The warrior jacko

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rob14
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The warrior jacko

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The warrior Jacko

Jacko waited nervouslyat the door ,he remembered the advice his older brother cowboy had
given him as he left the house 'remember that this girls upper class compared to us so wear
your best clothes and god please dont let her find out that your in the warriors , we raided
her dads store the otherday.
A girl came to the door she was called emma she was quite thin with blondy brown hair just
past her shoulders and blue eyes and a nice face .She wasnt as hot as Jackos mates
girlfriends but then she was a nice girl unlike them. She said 'hey' softly and linked
arms with Jack and walked off with him towards east coney. They stayed at a pizza
parlour until 11 oclock and then started to make there way back home when a
destroyer snatched her handbag  Jack immediately went after him and the destroyer
seeing Jacko hot on his heels dropped the handbag and ran off into the back alleys.
Jack walked back to Emma who was now crying so he picked her up and carried her
home while she fell asleep. When they got back all they could hear was shouting from
emmas parents.I wish they would stop shouting'emma said
Jacko offered for her to come back to his and stay there because onlii cowboy is there
he wont mind hes probably at his girlfriends blind drunk anyway.So they went back to
his house and talked fo abit then emma pulled his arm round her and they both fell asleep

part 2 tomorow

or maybe even later today depends if i have time

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Part 2

‘So how did your little date go last night? ‘ Cowboy asked as him and jacko were having breakfast

‘pretty’ good Jack replied ‘ran into a couple of Destroyers, no problem though’

20mins later…

Jacko and Cowboy were walking down towards the hangout with Vermin and Cochise when they came in sight of it they saw three Orphans climbing out of the window with money stuffed into their pockets
The four warriors immediately started chasing them down towards the train station and by the time they had got there the train was already leaving
‘what do we do now’ gasped cowboy
‘we wait and then get the next train’ Jacko said calmly
A little while later and they were on their way to Tremont  deciding what to do when they  arrived
All four of them stepped onto the platform and immediately found 3 orphans and made quick work of them and searched them for any of the stolen money which none of them had.
They headed for a small bar where some orphans were just getting thrown out for being under age. They saw the warriors and ran  towards an alley and then down through a park until they were stopped by a metal gate and were shortly tackled and pinned against a wall.
‘wheres our money’ shouted cowboy
‘At our hangout to the left if you go out of this park’ said an orphan
‘that was easy’ jacko said ‘right lets goget our money back!’

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Its alright for someones first fan fiction good work.
Im a little teapot short and stout

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