the warriors- a loves story chapter 21

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the warriors- a loves story chapter 21

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ok guy's sorry for the delay :lol: ive been gone for ages but dont worry coz im back and ready to finish this story, ok here goes:

                                          chapter 21(the last chapter)
                                          snow's apartment


Snow was woken up by the sound of his alarm he looked up weary-eyed and saw that it was 7:00am he was just about to go to sleep when he reliased it was the 10thof agaust just a day before swan was coming back, he had to sort a few thing's out. he got a shower then got dressed in his colour's, he ran to the hangout and saw that they had done all the roof but were just doing the rest of the inside and one workman was starting on the window's, snow shouted up to them"your doing a great job boy's keep it up!!", the workman laughed cheerfully and replied"we will dont worry". then snow decided to go get protection money from the warriors racket's so that he could give swan and dianna a nice suprise!! as he was walking to charlies plumbing store across the street he saw daisy and champ walking together, snow went up to them and decided to talk to them:
"hey daisy,champ what you doing here?"
"oh we're just going to my grandma's to get a nice cup of joe, haha and that's why im wearing theese peddy clothes too"
"arite ma man i'll see youse tommorow or later-on, until then adios amigos"....champ and diasy laughed as they waved and so did snow then he got back to bussiness and got protection money from charlie then went to the laudrettes and got the money, then he went to 3 more shop's and  he had about 300hundred dollar's then he went to get some very specail suprises.

Meanwhile rem was on his way to pick up fletcher from his granma's to spend some time with him,take to the beach,see how the hangout is coming along then to his apartment and but him to bed and that was rem's plan. he got to the shining-white coloured door and knocked on it quitely then maisy(swan's mam answered) she smiled softly and said "come on in i'll make you a cup of tea would you like that?" rem smiled and replied"yeah i would and thank you mr's johnson for looking after fletcher and i am truly sorryt about what happened it was my fault"
"oh no boy dont blame yourself it wasnt you who started that fire was it? it was some stupid thug's no just sit down and make yourself comfortable, ok", then she got him a cup of tea and they talked for a while about varies thing's and then he toom fletcher to the beach and to see the hangout then back to his for bed-time!!

Mean while back in vegas swan was watching t.v thinking'i hope it is ok when i get thier, i hope but i dont what i'll think or say if it's a mess. i wish i never went away now' then he went out to gamble at the casino's leaving dianna alone to watch the t.v!!
It was now 4:00am and snow had gotten some birthday cards for people to wrute out for swan and he did one himself, he had hope that swan's birthday was going to be brill, espically with all the suprises and brand-new furniture but in.

All the warriors went home praying and hoping swan wouldnt be dissapointed with it all and would be pleased. the next day was the 11th SWAN'S BIRTHDAY AND THE DAY HE CAME HOME, snow woke up and straight away got ready and went to check out the hanbgout it was nearly done it just had one more window to do, snow went inside and checked all the furniture was looking spectacular, which it was then he talked to the builder's for a while then he watched the t.v in the warriors hangout and chilaxed, today was going to be a fine day!!

Ok guy's that was part1 i hope you liked it and i will be doing part 2(the final part later on today so keep holding onto your seat's this is going to be a bumpy ride :lol: in a good way, adios bopper's!! :D 8)

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lookin good, its about time
i have a reason, so there fore i am not a rebel without a cause

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ok here's the secound part :D bopper's:

                                                part 2 of chapter 21
                                                the warriors hangout


Snow phoned the riff's and the saracen's to come over and celebrate with them for swan's birthday party, when he comes back and they agreed, they would be there by 3:30am and swan would be back by 4:00am with dianna, so it would all fit in the time-slot nicely!! meanwhile champ was having a bit of a problem hiself, daisy had came back to his place and noticed it was empty so they sat and talked and watched t.v for a while then champ said out of the blue"i love you daisy.... can i- erm kiss you", she looked at him willingly and replied"course you can delanie, come here".
she lay there as champ grabbed hold of her shoulder's and snogged her passionatley then he started to get into it more and accidently unloosined her top he stopped abrubtly and said"im sorry for doing that i dont know what came over me, im sorry". daisy looked at him sympathetically and explained"it's ok it felt good, let's carry on", so he carried on unloosining her top then he slowly took off her bra and then he stopped again, she qeustioned him saying"what's the matter"?
"im scared coz it's my first time and i dont know how to do theese things and plus ive got a cast on my leg, im sorry im just not ready to lose my virginity i mean we could alway's try another time, cant we??"
she looked at him upsettly and said"yeah we can, theres no rush normally it's the girl what's nervous, well i am still nervous but i am ready but it's ok if your not baby i wont be upset" then she gave her cute, quirky smile and he kissed her on the cheek and they watched charlies angles together.

Back in vegas swan and dianna were just leaving the hotel and they got a taxi to the subway station ready to go home while they were waiting for it they talked:
"so are you looking forward to going home george"
"yeah baby i sure am, but i sure will miss gambling and doing it", dianna laughed softly and replied"so your saying i dont do it good, well i may not be a expert but i sure am good"
"you are good but thats not what i ment what i ment was we do it more wilder here then we do back home ha it's crazy talking about it but it's the truth"
"well george maybe it's got something to do with us having a baby at home we do it more quietly then thats the rule.
"yeah but we should let ourselves go wild becos he doesnt know what's going on does he"
"no he cant but he can sense stuff and i swear to god when he is 10years old and comes up to me one day saying i used to hear stranged noises in the night for as long as i can remember being a baby i will kill you". they both laughed at the thought of it then the got on the train!!

Snow made sure everything was set and that the last hangout window what needs to be done was done, which it was, then he saw everyone arriving rem,ajax,champ,daisy, nearly all of the warriors and the riff's and saracens. he went outside to find the riff's introducing themselves to the saracen's and snow went up to edge and masia and greeted them saying"thank's for coming guy's i really appreciate it and when swan get's here he will to, so the plan is when we see them coming round the corner in the cab we will all go inside and turn out the light's and then when they come in give them a big surprise ok"
"ok and thank's for inviting us!!"
"aww it was my pleasure masia and edge"
and with that snow payed and dismissed the builder's and then made some last minute preparation's before looking at his watch and seeing that it was 3:50pm and he ordered everyone inside before staring out the window and seeing a cab pull up and swan and di step out, he made sure that evryone was quiet!! swan and dianna payed the taxi-driver and then smiled at how reconisble but cool and new the warriors hangout looked and he said"it look's fantastic boy am i proud to call this my hangout and all along i was worrying about what it looked like it's the best just like us" then in excitment he snogged dianna and she giggled lightly before saying"hey it look's kinda dead does anyone even know it's your birthday??"
"sure they do, let's go in thye'll probs arrive soon....

Snow got ready and quitely said"1,2,3" and just as they were coming in  the door and turned the light's on everyone shouted"HAPPY BIRTHDAY SWAN". they chered and swan jumped for joy but dianna jumped with shock as she was getting lifted up by ajax and snow and getting wet with kisses on her face, and swan was jumping on all his warriors and spraying open the champayne bottles and kissing them, after they'd settled down snow said"hey warlord i hope you like your suprise and your new hangout"
"i love it and i am so proud at what you have made of this place boy's and thank you snow for being the warlord and leading the warriors to victory"
"it's ok boss just doing my job, do you want a bottle of jack-d's"
"why not", he laughed as snow was pouring it out for him, he then went to see fletcher and gave him a big- sloppy kiss and then rem seen his chance to tell swan the truth,
"swan i would like to tell you something"
"ok what is it my little-man?
"well you know the fire fletcher was in it and champ had to rescue him from  it but dont worry fletcher didint have a mark on him but champ broke his leg but he's well on the road to recoverey", rem was expecting swan to hit the roof but swan said"why didnt you tell me this before?"
"i dotn know i thought you would hate me and hiut me"
"no i meen i am a bit mad but it'll wear off and plus i would never do that to you, come here give me a hug". rembrandt was so happy and gave him a hug, i was also so glad he'd hadnt punched him one too!!

Swan decided to make a speech and he said proudly"ok warriors as you know i have been on a honey-moon with my beautiful wife dianna(he pointed to her and everyone cheered and she smiled) and i have dearly misse youse i have missed the sounds of youse arguing but im back now and i am one proud warlord and thank's to both edge and masia for coming out here hope it werent to much trouble for youse and please enjoy the cool scenery", masia and edge nodded pleasurably. then once it reached ten everyone was either crashed out,dancing or watching t.v with him and di who was holding fletcher in her ar's asleep. swan looked around and loved what he saw champ and fletcher dancing. ajax snogging the warriors crashed out and drunk and he thought to himslef' ya know what all my life and since i have joined this gang i have been wondering what the true meaning of life is and ive been trying to think it must not be in the direction him heading but really the meaning of life is what you make it to be for me it's to have a wife, a kid and some wonderful,manly brother's to be with for as long time yet, THE WARRIORS A GOOD-REAL GOOD!!

Ok dudes this is the end of the whole series of the warriors-a love story and i just want you to nkow i have loved every minute of writing this fan-fic and i hoped you have enjoyed this different experince to the warriors lives and also thank's to everyone for beliving in me and for being patient with me!! i want you to know i will be having a bit of a break from writing but i will still keep posting on the forum and soon i'll probs be back with a new fan-fic but thank you for everything guy's love ya's, peace out bopper's and you deserve a round of applause for all you have helped me with and hoped you enjoyed the ending, adios bopper's!! :D :D 8) :lol:

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Great =]

Sad to see it finish but I'm sure you (we?) will do some more great stuff.

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thank you jack i cant thank you enough for that comment what really means alot to me, oh and yeah guy's if you wanted to know me and jack :D are gonna continue ower collabaration when i was a moonrunner! :D

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ill take 10 binded copies please

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sad to see it all over, wish it was a little longer
i have a reason, so there fore i am not a rebel without a cause

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sure there'll be some more
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...And there we go. It was a nice ending, wrapped everything up well, and I give you props not just for writing a good story, but for well, just keeping it up, not giving  up, and keeping the writing good throughout. Like wargod said before me, it is a shame to see this over, but hey, I'm sure When I Was a Moonrunner and whatever else you choose to write after this will be good.

Good job, lady warrior.  8)

Oh, and I notice you commented on my new story. Thanks for that, I'm here returning the comment and will go check out the story and and union_jack are doing now. Thanks again, hope you enjoy the story.  :)

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:D aww your too kind dud and your stories are alway's cool 8). it's a real honour to have you as a friend and the rest of my good friends on this site coz youse all just get along with me!! :D

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