The Royal Life ( Nothing to do with the Warriors )

[Glaswiegan Vermin]

Chapter 1

New York City 1932 New Jersey
Four men stood in an alleyway
Man 1: You remember the stuff
Man 2: Yeah
Man 1: Let's See it
Man 2 had a briefcase and he gave it to Man 1
Man 1 Opens it
Man 3 whispering to Man 2: You sure you got the stuff Frankie
Frankie: Yeah now shut up
Man 1: You saying shut up to me
Frankie: No Tony
Tony: I think you did
Tony pushes Frankie
Man 4 jumps in
Man 4: Leave him alone
Tony: Tommo don't get involved in this
Tommo: I can get involved in this if i want
Tony: You giving me cheek
Tommo: I don't know am i
Tony looks away in disgust
Tony turns round and punches Tommo
Tommo falls and Frankie starts too kick him
Man 4: Ha ha Tommo you should have not gaven Tony cheek
Tommo: Leo you have no soul............
Leo kicks him in the jaw
A man in a suit and a hat comes down the alleyway
Tommo: Frankie this man pushed you
another kick comes into his lower stomach
The man coming down the Alleyway picks up a lead pipe
the man comes up from behind Tony and hits him in the head
Tony falls and is outcold the other three men run away
The man helps Tommo up
The man: You okay
Tommo: Yes thanks
The man: Yeah well im Enzo i work for the Locascio family
Tommo: My family has a work buisness
Enzo: No we are well a Mafia like guns and that
Tommo: Yeah
Enzo: Your Grandfather Georgie Locascio is the Don the main man of our Mafia
Enzo: Your brother Mickey he is in it he is the underboss
Tommo: Okay
Enzo: Your brother wanted me to come find you and ask you to join our family
Tommo: Okay
Enzo: You gotta get those clothes off come on to Larry's Tailor shop
Enzo and Tommo walk up the alley way to Larry's Tailor Shop and they go inside

15 mins later

Tommo comes out with a dark blue striped sports suit and brown loafers
dark blue trousers a striped red tie

Tommo walks out to meet Enzo
Enzo: Hey come on lets get to the compound you drive
Enzo gets in the passenger seat of the Locascio car
Tommo gets in the drivers seat of his family car
Tommo drives off to Little Italy

Chapter 2 coming soon

comment please

[Glaswiegan Vermin]

Chapter 2
The Locascio car just drove into Little Italy
People with light brown suits on were staring at Tommo
it appeared they had something wraped in a towel
Tommo knew what it was
Tommo: DUCK
Tommo ducked but Enzo...
Enzo: Where
A bullet came right threw the window and hit Enzo right in the head blood splattered verywher on the windows on, Tommo on, the seats Everywhere
Tommo had just seen someone die for the first time in his life
Tommo saw that Enzo had a gun
Tommo slipped it out of his pocket
Tommo stopped the car and got out
the two men that shot at him were approaching the car
Tommo got hold of Enzo's Snub nose at the rear of the car
Tommo shot one hit the guy that shot Enzo right in the head and he fell down dead
The other man aimed his Saturday night speical at him
Tommo shot and hit the guy right in the eye
The guy fell down in pain
Tommo approached him
Tommo shoots him right in the forehead
Tommo gets back in the car and drives to the Locascio compound
Tommo gets out the car and runs into his family compound
Tommo: Mickey!
Mickey runs down the stairs
Mickey: Hey you finally came for once
Mickey kisses Tommo on the cheek
Tommo: Yeah something really bad happened
Mickey: Yeah what
Tommo: Enzo is dead
Mickey: He was our Enforcer DAD!
Georgie comes out
Georgie: What
Mickey: Enzo is is dead
Georgie: Oh we need to find a new Enforcer
Georgie: Tommo i haven't seen you for 5 years
Tommo: Yeah i was out and about
Georgie: How would you like to be our Enforcer
Tommo: Sure
Mickey: Come with me Tommo we going to kill those guys hat killed Enzo
Tommo: No i already did that
Mickey: Hey dad Tommo ain't no woose no more
Tommo: I ain't never been a woose
Mickey: Okay right Tommo come with me we going downtown to Your brother Leone's club
Tommo: Leone has a club
Mickey: Come on lets go
Mickey gets in the family car and Tommo gets in the passenger seat
Mickey drives off to thier brother Leone and to his club

Chapter Three coming soon

[Glaswiegan Vermin]

Chapter 3
Mickey and Tommo arrive at Leone's Club
they both walk in
Leone: Hey Mickey
Mickey: Hey
Leone stares at Tommo
Leone: Tommo you back from New Jersey
Tommo: Yeah
Leone gives him a Manhattan on the house
Tommo: Thanks
Mickey: Wheres Danny he always hangs about here with you
Tommo: I forgot all about Danny
Leone: Danny gone away somewhere i think he said Uncle Deano's club
Tommo: Is uncle Deano still alive
Leone: Yeah
Tommo: I thought he got shot when i was in New Jersey
Leone: He did but survived
Tommo: I'm going to see uncle Deano
Tommo, Mickey and Leone walk to thier Uncle Deano's club
all three walk in
a Locascio member lets them in
Leone: Danny!
Danny is sitting on a chair with a girl next to him
Danny turns round to see his three brothers
Danny: Hey how you doin'
Tommo, Mickey and Leone walk up to him
Danny: Tommo your back
Tommo: Yeah
Danny: Anyway you guys Uncle Deano tells us that the Martin family are closing in on Uncle Deano's club like trying to extort him we gonna go kill Don Martin okay now come on
all four of them get out and get in the car
they all drive off to Hell's Kitchen
Tommo: Alot has changed since i have been away
Mickey: Yeah it has now is everybody packed
Tommo shows him Enzo's Snub nose
Mickey holds up his Tommygun
Leone pulls out his barrel shot gun
Danny says he has a Dellinger (machine gun thing)
They arrive at Beefy Bakes the Martin's baker shop

Chapter 4 coming soon
comment please

[Gezza]

Alright Story, Im Not Like Trying To Offend You But I Hate That Kind Of Writting Style So If I Were To Rate You Outa 10 It Would Be A 2. 

[papa arnold]

Alright Story, Im Not Like Trying To Offend You But I Hate That Kind Of Writting Style So If I Were To Rate You Outa 10 It Would Be A 2. 

alright gezza give him a chance its his first story and who carws if you dont like that style of writing its his choice

[Glaswiegan Vermin]

Chapter 4
Beefy Bakes owner sees the Locascio car
he runs into the back of his store were millions of Martin family gangmembers were there
All the four Brothers of the Locascio family were outside with guns ready
Danny: Well one of the Capo's i interogated a long time ago said that this is were Don Martin comes
Mickey has just lit a ciggarete
Leone: Lets go in and get them
all four of them wal into the store
the shop keeper was not there
Tommo: I feel that something is gonna happen here
suddenly a Martin gangmember jumps out with a Tommygun
Mickey fires multiple bullets at him and brings him to the ground
blood everywhere and bullet holes in his chest
Mickey: Come on
all four of them run down the stairs
Mickey in the lead of them
Leone jumps ahead of Mickey
there is lots of Martin gangmembers down in the celer of Beefy Bakes armed and aiing at Leone
Danny and Mickey jump out fireing there guns
Leon joins in and loads his shotgun
Leon shoots and it rips guys chest and into his heart
Tommo jumps out and fires a few shots one into a guys head
a guy sneaks up from behind Tommo
Tommo pistol whips him
the guy falls to the ground
Mickey, Danny and Leone still shooting
riping peoples body's in half
Tommo fires another shot into a guys leg
the guy falls down and Tommo aims for his eye
Tommo shoots and hits home
Soon they are all dead but one remaining person sits
Danny: Where is Don Martin he been closing in on our clubs and stores
Beefy Bake Owner: I ain't telling you spit
Danny: Mickey do the honors
Mickey: My pleasure
Mickey grabs the Beefy Bakes Owner and throws him into a wall
Mickey: Where is Don Martin
Beefy Bakes Owner: He just took off there he going to the Verona warehouse for protection
Mickey: Where the Verona warehouse
Beefy Bakes Owner: I don't know he just said i'm gong to the Verona warehouse
Mickey lets go of the owner and all four of them walk out of the shop
Leone: Where could the Verona warehouse be?
Danny: I think we better look for it later
Tommo: Look
there is millions of Martin family gangmembers armed aswell
one is pointing a tommygun at Tommo
the martin family member fires
but suddenly Mickey jumps infront of Tommo and Mickey ends up getting shot
Tommo watches as his big brother gets bullets put threw his chest
Mickey falls back onto the ground blood everywhere and bullet holes in his chest
Mickey whispers:Go get out of here
Mickey then dies
the three remaining brothers run down the street
guns firing at them
the three brothers hide in an alleyway
Danny: I can't beleive that Mickey is dead
Tommo sits down by a garbage can looking sad
Leone leans against a wall
Leone: He was he toughest guy around
Tommo: And now he has been beaten
Danny: Wait till' dad heres about this...............

Chapter 5 coming soon
comment please

[Glaswiegan Vermin]

Chapter 5
On the way back to Uncle Deano's
Leone: Just a few blocks away
Danny: Damb get down
the three remaining brothers hide behind a parked car
a red car rives past with Martin family gangmembers hanging out the window with tommyguns
Tommo: What we gonna do
Danny: We gonna get a car and drive to the compound thats what we gonna do
Danny: We gotta get away from these crazy fúcks
Danny opens the car that they were hiding behind
all three brothers get in
they drive off to the compound
as soon as they park all three of them rush out
Don Locascio comes out
Don: Wheres Mickey wasn't he with you
Danny: He was with us
Don: What you mean
Leone: He dead now he gone
Don: Who did this to him
Tommo: The Martins
Don: Don Martin
Leone: Yeah a shop owner said he was going to the the verona warehouse
the don looks up
Don: Danny Leone the verona warehouse is in *cough* Hell's Kitchen on Mulberry lane go GO
Danny and Leon leave to the verona warehouse
The don coughs
Don: I don't feel very well *cough*
Tommo and his Dad walk into the compound and the Don lays on the couch
Don: If i die i want you to be Don
Tommo: I can't be Don i'm only an Enforcer
Don: Yes you *cough* can
The don suddenly stops talking and he bends his head back
Tommo sees if he is breathing but he isn't
Tommo whispers:Dad
Tommo starts to cry

Chapter 6 coming soon

comment please

[Hector]

This is pretty good, keep it up

[The Swan]

Alright Story, Im Not Like Trying To Offend You But I Hate That Kind Of Writting Style So If I Were To Rate You Outa 10 It Would Be A 2. 

Ye gezza give him a chance, story is good after all!!! 8)
Don't stop writing bro!!! 8)

[Glaswiegan Vermin]

thanks i might not write for a while

[Baby Bear]

Im not saying its crap but it can be better. Im not too fond of script formats but hell its your fan fic and what you say goes so keep it up!

[Glaswiegan Vermin]

Chapter 6

Suddenly a Motalov cocktail comes threw the window
Tommo picks up his dads body and he runs out the back
guns shooting
Tommo gets to a car puts his dad's body in the back seat
Tommo drives of to Uncle Deano's Club
Tommo arrives there
there is millions of Locascio men outside
Tommo: Get to the Verona Warehouse now NOW!
the Locascio men get into a car
Tommo Busts into Uncle Deano's club
Tommo: UNCLE DEANO!!!!
Deano comes out from a corner
Deano: What?
Tommo: My Dad's dead
Deano: Georgie is he seriously dead
Tommo: Yeah so is Mickey
Deano: Leone and Danny?
Tommo: I don't know there at the Verona Warehouse
Deano and Tommo walk out armed with guns
they both get into the car
Deano looks back into the back seat to see his brothers body
Deano: Drive
they both drive to Mullberry Lane in Hell's Kitchen
Tommo looks out his window
there is a big gun war
Locascio vs. Martins
Danny and Leone in the middle of it
Deano runs out with his Tommygun and shoots
Leone taps Danny
Leone: Thats Uncle Deano
Tommo burst out with his Dellinger
Tommo fires multiple bullets and kills multiple guys
a few Locascio bodys are on the ground
Leone ripping peoples chest's in half with his long barrel shotgun
Danny doing anything to survive
guns firing
Tommo, Deano, Leone and Danny get into the warehouse
They find a room and Deano bursts the door open
they find Don Martin on a chair
Deano: You stop killing our friends and family
Don Martin: This aint personal......
Tommo fires a shot into Don Martin's head
blood squirts all over the place and theres a bulle hole right in threw his brain
Tommo: It's just buisness......

The End