when i was a moonrunner-chapter 7

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the lady warrior
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when i was a moonrunner-chapter 7

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ok here's chapter 7:

bullet
the moonrunner's hangout

I watched nervously as rembrandt got back up from the corner and looked up at me as if he was sayind i'll do you proud bullet then he stood in a orthadox stance as he was getting ready for the 5 moonrunner's what were coming towards him cautiously. the first moonrunner came from nowhere and speared him, i watched as he got slumped on the floor and nutted in the face he groaned in pain and i felt the horrible crack sound, then all of a sudden he sprung back up and punched the moonrunner in the stomach 3times and then slung him near a trash-can then another 2 came at him and flexibly he elbowed one in the face and blood came splurting out and you could see he was getting a wave of adrineline rush as he crouched down on the ground then spin-kicked the other one and when the dude was on the ground crushed him with his back, everyone owwed and awwed as they heard the earth-shattering thud, even though my other brother's in the ring were badly hurt they managed to groggerly get up and swing at rem but he was too fast and put bottles over there heads and 5mins later they were all knocked out, all 5!!

I watched in amazment as my warlord physc's got up and applauded rembrandt saying"BRAVO,BRAVO my brother rembrandt you just earned yourself a jacket, rem got his jacket from him honourably and laughed as all the moonrunner's cheered loudly and gave him a king's chair. they blasted the music getting ready for a memorable party!! rembrandt excidetley came over and patted me on the back as i hugged him and said"did you see that, i earned my jacket, i cant believe it there so cool!!" i replied"yeah kid you did great and it was amazing how you got physc's to stand up and applaud you like that bro you really impressed him!!"
" i dont get it why dont he do that with everyone who tries out?"
"nah ma man that's the thing he's never applaud anybody like that since EVER"!!
"woa he must of doubted me or something then to do that"
"yeah he probally did ma man but i dont no why?"
i was thinking hard and long about when i first joined but we had had a different leader then name spacey he was a good warlord but died from a drug-overdose.. just as i was going to daydream about my inatiation rembrandt interupted me saying"so what do  ya wanna do now?"
i thought about this and then said" let's go to the ELECTRIC ELMINATOR'S TURF"!!....

rem looked at me crazily and said"who the hell are the electric terminator's"
"the electric elminator's ya dummy or electric E's for short, their our worst enemey's they've been fighting with us  since 74 kid, it all started this one-time when we were having a party and they crashed it and claimed this was thier turf. we were having none of that so we had a break-dancing compotetion and alot of rumbles but then when we were at our weakest point when half of our gang joined thier gang, they took qauter of our turf and then physc's came around and became our warlord and we took it back and then ever since then they've been trying to take it back the pussy's!!"
"and what does this have to do with me bullet"
"well your a tagger meaning you tag thing's and so now's your big chance to earn more major respect from the moonrunner's lay the moonrunner's mark on thier burner's now how does that sound, buddy!!"
"COOL". we both laughed because we knew tonight would be a very adventerous night!! 8) :D

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Re: when i was a moonrunner-chapter 7

Post by Dud »

A good chapter lady warrior. Like how you handled the fight scene, and I think it's pretty believable with Rem's speed that he won. You've done this Bullet guy well so far, and it's good to see Rem's got a cool friend in the crew. The rivalry with the Electric Eliminators seems exciting too, and I look forward to where this goes. Like jack you've impressed me with Bullet's story so far, and I hope you keep it up. 8)

Oh, and thanks for your recent comment in my story. :D

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