stop and stare,
Rembrandt may not be biggest,
But has the biggest heart,
They could not get along with Rembrandt,
The little guy of art..

[Sleeping Dragon]

awesome

[All Grown Up]

Part 7: Rembrandt

hes not a fighter
hes not a killer,
his heart is now
a great big thriller.
He loves to paint
its what he does,
but ready to fight
when push comes to shove.
Not till the time
an angel sings,
will he stop painting
that legendary skull with wings.

[Jigsaw]

Cool we should mix our Rembrandt ones together.

[BaseballFury100]

Part 5: Vermin

Here he is
all balled up,
He doesn't like trains
and he wont shut up.
Running and running
down an endless road,
holding a bomb
about to explode.
as heroes, and legends
emerge from this clan
God may wait
to decide his plan.

whats up with this one, about to explode, to decide his plan? are you trying to say hes goin to die?

[All Grown Up]

Part 5: Vermin

Here he is
all balled up,
He doesn't like trains
and he wont shut up.
Running and running
down an endless road,
holding a bomb
about to explode.
as heroes, and legends
emerge from this clan
God may wait
to decide his plan.

whats up with this one, about to explode, to decide his plan? are you trying to say hes goin to die?

no, That is actually saying that he is not going to die. It says that god may [glow=red,2,300]wait[/glow] to deside his plan. And running down an endless road just means that he is hyper all the time. Thats all

[All Grown Up]

Part 8: Fox

Really big Afro
filled with brain,
His life be well
if it not for that train.
He made the orphans
feel good about themselves,
filling there heads
with nonsense tales.
A legend he remains
for ever and ever,
just coming short
in this endless endever

[All Grown Up]

Part 9: Snow

They call him snow
the music man,
a real good soldier
for ever in plan.
Never knowing
what he may do,
the punks didn't stand a chance
in that subway restroom.
here he is
for ever he stands,
snowball the soldier,
The music man.

[Ajax_41]

how do you do that???!!!

[Warrior_Swan]

Wow, your poetry is incredible man, never stop writing.