starting to write a story

[New Jersey Warrior]

hey guys i'm starting to write a non-warriors related gang novel. there is swearing in it. and lots of it. so if i put a link to it {it's on word} could i still get banned for swearing?

[New Jersey Warrior]

So mods would i get banned for swearing, and [1] racial remark.

[GramercyRiff99]

I believe there is a sort of unwritten rule that, in the Fan Fiction section, blanking out swears with stars and using racial remarks is tolerated, but only if you use them in a story for the purpose of making it more real.

For example, if in your story, there is a nazi gang that swears and uses racial slurs, you probably are fine with that. However, if someone writes a story and you respond by swearing at them and telling them it sucks, yes, you will be banned.

That's the answer I got when I asked this question during the great purge, so I assume it's still in effect.

[New Jersey Warrior]

how do i get a link to word posted but without posting the story online???

[ajax the warrior]

I think there is a limit of how much swearing you can do in a fan fiction i would not do too much in it though.

[New Jersey Warrior]

there are 3 pgs of actual story, 10 pgs total. and there are 15 swears.

[New Jersey Warrior]

well here ya go guys here is THE WOLVES.




enjoy.











WRITTEN BY: CHRISTOPHER ERNST



COPYRIGHT JAN. 28 2008




















INSPIRATIONS

GOD
MY MOM
MY DAD
MY UNCLE
MY GRANDPA
MY GRANDMA’S
MY GREAT Aunt Maureen {who has told me of her first and second hand experiences of gang culture and warfare of the 60’s in New York}
MY FRIENDS
S.E.HINTON
MARK TARRANT
KEVIN SMITH
GEORGE LUCAS
MY BIG BROTHER



THE EVENTS IN THIS STORY ARE FICTIONAL.


ANY RACIST REMARKS IN THE BOOK ARE NOT THE VIEWS OR PERSPECTIVES OF THE AUTHOR. THEY ARE SIMPLY PUT THERE TO
MAKE THE STORY SEEM
REALISTIC AND KEEP IT FLOWING.

































LONG BEACH ISLAND, NEW JERSEY.                                                                          APRIL 15 INSIDE THE WOLVES CLUBHOUSE. 


“NO DAMMIT. WERE NOT GOING TO WAR WITH THE F&CKING JERSEY DEVILS.â€

[Vermin16]

The swearing seems too excessive for only a small amount of story but this can still turn out good, just cut back a little.

[New Jersey Warrior]

The swearing seems too excessive for only a small amount of story but this can still turn out good, just cut back a little.

Ya i know vermin 16. its a habit, cause i almost always swear a real lot in my stories.

[New Jersey Warrior]

We walked down the isles until we got to isle 5, the tool isle. I grabbed up a hatchet, a few saws, nails, some knives, hammers, a fire extingusher, and some wood.I walked to the counter with Shift and Claw. "Here ya go J-Paper, this is everything. Now can you bag up everything." I said to J-Paper. "Sure thing Fang, and no charge as usual. Have a nice day." J-Paper said to me with a smile. "Ya well take it easy JP." I said. We walked back to the hangout with all the new supplies. "YO, Fang what's with all the new home improvement stuff, man." said Shift. "Well all of your B!tchin made me realize that we need to be prepared for the very worst that could possibly happen. So we're gonna start repairing the clubhouse." I told him. "oh, okay. Well what're the knives and fire extinguisher for" Asked Shift. "The fire extinguisher is obviously in case of a fire retard, and the knives are a start to keep building up a weapons stash in the clubhouse, in case of emergency." I told Shift. They got working on the task I had just assinged them.  It took about 3 days for them to finish. But boy did it look great. 8)


sorry for the shortness guys trying my best here

[ajax the warrior]

Good work for having ago i think its alright i remember doing my first fan fiction i was nervous aswell but anyway good work new jersey warrior keep up the good work.

[New Jersey Warrior]

here is the entire story from begining to as wrote so far. its got lots and lots and curses. and i don't wanna git banned so here is a link to microsoft word.