LC's revenge
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LC's revenge
i haven't written one of these in a while, and i hope you don't mind that it has characters from the game.
It was time. LC had spent 1 year in a prison after he had been found by the police outside a burning warehouse, he was awaiting trial for the murder of virgil, but the police didn't have enough evidence on him so he was set free.
LC had changed a lot in that year, drugs no longer mattered to him, nothing matered to him except one thing, "wrong those that wrong you". it was all he thought about. the destroyers were gone, he now had no friends, no home, no money. all he had was anger.
he left the police station, with the train fare they had given him he went back to coney island in search of the one that had caused him to lose everything, the one that had caused the downfall of the destroyers, Cleon.
Coney hadn't changed much, he still knew his way around and LC quickly found his way to the old hangout. he stared at the old, empty building. it was covered in graffiti, he couldn't read any of it. he slowly walked round the building, when he got to the front door, his face turned a ghostly white. in front of the building were three warriors. they looked at him closely then went back to talking with each other.
LC breathed a sigh of relief, they didn't recognise him! he walked past them and over to a dumpster at the side of the building, he crouched down beside it and put his hand under it hoping it was still there, he felt aroun for a few minutes and was beginning to think someone had stolen it, when he found it, he slowly pulled it out. he liked the feel of the cold metal, he polished the knife on his shirt then turned around and started to close in on his victims, he was going to enjoy this.
to be continued... PLEASE LEAVE COMMENTS
It was time. LC had spent 1 year in a prison after he had been found by the police outside a burning warehouse, he was awaiting trial for the murder of virgil, but the police didn't have enough evidence on him so he was set free.
LC had changed a lot in that year, drugs no longer mattered to him, nothing matered to him except one thing, "wrong those that wrong you". it was all he thought about. the destroyers were gone, he now had no friends, no home, no money. all he had was anger.
he left the police station, with the train fare they had given him he went back to coney island in search of the one that had caused him to lose everything, the one that had caused the downfall of the destroyers, Cleon.
Coney hadn't changed much, he still knew his way around and LC quickly found his way to the old hangout. he stared at the old, empty building. it was covered in graffiti, he couldn't read any of it. he slowly walked round the building, when he got to the front door, his face turned a ghostly white. in front of the building were three warriors. they looked at him closely then went back to talking with each other.
LC breathed a sigh of relief, they didn't recognise him! he walked past them and over to a dumpster at the side of the building, he crouched down beside it and put his hand under it hoping it was still there, he felt aroun for a few minutes and was beginning to think someone had stolen it, when he found it, he slowly pulled it out. he liked the feel of the cold metal, he polished the knife on his shirt then turned around and started to close in on his victims, he was going to enjoy this.
to be continued... PLEASE LEAVE COMMENTS
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Re: LC's revenge
Yo turnbull that was a very nice story you got me wanting more. But good job for a wjile out of fan fiction you are doing well. 

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Re: LC's revenge
Finally, a Destroyer fan fic. I'm gonna like this T_B! Keep going.
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Re: LC's revenge
I really enjoyed that, please continue 

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Re: LC's revenge
Yo man this is really good 8)
!! Keep it up!! This is good!!

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Re: LC's revenge
part 2, i'm keeping em short because some people don't like reading a lot of text.
LC approached the warriors, "excuse me" he said. the warriors looked at him, "do you guys know the way to stillwell avenue?"
"yer" said the first warrior "you go up this roa.." LC suddenly rammed the knife into his throat, a fountain of blood erupted from his neck, soaking LC. the warrior fell to the ground, twitched a few times then stopped.
"you basted" shouted the warrior to the left of LC, the warrior flung his fist at him but LC had expected this and easily moved out of the way, LC then slashed at the warrior catchig his wrist with the blade. the warrior jumped back clutching his wrist, trying to stop the blood that was pumping out of the gash, but he knew he wasn't going to survive. with a last effort he lashed out with his leg catching LC by suprise. LC fell to the ground and dropped the knife. the warrior dropped to his knees, gave his friend one last look then fell flat on his face, dead
the last warrior didn't know what to do, he was torn between running for his life or avenging the death of his friends. LC was already standing again with the knife in his hand. the warrior mde his decision, he stood there waiting for LC to make the first move.
LC made a lunge at the warrior aiming for the throat, the warrior jumped aside, the knife missing him by centimetres. he then delivered a savage kick right into LC's groin. LC groaned in pain then keeled over and vomited.
"take that you piece of s**t!" said the warrior and drew his leg back to deliver one final blow, when he stopped. on his face was a look of pain and terror. he fell to the ground, with a knife sticking out of his back and behind him was a fat scruffy hobo. "bloody warriors" the hobo said "hi, i'm Lemmy"
to be continued...
LC approached the warriors, "excuse me" he said. the warriors looked at him, "do you guys know the way to stillwell avenue?"
"yer" said the first warrior "you go up this roa.." LC suddenly rammed the knife into his throat, a fountain of blood erupted from his neck, soaking LC. the warrior fell to the ground, twitched a few times then stopped.
"you basted" shouted the warrior to the left of LC, the warrior flung his fist at him but LC had expected this and easily moved out of the way, LC then slashed at the warrior catchig his wrist with the blade. the warrior jumped back clutching his wrist, trying to stop the blood that was pumping out of the gash, but he knew he wasn't going to survive. with a last effort he lashed out with his leg catching LC by suprise. LC fell to the ground and dropped the knife. the warrior dropped to his knees, gave his friend one last look then fell flat on his face, dead
the last warrior didn't know what to do, he was torn between running for his life or avenging the death of his friends. LC was already standing again with the knife in his hand. the warrior mde his decision, he stood there waiting for LC to make the first move.
LC made a lunge at the warrior aiming for the throat, the warrior jumped aside, the knife missing him by centimetres. he then delivered a savage kick right into LC's groin. LC groaned in pain then keeled over and vomited.
"take that you piece of s**t!" said the warrior and drew his leg back to deliver one final blow, when he stopped. on his face was a look of pain and terror. he fell to the ground, with a knife sticking out of his back and behind him was a fat scruffy hobo. "bloody warriors" the hobo said "hi, i'm Lemmy"
to be continued...
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Re: LC's revenge
Pure geinus turnbull_badger and thanks for keeping it short because yes it is kind of a pain to read 30 paragraphs nut anyway nice job.
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Re: LC's revenge
Funny about L.C. getting kicked in the
and puking
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Re: LC's revenge
This here's pretty good. I've always wondered what happened to LC after Cleon smashed his head into the door. I'll be keeping an eye on this one.
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Re: LC's revenge
"Lemmy? no way!" said LC
"am i supposed to know you" replied Lemmy
"its me LC"
"Jesus Christ" Lemmy helped LC up "where have you been"
"In prison, but now i'm back to get revenge on cleon"
"You haven't heard then?"
"heard what?" replied LC
"Cleon's dead, he got killed up in the bronx, they also lost a scout and some muscle"
"What!?, well that screws everything up!"
"wasn't there another who also helped kill virgil?" said Lemmy
"dunno, if there was it would probably of been that guy Swan or mouse, no not mouse errr vermin"
"well i'll help you on this quest for revenge"
"thanks, well we better get going, someone was sure to of heard all the noise down here, the fuzz will be on the way"
they both set off in the direction of the wonder wheel where the warriors hideout was, there plan sounded simple enough, get into the hideout and kill swan and vermin. but they knew it wouldn't work like that, they still had to get to the hideout and it would only be a matter of time before the warriors learnt of the dead gang members, and then the streets would be crawling with warriors.
they didn't even know if swan and vermin were still warriors or that they would be in the hideout, all they knew was that this was gonna be a long night.
"am i supposed to know you" replied Lemmy
"its me LC"
"Jesus Christ" Lemmy helped LC up "where have you been"
"In prison, but now i'm back to get revenge on cleon"
"You haven't heard then?"
"heard what?" replied LC
"Cleon's dead, he got killed up in the bronx, they also lost a scout and some muscle"
"What!?, well that screws everything up!"
"wasn't there another who also helped kill virgil?" said Lemmy
"dunno, if there was it would probably of been that guy Swan or mouse, no not mouse errr vermin"
"well i'll help you on this quest for revenge"
"thanks, well we better get going, someone was sure to of heard all the noise down here, the fuzz will be on the way"
they both set off in the direction of the wonder wheel where the warriors hideout was, there plan sounded simple enough, get into the hideout and kill swan and vermin. but they knew it wouldn't work like that, they still had to get to the hideout and it would only be a matter of time before the warriors learnt of the dead gang members, and then the streets would be crawling with warriors.
they didn't even know if swan and vermin were still warriors or that they would be in the hideout, all they knew was that this was gonna be a long night.
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Re: LC's revenge
this is a really good story and its kinda see a fan fiction from an anti-warriors point of view instead of a fiction about the warriors
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Re: LC's revenge
nice story man. keep it coming
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Re: LC's revenge
sorry i haven't posted the next bit yet, still coming up with ideas, please bear with for a day or two
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Re: LC's revenge
lol writers block.. lol monkeys random* :lol:
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