Demons life bfore The Warriors *Modified again so it's not so corny*

[Demon]

( 5 years ago) {Keep in mind i was writting this at 12:14 a.m.}

  Demon and his sister were walking home from their middle school. All of the sudden 5 guys jump from behind bushed an knock out demon. Demon wakes up 2 minutes later to find that his sister has knocked out 3 of the guys  but she's being beaten by the other two. He stagger to get to his feet once he does one of the guys stabs his sister.

  Thug- You next pretty boy

  Demon- Dream on you son of a B*tch, I'm gunna do to you what you did to my sister and i'm gunna make sure it's 10 times worse for you.

  Demon kicks him in the head an knocks him out. The remaining guy pulls out a gun and shots demon in the ribs.

  Thug- May god have mercy on your soul boy like i have mercy upon you now.  May you become one of the greatest warriors around here and anywhere else you go if you truly feel anger right now.

  Demon- I'll see you in hell!

  the thug laughs and leaves him lying there, later a cop finds him lying on the ground bleeding. He picks him up and takes him to the hospital. After 12 hours in the hospital he wakes up to see a doctor staring right at him.

  Doctor- you gave us quiet a scare young man

  Demon grabs his shirt and necklace, of a blessed cross, puts them on and leaves. He gets home, his mom isn't home.  He goes to bed then leaves for school.

  ( School 9:45 a.m.)

  Demon is standing there talkin to his friends when his girlfriend walks up to him.

  Girlfriend- we need to talk

  Demon- what's up? time for a break between us?

  Girlfriend- Not as much as a break but as a break up,

  Demon- Okay

  Girlfriend- But we're still friends?

  Demon- Yeah

  Demon leaves to his class.  At the end of the day he goes down the street and starts practicing karate, and the whole time he keeps thinking to himself," I'll show that mother f*cker who's the best," His mother dies a year and a half later, he doesn't like to make friends nor does he like to talk.  After 5 years of training in Martial arts, Kick boxing, he's finally out on the street seeking revenge. He's become a bad Mother F*cker with powerful punch to him and an even more powerful kick. He enevtually starts living with his brother, Orphan.
 
[ And there begins the story of Orphan and Demon ]

[Demon]

it's only a rough draft guys, please tell me what you like and don't like about it so i can make it better.

[Juniper]

It`s great!

[Orphen]

Not bad