Hi guys im back this is goin to be about the warriors love story and it will be somethin like what space-toaster and kiss the rain do,i just want to say what an insperation some of ppls storys are well hope you enjoy it,this is the beginging!!
chapter one
It had been 12months since the night of the conclave,since the warriors rep got upped,since cleon had died and ajax got jailed.swan was sitting on the matted couch,he was watching the t.v,the warriors now had 230 recruits all protecting coney like a mother protects her child,swan heard a CRASH he looked down looking at the gym area and saw rembrandt and cowboy viciously fighting swan yelled"hey guys man why ya fighting and for the hundreth time rembrandt stop it with the yo,mamma jokes ya know it upsets cowboy...and thats final". rembrandt and cowboy gazed up and said together"sorry warlord" then after that they played cards!
sunddenly cochise burst thru the door...and you know what that spells t-r-o-u-b-l-e, cochise was exausted but he still had the energy to say"swan mercy she got shot"
"what iiiss she ookay,what haapened"swan said struggling to speak,
"she was walkin down the street with me when all of a sudden,this thug came and shot her for nothin and i tried to catch him but he was to fast...
the warriors-a love story chapter one
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the lady warrior
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Re: the warriors-a love story chapter one
WHATS HAPPENS NEXT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT.......OMG HURRY UP AND TELL ME WHAT HAPPENS NEXT I LIKE THIS STORY AREADY I HOPE SWAN HUNTS DOWN THE GUY AND TRASHES HIM
i have a reason, so there fore i am not a rebel without a cause
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the lady warrior
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i will continue chapter one as you wished thanks alot for the comment 
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this continuing from were i left off and this is still chapter one!!
swan called for cowboy and rembrandt to come with them to get mercy,they ran down the street and cochise said"here she is i think shes in a bad way" rem and cowboy just stared at the bloody,wounded body lying on the boardwalk near the beach. swan ran to her and cradled her in his arms crying,he said"why did this have to happen to me,come on hang on in there your gonna be fine sweetheart,we gonna get you to a hospital" then she spoke her last words"i-i llove you sswa-n" swan saw that she was gone "noooooooooo my baby,wake-up wake-up" rembrandt started to cry and said"shes gone,i hope shes in a better place" cochise thought it was all his fault and said sadly"im sorry man i tried to help...its all my fault....a shud of stopped that thug but i cudnt,i just...im sorry man" swan got up with blood all over him and siad" its not your fault bro but i know one things for sure im goin to get the asshole who did this"
after that someone phoned the police so all the rest of the warriors were told to go inside the hangout and not come out and cochise,rembrandt,cowboy and swan changed into peddy clothes so that the police didnt lock them up, the police qeustioned them all and sent her to get checked out. the police told swan her body wud be realised to him in 3 months time. after that swan just drank his sorrows away that nite and cochise felt guilty.snow the secound in command told the warriors to leave swan to mourn and drow his sorrows,so they did! the next day swan woke up and he felt like shit,cochise and snow were the only ppl in the hangout he then asked cochise what the thug looked like,
"er well he was african-american with pimp clothes on but he werent a bopper becos i was from harlem and i know what they look like off by heart,and he had a fro,and he had a scar on the left side of his face"! then it clicked in his mind who it was it was his worst rival from when he was back in high-school his name was scar-swan had once burned down his house with all scars drugs in becos he was a drug-dealer, and they had just been rivals for ever...he knew exactly where to find him!!
that was the other part of my first chapter hope you enjoyed it!! post your comments thanx boppers adios 
swan called for cowboy and rembrandt to come with them to get mercy,they ran down the street and cochise said"here she is i think shes in a bad way" rem and cowboy just stared at the bloody,wounded body lying on the boardwalk near the beach. swan ran to her and cradled her in his arms crying,he said"why did this have to happen to me,come on hang on in there your gonna be fine sweetheart,we gonna get you to a hospital" then she spoke her last words"i-i llove you sswa-n" swan saw that she was gone "noooooooooo my baby,wake-up wake-up" rembrandt started to cry and said"shes gone,i hope shes in a better place" cochise thought it was all his fault and said sadly"im sorry man i tried to help...its all my fault....a shud of stopped that thug but i cudnt,i just...im sorry man" swan got up with blood all over him and siad" its not your fault bro but i know one things for sure im goin to get the asshole who did this"
after that someone phoned the police so all the rest of the warriors were told to go inside the hangout and not come out and cochise,rembrandt,cowboy and swan changed into peddy clothes so that the police didnt lock them up, the police qeustioned them all and sent her to get checked out. the police told swan her body wud be realised to him in 3 months time. after that swan just drank his sorrows away that nite and cochise felt guilty.snow the secound in command told the warriors to leave swan to mourn and drow his sorrows,so they did! the next day swan woke up and he felt like shit,cochise and snow were the only ppl in the hangout he then asked cochise what the thug looked like,
"er well he was african-american with pimp clothes on but he werent a bopper becos i was from harlem and i know what they look like off by heart,and he had a fro,and he had a scar on the left side of his face"! then it clicked in his mind who it was it was his worst rival from when he was back in high-school his name was scar-swan had once burned down his house with all scars drugs in becos he was a drug-dealer, and they had just been rivals for ever...he knew exactly where to find him!!
that was the other part of my first chapter hope you enjoyed it!! post your comments thanx boppers adios
Re: the warriors-a love story chapter one
another good pice of work
i have a reason, so there fore i am not a rebel without a cause