The Sarecens Newbloods, PLEASE READ! NEW CHAPTER!

[warrior9721]

I stood at the back of the alleyway waiting for edge to come, he said this was my last test...400. I needed 400 $ by midnight, or i wasn't a Sarecen. Next to me was, Joker, a long time friend. "Final Test" said Edge as he walked back in. "Teamwork, and...Money-makin', Because it's Saturday the 3rd, every JSB in town has thier compitions goin', everyone. It's 9:00 PM, get the money by midnight, meet here. Got it?"
"got it!" Joker replied swiftly.
"Don't draw any pigs back here, If you do, I don't know ya'...Got it Tooth-pick?" he asked me.
First i squinted, then said "Got it"

Chapter 1

"Lets go, man." Joker egged me on as we stood in front of an old-lady sleeping on a bench, her purse at the side of her. "What makes you think I'll do it?" I asked
"It ain't that hard, grab it." Joker ordered
"Joke, You ain't the boss of me." I said
"Sure, grab it." he said again.
I reached forward and silently took the purse's handle, she didn't awake. I pulled it and got it from her hands. "Ha! I knew you could!" Joker laughed.
"Hey, kid, whadda' ya'...You little f***!" a cop yelled.
"Crap, pigs!" Joker yelled, he took off. I followed behind. I tried to hurry up but the purse was at least three pounds dragging me down. Suddenly, I was pulled back, the cop had got his grubby hands on the purse. "Not today, kid!" he yelled as he pulled. he was too strong i lifted my leg and kicked randomly, After the third time, the man fell to the ground, His knee-cap was probably broken.
"Attention all units, 13-64, punk on the loose! 3rd Street!"
"F***!" i yelled in the air, I kicked him one more time in the knee, then ran into an alley.
"Joker, where are you?" i asked myself, he was always a deserter.
I ran a couple blocks into the alley, it was all bums chatting over a fire. I thought i had lost them until a siren rang in the distance. I scared me, I ducked behind a crate...After at least ten minutes no cops showed up.
I loosened the purse handle and put it on like a back-pack.

All comments are welcome. Bad or good, I will add more soon!

[Luther828]

That's a really good story! Can't wait for the next chapter!

One point that you could take into future stories is that you should take more time in checking over your story. There was a few grammar mistakes.

Keep up the good work!

[ajax the warrior]

Preety good story mate keep up the good work i enjoyed your story cant wait for the next chapter.

[The Swan]

Waiting for the New Chapetr Man!!! Good Work!!!
I just like The Saracens and I like this Story!!!

[warrior9721]

From there, I didn't know where Joker was, where Edge was...because the cops are probably looking for someone in a thin black and white tank top, or how many cops were chasing me.
i opened the purse silently, not even the bums, who were drunk out of thier shoes heard me.
I looked in,
It was just an empty pill case, Sunglasses, a half-eaten, half-rotten ham sandwhich with cheese, and a tiny leather wallet.
I opened the wallet,
It was a drivers licnece for a...Maria Smith, Age: 67
I threw it in the dumpster and kept digging into it,
it was mostly receets, this lady saved everything!
Finally, a wad of cash was rubber-banned together, I swiped it off and rubbed my fingers through it,
a twenty,
a fifty,
a one.
Great, 71.00$ after 45 minutes.
I did the same with the purse, in the dumpster. only Maria...who ever that was, was gonna' want that s*** she loaded into it.
I finnaly gained stregth to get up and walk to the street, it was empty...but too quiet. Joker had to be somewhere, i was going to find out where...where?
I walked down and passed many srtip and disco clubs, the tehcno-pop music  burst from inside, i wouldn't be suprised if joker was in there...he was really in to staying up all night, dancing, immpressing women, dropping pills, drinking, useing those women as toys, basicly. Then he repeats the next friday if edge doesn't have him on patrol....me? i only have one life and i'm not gonna'...relax. I'm gonna' build my name...Tooth-pick, soon to be top sarecen!
Suddenly, JSBs came out of an alley, if joker were here, they'd butt out, but just me?
I tried to hide behind a trash-can outside of: iggy disco. It looked like they were regrouping, and leaving until, the little rat fink saw me.
"Hey!" he yelled, i got up, if i ran i'd be dead, so i played it cool.
"What you doin' here on the 3rd?" the rich kid with the bushy flat-top and a switchblade said to me.
"Nothin', big turn out tonight, lots'a'guys can get wrecked...thought i'd so some mucle." my hands were cold.
"oh, that so?...you know you on our turf Sarecen? Ever since that s*** with getting us arrested, no more chances!" he said biting down his teeth.
"I know i am, you see me piecin'? flexing? all i'm doin' is earnin' a name."
"do it in your territory, boy."
"I ain't a boy!" i yelled.
"Shut up, i tell YOU what to do....You give me that top, and I'll be fine...no harm."
i shook my head,
"OR, i can get my boys to lay into you, after a few kicks, we'll have the shirt, anyways...nothin' to lose!"
"You forgot somethin', d***-wad."
"oh, did i? what was that?"
"Never fall for this!" i yelled, i kicked him square in the stomach, his body fell to the concrete, the others watched.
"What a....what you doin'...go on get 'em!" he struggled up.
The others clicked thier pipes aganst thier hands and walked towards me.
I ran in the other direction as quick as possible, I tried to at least.
"Hold it!" i heard a yell in front of me, Joker! I ran behind him, he had his hand out.
"What's a matter, sissy? You gonna' rumble?" the JSB egged Joker on, who had his other hand behind his back.
"What you Sarecen punks gonna' do but wus out?" the other called.
"I'm warnin' you two, get the f*** outta' here and get some REAL brawlers, you ain't s***!"
the men's faces turned red,
"least' we ain't just new-bloods!" he yelled, and knuckle-touched with his friend.
"okay, you asked for it.." Joker said silently,
he pulled out, a gun? from his back pocket and aimed it at one of them, cocked it, "BAM!"...400 just became hard.