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Third chapter is in the works, I promise that, my brothers and sisters. Sadly, I gotta bop my way through finishing a History of Moving Image essay for Thursday. After that I just have to do a presentation on the 13th of December, so I'll have plenty more time for writing.

Warrior's promise.

Chapter Two * The Knockdowns were filled with spite. Some upstart little clique had totally wrecked their squad in Rockaway Beach. Their leader, Eoin, paced up and down in the playground outside Belle Harbour School, where even the teachers were scared to go. About six other Knockdowns were sitting...

Great new chapter. Seems that John's position in the gang is solidified, and the tampon bomb was a really creative stroke there. Hope to see more soon.

I don't write about this gang, but I created them so you're free to use them. If anything it helps to fill up the turf a bit quicker. Name: The Slimelights Turf: Gunhill, The Bronx Ethnicity: Mixed white and black Colours: The Slimelights wear faux leather black jackets with two neon stripes down ea...

Holy smeg...a tampon-bomb?! That's genius!  :badgrin: You're a madman after my own heart!

I loved the confrontation there, and I can't wait to see what John does.

Fantastic job so far. The chapters are short, which is good when it's on the net when you consider that you can't just slip in a bookmark at the sentence you were on before. I like the way the plot is quickly picking up and it looks like things are getting intense. I can't wait to see more! 

I have to say I'm a bit disappointed at the lack of reviews, considering how well thought of I've been told I am as a writer. With the story completed, I was expecting more responses, and if it's because I spent so long doing it, then I'm sorry - college/uni, job-hunting and working on my novel have...

Great start, jumping right into the action there. It's rather well written and has a lot of potential, so don't make us wait too long for part two. By the way, that's a very creative gang name. 

Chapter Five * Six men and four women were relaxing in the cool shade of an underpass. In their black shirts and cowboy boots, the men were easily recognisable as the Nightriders. Their leader, who was known as Randy, had his white Stetson tilted back on his head, cowpoke-style. Hanging around his ...

Thanks. I just realised a made slight error, as the Warriors weren't around in 1977, so I made a slight change to the previous chapter.

Chapter Four * The lighthouse was now a clubhouse. It sat on the edge of Rockaway Beach, with the beautiful blue sea on one side, and the mighty city of New York on the other. Raven had spray-painted ‘ROADMASTERS’ in yellow and brown across its otherwise white surface. Inside, the many floors o...

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Sorry I disappeared, I had a lot of stuff going on and it led to me just forgetting about this place. Have no fear though, because Roadmasters chapter 3 is in the works now.